Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung tốt, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý tưởng và sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể thêm từ nối như "because" hoặc "as" để liên kết các ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially love colorful flowers like yellow and pink roses because they are bright and always lift my mood. Moreover, many women appreciate flowers as they symbolize beauty and happiness.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như chia động từ cho đúng ("she buys" thay vì "she buy"). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn, ví dụ "and now" hoặc "so".

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. That is my mother. When she was younger, she usually planted a lot of flowers in her garden, and now as she gets older, she buys flowers every week, so our house is always full of flowers.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "full of colorful flowers" thay vì "full with colorful". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng từ nối hợp lý.

Ejemplo: No, as I live in Hanoi, which is a big city, we don't have many gardens with flowers. Therefore, we usually buy flowers from flower shops or supermarkets. I often buy flowers, so my house is always full of colorful flowers.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung tốt, nhưng nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như "you know" trong bài thi. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I used to take a lot of photos of flowers when I was younger because I loved wandering in the park near my house looking for beautiful flowers. However, now that I have two children, I am too busy with them, so I don't have much time to take pictures when I go to the park.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "Teachers' Day" thay vì "Teachers Day". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời sẽ tốt hơn nếu bạn sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và làm rõ hơn các dịp lễ.

Ejemplo: Oh yes, they do. Vietnamese people have many occasions throughout the year to give flowers to each other. For example, International Women's Day on the 8th of March, Vietnamese Women's Day on the 20th of October, as well as Teachers' Day and Mother's Day. People really enjoy presenting flowers on these special days.

× When she was younger she usually planned a lot of flowers in her garden and now as she gets older she buy flowers every week and our house is always full of flowers.

✓ When she was younger she usually planted a lot of flowers in her garden and now as she gets older she buys flowers every week and our house is always full of flowers.

The verb 'buy' should be in the third person singular form 'buys' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Also, 'planned' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'planted' when referring to putting flowers in a garden.

× When she was younger she usually planned a lot of flowers in her garden and now as she gets older she buy flowers every week and our house is always full of flowers.

✓ When she was younger she usually planted a lot of flowers in her garden and now as she gets older she buys flowers every week and our house is always full of flowers.

The verb 'planned' is incorrect in this context; the correct past tense verb is 'planted' when referring to putting flowers in a garden.

× No, as I live in Hanoi, which is a big city, uh, we don't have any chance to see the flowers in the garden, so usually we have to buy flowers from the flower shops or supermarket.

✓ No, as I live in Hanoi, which is a big city, uh, we don't have any chance to see flowers in gardens, so usually we have to buy flowers from flower shops or supermarkets.

The phrase 'the flowers in the garden' is too specific; 'flowers in gardens' is more general and appropriate here. Also, 'the flower shops or supermarket' should be pluralized to 'flower shops or supermarkets' to match the general meaning.

× But I usually buy flowers and my house is always full with colorful.

✓ But I usually buy flowers and my house is always full of color.

The phrase 'full with colorful' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'full of' and 'colorful' is an adjective, so it should be replaced with the noun 'color' to complete the phrase properly.