Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较复杂且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，使表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: I'm not a big fan of flowers, but recently I started growing some plants on my balcony. It is quite fascinating, and I feel relaxed when I see them. So, I think I am gradually beginning to love flowers.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意名词单复数和词序。

Ejemplo: Yes, my grandparents love flowers, or rather, they love plants. They grow many different kinds of plants in their garden, and sometimes I can't even recognize the names of the flowers.

Sugerencia: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子，明确表达禁止种花的原因，并注意冠词和介词的使用。

Ejemplo: No, flowers are not allowed where I live because I live in a small apartment with little space to plant vegetables or flowers. However, I do have a small plant on my balcony.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I'm not interested in them. Instead, I like to take photos of my friends or myself to keep memories.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，句子结构更清晰。

Ejemplo: No, people in my country don't often send flowers because it's not a common practice. Instead, we usually give red envelopes with money during celebrations or greetings.

× Actually I'm not a big fan of flowers, but I recently had grown some plants on my balcony which is quite fascinating sometimes and I feel relaxed when I saw them, so I think I gradually love them.

✓ Actually I'm not a big fan of flowers, but I recently grew some plants on my balcony which is quite fascinating sometimes and I feel relaxed when I see them, so I think I gradually love them.

这里使用了过去完成时态“had grown”，但句子中没有需要强调的过去完成时的时间点，且后文用的是一般现在时“feel”，应使用一般过去时“grew”来表达最近种植的动作。并且“when I saw them”应改为“when I see them”，因为表达的是一种习惯或经常发生的动作，应该用一般现在时。

× They grow a lot of different kinds plants on their garden and I even I I can't even recognize which one is the name of the flowers.

✓ They grow a lot of different kinds of plants in their garden and I can't even recognize the names of the flowers.

“kinds plants”缺少介词“of”，应为“kinds of plants”。“on their garden”应改为“in their garden”，因为“garden”通常用介词“in”。“which one is the name of the flowers”表达不清，应改为“the names of the flowers”，表示花的名称。

× They grow a lot of different kinds plants on their garden and I even I I can't even recognize which one is the name of the flowers.

✓ They grow a lot of different kinds of plants in their garden and I can't even recognize the names of the flowers.

“on their garden”中的介词“on”用错了，正确的介词是“in”，表示在花园里面。

× No, actually they are not allowed of flowers.

✓ No, actually flowers are not allowed.

“are not allowed of flowers”结构错误，正确表达是“flowers are not allowed”，即“花是不被允许的”。

× because I live in a little apartment where where it hasn't so much, so many place to plant the uh, you know, plant the vegetable or flowers.

✓ because I live in a little apartment where there isn't so much, so many place to plant the uh, you know, plant the vegetable or flowers.

“place”应为复数“places”，因为前面用了“so many”，修饰复数名词。

× because I live in a little apartment where where it hasn't so much, so many place to plant the uh, you know, plant the vegetable or flowers.

✓ because I live in a little apartment where there isn't so much, so many places to plant the uh, you know, plant the vegetable or flowers.

“it hasn't”用法错误，表示存在时应使用“There is/are”结构，否定形式为“There isn't/aren't”。

× But I do have a little plant on my balcony.

✓ But I do have a little plant on my balcony.

此句无错误，保持原句。

× Actually, no, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life because it's not my it's not. I'm not interested in it.

✓ Actually, no, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life because I'm not interested in them.

“it's not my it's not”表达不完整且重复，应删去。后面“interested in it”中的“it”应改为复数“them”，因为指的是“flowers”。

× Instead I do like, take photos for my friends or by or for myself to keep up.

✓ Instead I do like to take photos of my friends or for myself to keep up.

“take photos for my friends”应改为“take photos of my friends”，表示拍摄朋友的照片。

× Just keeping the memories between us.

✓ Just keeping the memories between us.

此句为不完整句，应改为完整句，如“I just keep the memories between us.”或“It's just to keep the memories between us.”

× Well, actually, no. In our country, many people don't send flowers to others because we're just not used to it.

✓ Well, actually, no. In our country, many people don't send flowers to others because we're just not used to doing that.

“not used to it”表达不完整，习惯于某事应使用“used to doing something”，这里应补充“doing that”使表达完整。

× Uh, instead, we usually send something like a red envelope to others when celebrating or celebrating to others or greeting greeting to others.

✓ Uh, instead, we usually send something like a red envelope to others when celebrating or greeting them.

“celebrating to others”及“greeting greeting to others”用法错误，动词后不加介词“to”，应直接加宾语“them”。

× Uh, instead, we usually send something like a red envelope to others when celebrating or celebrating to others or greeting greeting to others.

✓ Uh, instead, we usually send something like a red envelope to others when celebrating or greeting them.

重复“celebrating”且“greeting greeting”错误，应简化为“celebrating or greeting them”。

× We usually send money.

✓ We usually send money.

此句无错误，保持原句。