Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, 'flowers makes' should be 'flowers make', and 'the IT makes the environment brighter' is unclear and redundant. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely love flowers because they make our environment more beautiful and vibrant. I started growing flowers when I was a child, and I still have a few plants at home, so my love for flowers has continued.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, instead of 'so every day she wanted to spend some time with the uh at the garden', say 'she used to spend time in the garden every day'. Also, complete your sentences fully.

Ejemplo: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers. She used to live with us and spent time in the garden every day. She enjoyed growing different flower plants, and I often helped her maintain the garden.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and correct small errors such as 'no much space' which should be 'not much space'. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: No, there aren't many flowers where I live. However, there is a park nearby that is full of colourful flowers during spring. At home, I don't have much space to grow flowers, but I do have a few plants.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. For example, 'different flowers and different varieties of flowers with different colours' is repetitive. Also, avoid sentence fragments like 'there I That garden'. Use linking words to improve flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Last weekend, I visited a nearby garden that was full of colourful and diverse flowers. I took several photographs and really enjoyed the beautiful scenery.

Sugerencia: Complete your sentences and avoid vague phrases like 'It's expression'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide clear explanations.

Ejemplo: In Sri Lanka, sending flowers is quite rare. However, here in Australia, people often send flowers to friends, parents, or partners to show appreciation or celebrate special occasions like birthdays.

× I think flowers makes our environment nicer and the IT makes the environment brighter.

✓ I think flowers make our environment nicer and they make the environment brighter.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes'. Also, 'the IT' is unclear and likely a mistake; replacing it with 'they' refers back to 'flowers' correctly.

× I started growing flowers when I was child and still I have few flower plants at my home so I will definitely love flowers.

✓ I started growing flowers when I was a child and still have a few flower plants at my home, so I definitely love flowers.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'few flower plants' should be 'a few flower plants' to indicate some quantity. 'Will definitely love' is changed to 'definitely love' to match the present state.

× She used to stay at our home, so every day she wanted to spend some time with the uh at the garden.

✓ She used to stay at our home, so every day she wanted to spend some time in the garden.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; 'in the garden' is the correct phrase to indicate location. Also, 'with the uh' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× So she enjoyed growing flower plants and I always help her to maintain her garden.

✓ So she enjoyed growing flower plants and I always helped her to maintain her garden.

The verb tense should be past tense 'helped' to match 'enjoyed' and the past context. 'Always help' is present tense and inconsistent here.

× No, not really, but I have a there's a park close by which is full of flowers these days since it's the spring season, that park is full of different colours and different varieties of flowers.

✓ No, not really, but there is a park close by which is full of flowers these days since it's the spring season. That park is full of different colours and different varieties of flowers.

The phrase 'I have a there's a park' is incorrect. It should be 'there is a park' to correctly introduce the existence of the park.

× But uh, at my home there's no much space to grow flowers, although there are few flower plants.

✓ But at my home there's not much space to grow flowers, although there are a few flower plants.

'No much space' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not much space'. Also, 'there are few flower plants' should be 'there are a few flower plants' to indicate some quantity.

× Yes, definitely. Even last weekend we went to visit a garden close by there I That garden was full of different flowers and different varieties of flowers with different colours.

✓ Yes, definitely. Even last weekend we went to visit a garden close by. That garden was full of different flowers and different varieties with different colours.

The sentence is run-on and confusing. Splitting into two sentences improves clarity. Also, 'different flowers and different varieties of flowers' is repetitive; 'different flowers and different varieties' suffices.

× I took several photographs of flowers and I really enjoyed that scenery.

✓ I took several photographs of flowers and really enjoyed the scenery.

'That scenery' is less natural than 'the scenery' in this context. Also, 'I really enjoyed' can be simplified to 'really enjoyed' for smoother flow.

× Back in Sri Lanka it's very rare, but here in Australia I have seen people sending flowers.

✓ Back in Sri Lanka, it's very rare, but here in Australia, I have seen people sending flowers.

Commas are added after introductory phrases for correct punctuation and clarity.

× Most of the time they send flowers to their friends, parents or maybe to their partner to appreciate them or to wish for something special and even for their birthdays and special occasions.

✓ Most of the time, they send flowers to their friends, parents, or maybe their partner to appreciate them, to wish for something special, or for their birthdays and special occasions.

Commas are added for clarity and to separate items in the list properly. The phrase 'or maybe to their partner' is adjusted to parallel structure.

× It's expression.

✓ It's an expression of appreciation.

The sentence 'It's expression.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'an expression of appreciation' clarifies the meaning.