Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'beautiful outfit' 대신 'beautiful appearance' 또는 'beautiful colors'를 사용하고, 'nice perfume' 대신 'pleasant fragrance'가 더 적절합니다. 문장을 간결하게 정리하고, 중복되는 표현을 줄여야 합니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they have beautiful colors and a pleasant fragrance. Having them in my house makes me feel comfortable and happy.

Sugerencia: 문법 오류가 있고, 문장이 다소 중복됩니다. 'my mom love flowers'는 'my mom loves flowers'로 수정해야 하며, 'purchase the flowers for my mom's'는 'buy flowers for my mom'로 간결하게 표현하세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 자연스럽게 이어주세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, many people I know love flowers. For example, my mom loves them because they are very beautiful. Therefore, I often buy flowers for her, especially on our anniversary.

Sugerencia: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 'we might come'은 문맥에 맞지 않으며, 'planned the flowers for the eco friendly policy'는 'planted many flowers as part of an eco-friendly policy'로 수정해야 합니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 표현하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers in my city because the government has planted them as part of an eco-friendly policy. I can see flowers near my home, which makes me very happy.

Sugerencia: 문법과 표현이 부자연스럽습니다. 'I took a lot of flowers photos'는 'I take a lot of photos of flowers'로 수정하고, 'just the remains things is just the photos'는 'photos are the only things that remain'으로 바꾸세요. 숫자 표현도 명확히 하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I take many photos of flowers in my daily life. Photography is my hobby because I believe photos are the only things that remain as memories. I have about 100,000 pictures on my phone.

Sugerencia: 문장이 중복되고 다소 어색합니다. 'Here in many countries' 대신 'In my country'를 사용하고, 'especially when especially for occasions'는 'especially on occasions'로 간결하게 표현하세요. 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

Ejemplo: In my country, people often send flowers to others, especially on occasions like anniversaries or weddings. It is a great way to express love or appreciation.

× Yes, I love flowers because they have a beautiful outfit and the nice perfume so I love having the flowers in my house and whenever I see them they give.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they have beautiful appearances and nice perfumes, so I love having flowers in my house and whenever I see them, they make me feel comfortable.

'Beautiful outfit' is incorrect when referring to flowers; 'appearance' or 'look' is more appropriate. Also, 'the nice perfume' should be 'nice perfumes' to match plural 'flowers'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Among them, my mom love flowers because they are very beautiful.

✓ Among them, my mom loves flowers because they are very beautiful.

The subject 'my mom' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' to agree in number.

× So I often purchase the flowers for my mom's, especially when we have the anniversary, I give her the flowers.

✓ So I often purchase flowers for my mom, especially when we have an anniversary; I give her flowers.

'My mom's' is incorrect here; it should be 'my mom'. Also, 'the anniversary' should be 'an anniversary' unless a specific one is meant. The sentence is split for clarity.

× Yeah, we might come. My city there are many flowers because the government planned the flowers for the eco friendly policy.

✓ Yeah, in my city, there are many flowers because the government planned flower planting as part of the eco-friendly policy.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'We might come' is unrelated. 'The government planned the flowers' is awkward; 'planned flower planting' is clearer. 'Eco friendly' should be hyphenated as 'eco-friendly'.

× So I can see a lot of flowers among nearly near to my home and it it is very happy to me.

✓ So I can see a lot of flowers near my home, and it makes me very happy.

'Among nearly near to my home' is incorrect; 'near my home' is correct. 'It it is very happy to me' is incorrect; 'it makes me very happy' is the proper expression.

× Yeah, but I took a lot of flowers photos in my daily life.

✓ Yeah, I take a lot of photos of flowers in my daily life.

The question is about daily life, so present tense 'take' is appropriate instead of past tense 'took'. Also, 'flowers photos' should be 'photos of flowers'.

× Actually I have a hobby about taking a photo because I think just the remains things is just the photos.

✓ Actually, I have a hobby of taking photos because I think the only things that remain are photos.

'Hobby about' should be 'hobby of'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× So I have a lot of photos in my cell phone, about 100,000 thousand pictures.

✓ So I have a lot of photos on my cell phone, about 100,000 pictures.

'100,000 thousand' is incorrect and redundant; it should be '100,000'. Also, 'in my cell phone' should be 'on my cell phone'.

× Here in many countries, people often send flowers to others, especially when especially for occasions like anniversary or weddings, and it is a great way to express love or appreciation for someone.

✓ In many countries, people often send flowers to others, especially for occasions like anniversaries or weddings, and it is a great way to express love or appreciation for someone.

'Here in many countries' is incorrect; 'In many countries' is correct. 'Especially when especially for' is redundant; 'especially for' suffices. 'Anniversary' should be plural 'anniversaries'.