Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is heartfelt but a bit unclear and redundant. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. One time, my uncle gave me a bouquet of roses, which made me very happy. That moment remains one of the best in my life.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but some sentences are incomplete or awkward. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ejemplo: I have a friend named Rosie who is a huge fan of flowers. She feels happy and cherished whenever someone gives her a flower. Moreover, she enjoys spending time in gardens filled with various types of flowers.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and be more specific about the types of flowers. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: There are not many flowers around where I live, but my mother, who enjoys gardening, has planted some in our backyard. For example, we have roses and marigolds among other flowers.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by combining sentences and using linking words for better flow. Avoid short, choppy sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't usually take photos of flowers in my daily life because I am busy with my activities. However, I do take pictures of flowers during special family occasions.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some vocabulary errors and unclear phrases. Use correct words and be more specific. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, in Nepal, people often send flowers to express love and gratitude. Flowers are also important in major festivals such as Diwali, Raksha Bandhan, and others. They have been a symbol of love for many years and are essential in our culture.

× I especially love rose because the ones the one time uncle gave me a bouquet of rose, I was really happy and that was one of the best moments of my life.

✓ I especially love roses because one time my uncle gave me a bouquet of roses, I was really happy and that was one of the best moments of my life.

The word 'rose' should be plural 'roses' when referring to more than one flower. Also, 'the ones the one time uncle' is incorrect and should be 'one time my uncle'. This correction ensures proper singular/plural usage and sentence clarity.

× She loves whenever somebody gift her a flower.

✓ She loves it whenever somebody gifts her a flower.

The verb 'gift' needs to be in third person singular form 'gifts' to agree with 'somebody'. Also, 'loves whenever somebody gift her' is awkward; adding 'it' after 'loves' improves sentence structure.

× Whenever she's around in a garden.

✓ Whenever she's around a garden.

The phrase 'around in a garden' is incorrect; 'around a garden' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, this is a sentence fragment and should be connected to the previous or next sentence for completeness.

× She loves hanging around the place that are filled with different varieties of flowers.

✓ She loves hanging around places that are filled with different varieties of flowers.

'Place' should be plural 'places' to agree with 'are filled'. This corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× I would say there are not a lot of flowers already, but there are some kind of flowers in my home my mom had.

✓ I would say there are not a lot of flowers already, but there are some kinds of flowers at my home that my mom has.

'Some kind of flowers' should be 'some kinds of flowers' to match plural 'flowers'. Also, 'in my home my mom had' is awkward; 'at my home that my mom has' is clearer.

× My mom is also of fond of a bit agriculture.

✓ My mom is also fond of a bit of agriculture.

The phrase 'of fond of' is incorrect; it should be 'fond of'. Also, 'a bit agriculture' should be 'a bit of agriculture' to be grammatically correct.

× There is rose, Marigold and different.

✓ There are roses, marigolds, and different kinds of flowers.

'There is' should be 'There are' to agree with plural nouns. Also, 'rose' and 'Marigold' should be pluralized, and 'different' is incomplete; 'different kinds of flowers' clarifies the meaning.

× As I'm busy in my daily activities, I really don't have particular time for taking photos.

✓ As I'm busy with my daily activities, I really don't have particular time for taking photos.

The correct preposition is 'busy with' not 'busy in'. This correction improves naturalness and correctness.

× I really don't have particular time for taking photos.

✓ I really don't have any particular time for taking photos.

'Particular time' needs a quantifier like 'any' to be grammatically correct in negative sentences.

× But I do take photos of flowers on special occasions where our families are together.

✓ But I do take photos of flowers on special occasions when our family is together.

'Where' is incorrect for time; 'when' should be used. Also, 'families' should be singular 'family' to match the context.

× In my country Nepal, flowers are also used in big orgasms such as Dihar, Rakhi, Bandhan.

✓ In my country Nepal, flowers are also used in big occasions such as Dihar, Rakhi, Bandhan.

The word 'orgasms' is a typo and should be 'occasions'. This correction fixes the spelling and meaning.

× It has been a symbol of love for the ages and flower is really essentially in our country.

✓ It has been a symbol of love for the ages and flowers are really essential in our country.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match context. 'Essentially' is an adverb but 'essential' (adjective) is needed here. Also, 'are' is needed for plural subject.