Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, for example, 'enlights' should be 'enlightens'. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because their beautiful colours and variety always brighten my mood and make any occasion feel special.

Sugerencia: Focus on subject-verb agreement, for example, 'people who loves' should be 'people who love'. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific details.

Ejemplo: Yes, many people around me love flowers, especially my mother. She enjoys various flowers and their fragrances, and she always brings roses to family celebrations because they are her favourite.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms, for example, 'my mother have' should be 'my mother has'. Reduce filler words and make your sentences more concise. Use linking words like 'because' and 'which' effectively to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my mother has a hobby of gardening. She has planted a wide variety of flowers on our balcony, which creates a joyful and peaceful atmosphere at home.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence structure and clarity. For example, 'I'm a kind of a photogenic person' is unclear; you might say 'I enjoy photography'. Avoid run-on sentences by breaking ideas into shorter sentences. Use linking words like 'so' and 'because' properly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers from different angles because I like photography. This helps me capture various flowers to show my mother, who loves gardening, and I can suggest ideas about what to plant.

Sugerencia: Use correct expressions and grammar, for example, 'one of the gesture' should be 'a common gesture'. Avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words like 'for example' correctly and provide specific reasons or feelings.

Ejemplo: Yes, giving flowers is a common gesture in my country to celebrate others' successes and happy moments. For example, when I passed my exam last week, my sister gave me a bunch of flowers, which made me very happy and relaxed.

× Whenever I see any flowers I feel so excited and it enlights my mood a lot because uh, of the umm, beautiful colors and various uh, varieties of flowers, it makes it more special event.

✓ Whenever I see any flowers I feel so excited and it enlightens my mood a lot because of the beautiful colors and various varieties of flowers, it makes it a more special event.

The verb 'enlights' is incorrect; the correct third person singular present tense form is 'enlightens'. Also, 'makes it more special event' is missing an article before 'more special event'. It should be 'makes it a more special event'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper article usage.

× Yes, there are many people around me who loves flower, but uh, the only person who love flowers a lot is my mother because she's the person who loves, uh, variety of flowers and their fragrances a lot.

✓ Yes, there are many people around me who love flowers, but the only person who loves flowers a lot is my mother because she's the person who loves a variety of flowers and their fragrances a lot.

The relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'people' which is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context. Additionally, 'variety of flowers' needs an article 'a' before 'variety'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× My mother have planted a wide variety of flowers in our balcony, so it brings joyful environment and a peaceful, uh, surrounding towards our home, uh, which, uh, tends to have a positive vibe.

✓ My mother has planted a wide variety of flowers on our balcony, so it brings a joyful environment and a peaceful surrounding towards our home, which tends to have a positive vibe.

The subject 'My mother' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to 'balcony'. Articles 'a' are needed before 'joyful environment' and 'peaceful surrounding'. These corrections address subject-verb agreement, preposition use, and article usage.

× Yes, I love to take photos of flower in various angles because I'm a kind of a photogenic person and this helps me a lot to capture the wide variety of flowers in my camera so I can show those to my mother who loves planting and example I give her some ideas related to that what to plant or not.

✓ Yes, I love to take photos of flowers from various angles because I'm a kind of photogenic person and this helps me a lot to capture the wide variety of flowers with my camera so I can show those to my mother who loves planting and, for example, I give her some ideas related to what to plant or not.

'Photos of flower' should be 'photos of flowers' to match plural form. 'In various angles' should be 'from various angles' for correct preposition. 'My camera' is better expressed as 'with my camera'. Added commas and corrected sentence structure for clarity. These corrections fix pluralization, preposition use, and sentence clarity.

× Yes, offering flowers is one of the gesture. In my country, people like to offer flowers to enjoy other success and happy moments.

✓ Yes, offering flowers is one of the gestures. In my country, people like to offer flowers to celebrate others' success and happy moments.

'One of the gesture' should be 'one of the gestures' to match plural form. 'To enjoy other success' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to celebrate others' success'. Also, possessive form 'others'' is needed. These corrections address pluralization, preposition use, and possessive form.

× For instance, last week I passed in my exam and my sister bought me a bunch of flowers which enlightened me a lot and unwind me uh.

✓ For instance, last week I passed my exam and my sister bought me a bunch of flowers which enlightened me a lot and unwound me.

'Passed in my exam' should be 'passed my exam' as 'pass' does not require 'in' here. 'Unwind me' is incorrect in past tense context; it should be 'unwound me'. These corrections fix preposition use and past tense verb form.