Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally good but could be improved by correcting grammatical errors and making the sentences more concise. For example, "there's anyone who don't like" should be "there's anyone who doesn't like". Also, avoid redundancy such as "instantly lift people's mood up"; "lift people's mood" is sufficient. Try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. I believe almost everyone likes them because they come in a variety of bright colours that can lift people's moods. Moreover, many flowers have a lovely fragrance, which makes being around them even more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better sentence structure. For example, "put them in the bottles" is incorrect; it should be "put them in vases". Also, try to use linking words like "so" or "which" to connect ideas more naturally. Avoid repeating similar ideas and keep your answer concise.

Ejemplo: My mum loves flowers as well. She often buys fresh ones from supermarkets or flower shops and places them in vases on the kitchen table or in the living room, which helps me feel more relaxed.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good and relevant, but you could improve coherence by using linking words such as "for example" or "such as" more effectively. Also, try to add a concluding sentence to summarise your point. Avoid starting sentences with conjunctions like "Because"; instead, restructure the sentence for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. As a university student living in a dormitory, my roommates and I often plant various flowers on the balcony, such as sunflowers. These flowers brighten up our living space and create a more relaxing atmosphere overall.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by correcting tense consistency and using linking words. For example, "Yes, I did" should be "Yes, I do" or "Yes, I have". Also, try to connect your ideas with words like "because" or "as" to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do take photos of flowers because my mum gave me a new camera for my birthday last year. I enjoy photographing flowers since each one is unique. Capturing their bright colours and delicate shapes helps me appreciate the beauty of nature every day.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains some unclear phrases and vocabulary errors, such as "flowery tree industry" and "flash hours" which seem incorrect. Try to use accurate vocabulary like "floriculture industry" and "fresh flowers". Also, avoid vague terms like "diverse days"; instead, specify occasions. Use linking words to improve coherence and keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, people in my country often send flowers because the floriculture industry is well developed, making fresh flowers easy to buy. Flowers are commonly given on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, or to express feelings like gratitude and sympathy.

× I can't imagine there's anyone who don't like flowers because they come in a variety of bright colors that can instantly lift people's mood up.

✓ I can't imagine there's anyone who doesn't like flowers because they come in a variety of bright colors that can instantly lift people's mood up.

The subject 'anyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× She goes out to the supermarket and flower shops to buy fresh flowers and she would always put them in the bottles on the kitchen table or just in the living room, which makes me feel more relaxed.

✓ She goes out to the supermarket and flower shops to buy fresh flowers and she would always put them in the vases on the kitchen table or just in the living room, which makes me feel more relaxed.

The word 'bottles' is incorrect in this context; flowers are usually placed in 'vases'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and vocabulary.

× Yes, I did, since my mum gave me a new camera for my birthday last year.

✓ Yes, I have, since my mum gave me a new camera for my birthday last year.

The question is about a habitual action in daily life, so present perfect 'have' is more appropriate than simple past 'did' to indicate experience up to now.

× Yes, people in my country often give flowers to others because the flowery tree industry is well developed, making it easy to buy flash hours.

✓ Yes, people in my country often give flowers to others because the flower tree industry is well developed, making it easy to buy fresh flowers.

The phrase 'flash hours' is a typo and should be 'fresh flowers'. Also, 'flowery tree' is incorrect; it should be 'flower tree'. This is a singular and plural issue and vocabulary correction.

× Convenience flowers are commonly given on special occasions, diverse days, anniversaries, or to express emotions such as gratitude and sympathy.

✓ Convenient flowers are commonly given on special occasions, various days, anniversaries, or to express emotions such as gratitude and sympathy.

'Convenience flowers' is incorrect; the adjective should be 'convenient'. Also, 'diverse days' is awkward; 'various days' is more appropriate. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.