Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say "Flowers make me feel refreshed whenever I see them, and I enjoy buying flowers for my friends on special occasions." Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they make me feel refreshed whenever I see them. I often buy flowers for my friends on special occasions to show my appreciation.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and clarity. For example, say "Yes, I know someone who loves flowers. We met during our master's degree studies, and she now owns a flower shop." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I know someone who loves flowers. We met during our master's degree studies, and now she owns a flower shop, which shows her passion for flowers.

Sugerencia: Work on grammar and complete your thoughts clearly. For example, say "No, there aren't many flowers where I live because people plant more trees due to the hot climate in Thailand, which is not suitable for many flowers."

Ejemplo: No, there aren't many flowers where I live because the hot climate in Thailand makes it difficult to grow many types of flowers, so people prefer planting trees instead.

Sugerencia: Focus on correct verb usage and sentence clarity. For example, say "I usually take photos of flowers when I see them on the road or path, and I enjoy posting these pictures on my Instagram account."

Ejemplo: I usually take photos of flowers when I see them on the road or path, and I enjoy sharing these pictures on my Instagram account.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity. For example, say "I don't think sending flowers is very popular in my country. People usually prefer giving gifts like cards or pocket money instead."

Ejemplo: I don't think sending flowers is very popular in my country. Instead, people often give cards or pocket money as gifts.

× Yes I do, the flower make me feel refreshed anytime I saw it and I love to buy the flower to my friend in the occasion.

✓ Yes I do, the flowers make me feel refreshed anytime I see them and I love to buy flowers for my friends on special occasions.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general. 'Make' agrees with plural subject 'flowers'. 'Saw' should be present tense 'see' to match 'anytime'. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers' and 'to my friend' should be 'for my friends' to indicate giving flowers to multiple friends. 'In the occasion' is incorrect; 'on special occasions' is the correct phrase.

× Yes I do, the flower make me feel refreshed anytime I saw it and I love to buy the flower to my friend in the occasion.

✓ Yes I do, the flowers make me feel refreshed anytime I see them and I love to buy flowers for my friends on special occasions.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect when indicating giving something to someone; 'for' is the correct preposition. Also, 'in the occasion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on special occasions'.

× Yes I do, the flower make me feel refreshed anytime I saw it and I love to buy the flower to my friend in the occasion.

✓ Yes I do, the flowers make me feel refreshed anytime I see them and I love to buy flowers for my friends on special occasions.

The verb 'saw' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'see' is appropriate.

× Yes I do, but I'm not close to her much. Umm, we know each other during a master degree study and right now she opened the flower shop.

✓ Yes I do, but I'm not very close to her. Umm, we met each other during a master's degree study and right now she has opened a flower shop.

'Master degree' should be 'master's degree' to indicate possession. 'We know each other during' is incorrect; 'we met each other during' is correct for past event. 'She opened the flower shop' should be 'she has opened a flower shop' to indicate recent action and indefinite article 'a' is needed before 'flower shop'.

× Yes I do, but I'm not close to her much. Umm, we know each other during a master degree study and right now she opened the flower shop.

✓ Yes I do, but I'm not very close to her. Umm, we met each other during a master's degree study and right now she has opened a flower shop.

The phrase 'know each other during' is incorrect; 'met each other during' is the correct expression for past events.

× Yes I do, but I'm not close to her much. Umm, we know each other during a master degree study and right now she opened the flower shop.

✓ Yes I do, but I'm not very close to her. Umm, we met each other during a master's degree study and right now she has opened a flower shop.

The verb 'know' is present tense but the event happened in the past, so past tense 'met' is appropriate. Also, 'she opened' should be present perfect 'she has opened' to indicate recent action.

× No, they are not a lot of flower here. They plant the tree more than the flower because in Thailand is very hot. So it's not, I mean the weather is not appropriate for.

✓ No, there are not a lot of flowers here. They plant trees more than flowers because in Thailand it is very hot. So, I mean, the weather is not appropriate for them.

'A lot of flower' should be 'a lot of flowers' to match plural. 'They plant the tree more than the flower' should be 'They plant trees more than flowers' for plural consistency. 'In Thailand is very hot' needs subject 'it' as 'in Thailand it is very hot'. The sentence ending 'not appropriate for' needs an object, here 'them' referring to flowers.

× No, they are not a lot of flower here. They plant the tree more than the flower because in Thailand is very hot. So it's not, I mean the weather is not appropriate for.

✓ No, there are not a lot of flowers here. They plant trees more than flowers because in Thailand it is very hot. So, I mean, the weather is not appropriate for them.

The phrase 'they are not a lot of flower' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'there are not a lot of flowers' to indicate existence.

× No, they are not a lot of flower here. They plant the tree more than the flower because in Thailand is very hot. So it's not, I mean the weather is not appropriate for.

✓ No, there are not a lot of flowers here. They plant trees more than flowers because in Thailand it is very hot. So, I mean, the weather is not appropriate for them.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used to refer to the existence of flowers; 'there' is the correct pronoun for existence. Also, 'for' needs an object, so 'for them' is necessary to clarify the weather is not appropriate for flowers.

× I usually do take a flower when I met the flower on the road or on the path and I love to poses in my Instagram account.

✓ I usually take photos of flowers when I see them on the road or on the path and I love to pose on my Instagram account.

'Do take a flower' is awkward; 'take photos of flowers' is more natural. 'When I met the flower' should be 'when I see them' to match present habitual action. 'Love to poses' should be 'love to pose' (infinitive form). 'In my Instagram account' should be 'on my Instagram account' as 'on' is the correct preposition for platforms.

× I usually do take a flower when I met the flower on the road or on the path and I love to poses in my Instagram account.

✓ I usually take photos of flowers when I see them on the road or on the path and I love to pose on my Instagram account.

'Met' is past tense but the sentence describes habitual action, so present tense 'see' is appropriate.

× I usually do take a flower when I met the flower on the road or on the path and I love to poses in my Instagram account.

✓ I usually take photos of flowers when I see them on the road or on the path and I love to pose on my Instagram account.

'In my Instagram account' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to social media platforms.

× I usually do take a flower when I met the flower on the road or on the path and I love to poses in my Instagram account.

✓ I usually take photos of flowers when I see them on the road or on the path and I love to pose on my Instagram account.

'A flower' is singular but the context suggests multiple flowers; 'photos of flowers' is more appropriate. Also, 'the flower' should be 'them' to refer back to flowers in plural.

× I don't think it's popular in my country. Umm the people tend to be send the gift like a card. Umm pocket money more than thin the flower.

✓ I don't think it's popular in my country. Umm, people tend to send gifts like cards or pocket money more than flowers.

'Tend to be send' is incorrect; the correct form is 'tend to send' without 'be'. 'The gift like a card' should be plural 'gifts like cards'. 'Thin the flower' is unclear and likely a typo; corrected to 'flowers'.