Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like 'in my miniaturized' which is unclear. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a bit more detail about why you like sunflowers or what you grow.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially sunflowers because they are bright and cheerful. In fact, I grow several flowers along with some fruits and vegetables in my small garden at home.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. For example, 'a great fond of flowers' should be 'very fond of flowers'. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother is very fond of flowers, and because of her influence, I also enjoy gardening. So, we often grow many flowers together in our garden.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains some awkward phrasing and grammar errors. Instead of 'a plethora of', which can sound formal, use simpler words like 'many'. Also, clarify your sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers and trees near my home because it is located far from the town, so the area is very green and natural.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain when and why you take photos.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially in the morning, and share them with my friends in a Snapchat group.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and adding linking words. Also, specify the occasions more clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'many more'.

Ejemplo: Yes, many people in my country send flowers to others during special occasions such as weddings, birthdays, and other celebrations.

× My favorite one is sunflower.

✓ My favorite one is the sunflower.

The noun 'sunflower' is singular and countable, so it requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific type as a favorite. Without the article, the sentence sounds incomplete.

× Moreover, I grow some flowers as well as some fruits and vegetables in my miniaturized.

✓ Moreover, I grow some flowers as well as some fruits and vegetables in my miniature garden.

The word 'miniaturized' is an adjective meaning 'made small' and is incorrectly used here. The intended noun is likely 'miniature garden' or 'miniature farm'. The sentence structure is corrected by replacing 'miniaturized' with 'miniature garden' to make sense.

× Yes, actually she is my mother who's a great fond of flowers.

✓ Yes, actually she is my mother who is a great fan of flowers.

The phrase 'who's a great fond of flowers' is incorrect. 'Fond' is an adjective and needs to be paired with 'of' and a noun. The correct noun is 'fan'. Also, 'who's' (who is) should be expanded for clarity. Hence, 'who is a great fan of flowers' is correct.

× Also she influenced me to indulge in these kind of activities.

✓ Also, she influenced me to indulge in this kind of activity.

The phrase 'these kind of activities' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular and should be paired with 'this' and a singular noun 'activity'. Using 'these' requires 'kinds' plural. The correction uses singular form for agreement.

× So my mother and I grow many flowers in my garden.

✓ So my mother and I grow many flowers in our garden.

Since both the mother and the speaker share the garden, the possessive pronoun should be 'our' instead of 'my' to correctly indicate joint ownership.

× Actually this is a far away from the town so that's why I found a more greenish area.

✓ Actually, this is far away from the town, so that's why I found a greener area.

The phrase 'a far away' is incorrect; 'far away' is an adverbial phrase and does not need an article. Also, 'more greenish' is awkward; 'greener' is the correct comparative adjective form. The sentence is corrected accordingly.

× I have a habit to take some pictures or flowers and send it on my Snapchat group in the morning especially.

✓ I have a habit of taking some pictures of flowers and sending them to my Snapchat group, especially in the morning.

The phrase 'habit to take' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'habit of taking'. Also, 'pictures or flowers' should be 'pictures of flowers'. The pronoun 'it' should be plural 'them' to agree with 'pictures'. The preposition 'on' should be 'to' when referring to sending to a group.

× Some people like to send flowers to others, for example, some celebrations or events like marriages, birthdays and many more.

✓ Some people like to send flowers to others for celebrations or events like marriages, birthdays, and many more.

The phrase 'some celebrations' is awkward here; 'for celebrations' is more natural. Also, the comma before 'for example' is unnecessary, and 'for example' is better omitted or rephrased. The sentence is corrected for clarity and natural usage.