Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify vocabulary and avoid mispronunciations or wrong words. Give a direct topic sentence, then one or two clear supporting details using linking words. Keep under 5 sentences and use appropriate words (e.g., "fragrant", "fresh").

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially for their fragrance and delicate beauty. For example, lilies and roses brighten my living room and instantly create a more relaxing atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Be careful with irrelevant or incorrect words and maintain coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details (what she grows, how often she gardens) and use linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid nonsense phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers the most in my family. She spends several hours every weekend tending her extensive garden, growing roses and marigolds because gardening helps her relax.

Sugerencia: Improve accuracy and word choice; remove hesitations. Provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples of common flowers, using linking words like "for example" or "such as."

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because of the tropical climate. For example, people commonly grow orchids, hibiscus and bougainvillea on their balconies.

Sugerencia: Avoid long run-on sentences and unnecessary repetitions. Give a concise direct response then one specific condition or example. Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly and choose correct verb tenses.

Ejemplo: Not regularly, but I sometimes take photos when I see an especially beautiful display. For instance, I often photograph colorful arrangements in parks or cafés because I like their vivid colors and textures.

Sugerencia: Use correct collocations and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear statement and follow with specific occasions and examples. Replace incorrect phrases like "spending flower" with "sending flowers" and name occasions precisely.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings and Vietnamese Women's Day. For example, red roses are especially popular to express love and appreciation.

× Yes, I really admire flowers, especially their bread, rains and delicate beauty.

✓ Yes, I really admire flowers, especially their bright colors, range and delicate beauty.

The original sentence uses incorrect words 'bread' and 'rains' which seem to be wrong word choices (lexical errors). 'Bright' should modify 'colors' (adjective + noun). 'Range' fits context better than 'rains'. Suggest replacing incorrect words with appropriate nouns and ensure adjectives modify the correct nouns.

× I find that having freaks flowers like lilies or roses and my living stay instant, instantly brightens the atmosphere and create a much more relaxing ambience.

✓ I find that having fresh flowers like lilies or roses in my living space instantly brightens the atmosphere and creates a much more relaxing ambience.

The original sentence has multiple word-choice and structure errors: 'freaks' should be 'fresh'; 'and my living stay instant' is ungrammatical—intended meaning is 'in my living space' and adverb placement 'instantly' should come before 'brightens'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'flowers' as subject with the verb 'creates' in the clause 'having fresh flowers ... creates' requires singular verb because the gerund phrase 'having fresh flowers ...' is treated as singular, so use 'creates'. Suggest simplify structure: 'having fresh flowers in my living space instantly brightens the atmosphere and creates a more relaxing ambience.'

× My mother is probably the person I know who love them the most.

✓ My mother is probably the person I know who loves them the most.

Relative clause 'who loves them the most' refers to 'my mother' (singular), so the verb must be 'loves' (third-person singular). Ensure subject and verb agree in number.

× She has a ringtone and spends hours tending to her extensive garden.

✓ She has a greenhouse and spends hours tending to her extensive garden.

The original 'ringtone' is a wrong word choice (likely intended 'greenhouse' or similar). This is a lexical/preposition-like error; replacing with 'greenhouse' corrects meaning. If instead you meant a small plot, use 'plot' or omit. Suggest choose correct noun that fits context.

× She always says that working with flowers is her way of finding peace.

✓ She always says that working with flowers is her way of finding peace.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× And it's kept being Shrek.

✓ And it has kept her grounded.

The original sentence is incoherent ('kept being Shrek'). Likely intended meaning is 'it has kept her grounded' or 'it has kept her calm'. Replace with a coherent idiomatic expression that fits context. Suggest confirming intended meaning and then use appropriate verb phrase.

× Yes, there are quite a few.

✓ Yes, there are quite a few.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× Given that I live in a tropical climate, many people cultivate ornamental plants and flowers on their balconies.

✓ Given that I live in a tropical climate, many people cultivate ornamental plants and flowers on their balconies.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed.

× As more gardens, you often sing vibrant verities like orchids, uh, and burgundy will.

✓ In many gardens, you often see vibrant varieties like orchids and burgundy lilies.

Original contains multiple errors: 'As more gardens' should be 'In many gardens'; 'sing' should be 'see'; 'verities' is misspelling of 'varieties'; 'burgundy will' likely intended 'burgundy lilies'. Correct word choices and word order produce a clear sentence. Suggest careful word selection and proofreading.

× Not regularly, but if I encountered a particularly stunning display of flowers but have at a park or a beautifully decor decorated cafe, I may stop to take a quick snap they made for a raise of check because their colors and textures.

✓ Not regularly, but if I encounter a particularly stunning display of flowers at a park or in a beautifully decorated cafe, I may stop to take a quick photo because of their colors and textures.

Many issues: tense inconsistency ('encountered' past vs present context) should be present 'encounter'; remove duplicate conjunction 'but'; 'have at' is wrong preposition — use 'at' or 'in'; 'decor decorated' is redundant — use 'decorated'; 'snap they made for a raise of check' is unintelligible — replace with 'photo' and 'because of their colors and textures'. Ensure tense consistency and correct prepositions.

× Not regularly, but if I encountered a particularly stunning display of flowers but have at a park or a beautifully decor decorated cafe, I may stop to take a quick snap they made for a raise of check because their colors and textures.

✓ Not regularly, but if I encounter a particularly stunning display of flowers at a park or in a beautifully decorated cafe, I may stop to take a quick photo because of their colors and textures.

Conditionals describing habitual or future possibility with 'may' require the present simple in the if-clause ('if I encounter'), not past 'encountered'. Change tense for correct conditional structure.

× Yes, they do, especially on special occasions.

✓ Yes, they do, especially on special occasions.

This sentence is grammatical. No change needed.

× Spending flower is a customary register for events like birthdays, weddings or the Vietnamese women days.

✓ Sending flowers is a customary gesture for events like birthdays, weddings, or Vietnamese Women's Day.

Multiple word-choice errors: 'Spending' should be 'Sending'; 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'; 'register' should be 'gesture'; 'the Vietnamese women days' should be 'Vietnamese Women's Day'. Correct nouns and possessive form improve clarity.

× Red roses, uh in particularly are extremely umm popular for expresses love and appreciation.

✓ Red roses, in particular, are extremely popular for expressing love and appreciation.

Errors: 'in particularly' should be 'in particular' (idiom); remove filler 'uh' and 'umm'; 'for expresses' incorrect form — use gerund 'for expressing' or 'to express'. Suggest removing fillers and using correct idiomatic phrase and verb form.