Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện điểm ngữ pháp, phát âm và độ mạch lạc. Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ “I often I often”), sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ “delicate values” → “delicate petals” hoặc “delicate beauty”), hoàn thành câu bị bỏ dở (“decorate my...” → “decorate my home”). Giữ câu ngắn gọn (không quá 4-5 câu), dùng từ chính xác và nối câu hợp lý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I absolutely love flowers. Their vibrant colors and delicate petals brighten up my home. I often buy lilies and roses to decorate the living room, because they make the space feel fresh and welcoming.

Sugerencia: Chú ý thì động từ và số (ví dụ “she had” → “she has”; “which make” → “which makes”). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về loại hoa hoặc hoạt động chăm sóc để câu phong phú. Sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để câu mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: Yes, my mom is passionate about flowers. She has a beautiful garden filled with roses, marigolds and orchids, and she spends several hours each weekend watering and pruning them, which makes the garden absolutely breathtaking.

Sugerencia: Sửa vài lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc (ví dụ “few free spaces” → “few open spaces”; “have any plans?” → “have any plants” hoặc “have flowers”). Tránh câu hỏi lạ ở cuối; kết luận rõ ràng. Có thể thêm ví dụ cụ thể về nơi có hoa để cụ thể hóa.

Ejemplo: No, not really. I live in a crowded city with few open spaces, so there aren’t many flowers around. Most of the neighborhood is covered by buildings and roads, so only a few small parks and apartment balconies have any plants or flowers.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện rõ ràng và mạch lạc: tránh tiếng ngập ngừng (uh, umm) và các cụm từ không rõ nghĩa (“Hardly the follow of a flower when have”). Diễn đạt ý chính trực tiếp, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh: giải thích lý do ngắn gọn nếu không chụp ảnh. Giữ không quá 4 câu.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not really into photography. I prefer to enjoy flowers in person rather than through a camera. When I see a beautiful bloom, I usually just stop to smell it or admire it for a moment.

Sugerencia: Sửa cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp để rõ nghĩa (ví dụ “it's common to send flowers to congratulate someone on a new job or to express sympathy after a loss”). Tránh cụm từ lủng củng (ví dụ “coming to sample quiz”). Thêm một hoặc hai ví dụ cụ thể về loại hoa gửi trong từng dịp.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers for occasions like birthdays, weddings and funerals. For example, it’s common to send a bouquet of lilies to express sympathy after a loss, or send roses to congratulate someone on a new job.

× Their vibrant colors and delicate values brighten up most of space and live and live the most.

✓ Their vibrant colors and delicate fragrances brighten up most of the space and bring it to life.

'values' is incorrect for flowers; use 'fragrances' or 'petals'. 'Most of space' needs definite article 'the'. 'Brighten up ... and live and live the most' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'bring it to life' to express enlivening effect.

× I often I often buy some lilies and rose to decorate my.

✓ I often buy some lilies and roses to decorate my home.

Repeated phrase 'I often I often' is a redundancy. 'rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'some'. 'decorate my.' is incomplete; add object 'home'.

× She had a beautiful garden with different flowers in different blooms and she spends a lot of time taking care of it, which make the garden absolutely breathtaking.

✓ She has a beautiful garden with different flowers in various stages of bloom and she spends a lot of time taking care of it, which makes the garden absolutely breathtaking.

Tense mismatch: 'had' implies past while rest is present; use 'has'. 'in different blooms' is awkward; 'in various stages of bloom' is clearer. 'make' must agree with singular 'which'/'it' so use 'makes' (subject-verb agreement).

× No, not really. I live in a city with few free spaces so there aren't many flowers around.

✓ No, not really. I live in a city with few free spaces, so there aren't many flowers around.

Add comma before coordinating conjunction for clarity. 'a city with few free spaces' is grammatical; note 'few' implies scarcity which is fine. No major grammar change except punctuation.

× Most of the neighborhood is covered by buildings and roads, so only a few small parks have any plans?

✓ Most of the neighborhood is covered by buildings and roads, so only a few small parks have any plants.

'plans?' is incorrect and contains a question mark; should be 'plants' to refer to vegetation. Ensure sentence ends with a period when making a statement.

× No, I'm not really into photography. I love flower in person. Uh, umm. Hardly the follow of a flower when have.

✓ No, I'm not really into photography. I prefer to appreciate flowers in person. I rarely follow or photograph a flower when I have the chance.

Original contains fragments and unclear phrases. 'I love flower in person' should be 'I prefer to appreciate flowers in person'. 'Hardly the follow of a flower when have' is ungrammatical; clarified to 'I rarely follow or photograph a flower when I have the chance.'

× Yes, people in my country do often send flowers, especially for celebrations like birthdays, weddings and funerals.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers, especially for occasions like birthdays, weddings, and funerals.

Placement of 'do' is unnecessary; 'often send' is sufficient. 'celebrations' is acceptable but 'occasions' fits better with funerals. Added commas for list punctuation.

× For example, it's coming to sample quiz to congratulate someone who on the new job or to express sympathy after loss since flower.

✓ For example, they are often sent to congratulate someone on a new job or to express sympathy after a loss.

Original is nonsensical: 'it's coming to sample quiz' and 'who on the new job' are incorrect. Rewritten to convey intended meaning: 'they are often sent to congratulate someone on a new job or to express sympathy after a loss.'