Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, use correct grammar and a clear structure: state your main idea, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repeating words and fix possessive/pronoun errors. Use linking words like “also” or “and” correctly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. I especially enjoy growing them on my rooftop and balconies throughout the year. For example, in spring I plant tulips and in winter I keep potted chrysanthemums, so there is always color around my home.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct pronoun and word-choice errors. Begin with a simple topic sentence, then give a specific example of that person’s behavior. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example.”

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She enjoys planting and caring for flower bushes, and whenever she sees a beautiful plant she often takes cuttings to grow at home.

Sugerencia: Give a direct, grammatically correct statement and follow with specific details. Use linking words like “for example” or “also” and avoid unclear words (e.g., “nowhere”).

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, my rooftop garden is full of flowering plants, and my balconies currently have several kinds of winter-blooming flowers.

Sugerencia: Keep your answer concise and organize it: say whether you take photos, then give one or two specific details (when/how/why). Avoid repetition and fix tense errors.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. I usually photograph them in the morning on my rooftop because the light is good and the flowers look most colorful then.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear general statement about common practice, then give a specific example or context. Use correct grammar and natural phrasing (e.g., “people sometimes send flowers for special occasions”).

Ejemplo: Yes, people in my country sometimes send flowers, especially for occasions like birthdays, anniversaries, or to express love and sympathy.

× Yes, I love flowers and my mother's also and I I have a roof job guardian and in my every balcony I grow flower plants in spring, in winter, in summer, every seasons. I plant very different types, various types of.

✓ Yes, I love flowers and my mother does too. I have a rooftop garden, and on every balcony I grow flower plants in spring, winter, and summer. I plant many different types.

The original contains subject-verb agreement errors and other issues. 'my mother's also' is incorrect for 'my mother does too' (subject-verb agreement and pronoun use). 'roof job guardian' is a wrong phrase; the intended meaning is 'rooftop garden' (word choice). 'in my every balcony' should be 'on every balcony' (preposition). 'every seasons' should be 'every season' or list seasons; here 'spring, winter, and summer' is used, and 'I plant very different types, various types of.' is redundant and ungrammatical; corrected to 'I plant many different types.' Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree, choose correct noun phrases, use 'on' for balconies, and avoid redundant fragments.

× Yes of course I know my mom who loves slower who always like crazy to plant flower trees and whenever he go and see any flower trees he he is fond of collect sheets or in their I.

✓ Yes, of course I know my mom who loves flowers. She is always crazy about planting flowering trees, and whenever she goes and sees any flowering trees she is fond of collecting cuttings.

Multiple pronoun and subject errors: 'loves slower' should be 'loves flowers' (word choice). 'who always like' should be 'who is always' or 'who always likes'—here 'she is always crazy about' fits. Pronouns 'he' are incorrect because the referent is 'my mom' (female), so use 'she' and corresponding verb forms: 'whenever she goes' not 'he go'. 'collect sheets' likely means 'collect cuttings' or 'collect leaves'; corrected to 'collecting cuttings'. Suggestion: match pronouns to their antecedents, use correct verb forms for third person singular, and choose precise nouns.

× Yes, of course. And nowhere are in my house. There are lot of flowers. My rooftop is full of flowers in Marshall and in my balcony there are various kind of winter flowers now.

✓ Yes, of course. There are flowers all over my house. There are a lot of flowers. My rooftop is full of flowers, and on my balcony there are various kinds of winter flowers now.

Errors include awkward word order and missing articles: 'And nowhere are in my house' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'There are flowers all over my house.' 'There are lot of flowers' needs the article 'a' as in 'a lot of flowers.' 'in my balcony' should be 'on my balcony' (preposition). 'various kind of' should be 'various kinds of' (plural agreement with 'kinds'). Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence statements, include necessary articles, use 'on' for balcony, and pluralize 'kind' when combined with 'various.'

× Life yes yes of course I like to take photos in the air to photos into my flower gardens and in the morning I when I woke up and I I get fresh myself and then I go to rooftop and when I see there are various colorful blooming flowers and.

✓ Yes, of course. I like to take photos of my flower gardens. In the morning, when I wake up and freshen myself, I go to the rooftop, and I see many colorful blooming flowers.

Mixed tense and incorrect verb forms: 'in the morning I when I woke up' mixes past and present; maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'when I wake up.' 'I get fresh myself' is incorrect reflexive usage; use 'freshen myself' or 'freshen up.' 'take photos in the air to photos into my flower gardens' is unclear; correct to 'take photos of my flower gardens.' Ensure consistent present tense for routines, correct reflexive verb usage, and simplify awkward phrases.

× And occasionally I see that the person who loved another, they give flowers their moments and feels special to each other.

✓ Occasionally I see that when a person loves another, they give flowers to show affection and make the other person feel special.

The original mixes past and present ('loved' should be 'loves') and has wrong word order and missing preposition: 'give flowers their moments' is incorrect; 'give flowers to show affection' clarifies purpose and adds the preposition 'to.' Pronoun agreement with 'a person' can be neutral 'they.' 'feels special to each other' should be 'make the other person feel special' or 'make each other feel special.' Suggestion: use present simple for general truths, add necessary prepositions, and use verbs that express purpose (e.g., 'to show').