Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep answers natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., saying 'different kinds' multiple times) and correct small grammar issues ('It was a really great experience').

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. When I lived at home, I had a small garden where I planted white, red and pink roses, and I would water them every evening, which I found very relaxing.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and filler words (uh). Give a direct topic sentence then one clear supporting detail. Use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas and correct phrasing (e.g., 'my real brother' -> 'my brother').

Ejemplo: Yes, my brother loves flowers too. He often helped me plant them back home, and now he plans to grow plants in his backyard here in Canada.

Sugerencia: Provide one clear reason and one specific example, using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea. Fix subject-verb agreement ('everyone have' -> 'everyone has').

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because Canadians value greenery. For example, my current house has a variety of flowers in the backyard, which makes it a pleasant place to relax.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid fillers. Give a direct answer then one or two clear reasons. Correct awkward expressions ('I also love a photography', 'one of the part'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'also'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes photograph flowers. I enjoy photography and I often take flower photos to post on Snapchat and to capture interesting views.

Sugerencia: Be specific and avoid unclear or incorrect words ('flour' -> 'flowers'). Use one general statement then a specific example with correct tense and linking words. Keep it within a few sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers for weddings and other special occasions. For example, when a friend visited me, I picked her up from the airport and gave her a bucket of flowers, which made her very happy.

× When I was back home, there was a small garden in my house where I used to plant different kinds of flowers.

✓ When I was back home, there was a small garden at my house where I used to plant different kinds of flowers.

The original sentence is mostly correct tense-wise but uses 'in my house' which is less natural; 'at my house' is preferred for a garden located on the property. Keep past tense 'was' and 'used to plant' because the speaker describes a past habitual action. Suggestion: use 'at my house' for location of a garden.

× Even there were different kinds of roses like White Rose, red rose and pink roses.

✓ There were different kinds of roses, like white roses, red roses and pink roses.

Mismatch and inconsistent capitalization/number: 'White Rose' and 'red rose' mix singular and plural forms. When listing types, use plural for each kind. Also common nouns should be lowercase. Keep past tense 'were' because describing the past.

× It was really great experience.

✓ It was a really great experience.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before singular countable noun 'experience'. Use 'a really great experience.' Suggestion: include the appropriate article for countable nouns.

× He also loves flowers. He used to help me uh, while planting those flowers that I have mentioned about uh, even uh, here in Canada, he's planning to grow some plants in the backyard.

✓ He also loves flowers. He used to help me while planting those flowers that I mentioned. Even here in Canada, he's planning to grow some plants in the backyard.

Combine corrections: remove filler 'about' after 'mentioned' and redundant 'uh's. 'I have mentioned about' is ungrammatical; use 'I mentioned' or 'I have mentioned' without 'about'. Maintain tenses: 'used to help' (past habit) and 'he's planning' (present continuous for future plan). Also break into clearer sentences.

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

This question sentence is correct; 'Are there a lot of flowers where you live?' uses correct 'there be' structure for plural 'flowers'. No change needed.

× Yes, definitely. There are a lot of flowers where I currently live because people in Canada love greenery and everyone have flowers or small plants in their backyard.

✓ Yes, definitely. There are a lot of flowers where I currently live because people in Canada love greenery and everyone has flowers or small plants in their backyard.

Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone' is singular and requires singular verb 'has', not 'have'. Keep present simple tense for general truth.

× The house where I'm currently living there are also different kinds of flowers planted in the backyard and it's a good place to sit to relax.

✓ The house where I'm currently living also has different kinds of flowers planted in the backyard, and it's a good place to sit and relax.

Original mixes two clauses redundantly: 'The house where I'm currently living there are...' has both subject 'The house...' and existential 'there are' causing a structure error. Use 'The house where I'm currently living also has...' or 'There are also...'. Also 'sit to relax' is better phrased 'sit and relax'. Suggestion: avoid using both a noun phrase subject and 'there' existential in same clause.

× Yes, sometimes I do click pictures of flowers because everyone uses Snapchat these days so I click pictures to continue my streak and uh, post a snap.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do click pictures of flowers because everyone uses Snapchat these days, so I click pictures to continue my streak and post a snap.

Main issue is punctuation and filler removal; grammar is acceptable. Keep present simple 'do click' for habitual action. Removed 'uh' and added comma for clarity.

× I also love a photography so I love capturing views and flowers are one of the part which I capture.

✓ I also love photography, so I love capturing views, and flowers are one of the parts that I capture.

'a photography' is incorrect; 'photography' as an uncountable noun requires no article. 'one of the part' should be 'one of the parts' and 'which I capture' is better as 'that I capture'. Maintain present simple for general preferences.

× Yes, people do send flowers to others in my country, especially on their wedding days or any special occasion in their life.

✓ Yes, people send flowers to others in my country, especially on their wedding days or on any special occasion in their lives.

'do send' is acceptable for emphasis but unnecessary; simpler 'send' is natural. 'in their life' should be pluralized to 'in their lives' because 'people' is plural. Also add parallel preposition 'on any special occasion'. Suggestion: match plurality between subject and possessive noun.

× I give my flour to my friend.

✓ I gave my flowers to my friend.

'flour' (powder for cooking) is wrong word; should be 'flowers'. Also tense should match surrounding past narrative: earlier 'When she visited me, I picked her up from the airport' is past, so 'I gave' (past) is appropriate. Ensure correct word choice and consistent tense.

× When she visited me, I picked her up from the airport and I give her a bucket of flowers.

✓ When she visited me, I picked her up from the airport and I gave her a bucket of flowers.

Tense inconsistency: narrative is in past tense ('visited', 'picked'), so 'give' should be past 'gave' to maintain consistent past narration.