Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid spelling/grammar errors, use linking words and specific reasons. Reduce redundancy and keep to 3–4 sentences. Improve vocabulary (e.g. 'cherished' not 'cherishness') and correct word choice ('found' instead of 'fined').

Ejemplo: I do love flowers, especially roses, lilies and the lotus. I like the lotus because it’s uncommon and feels special, while roses represent love and are very meaningful. Lilies appeal to me for their elegant shape and delicate scent.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles). Use linking words to explain reasons and give a brief example. Avoid unfinished sentences and repetitions.

Ejemplo: Yes, most of my friends love flowers, so I often give them as gifts even when there’s no special occasion. For example, I recently gave a bouquet to a friend who was stressed, and it really cheered her up.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, expand with specific details and finish sentences. Use linking words (for example, therefore) and correct phrasing ('affordable prices'). Avoid trailing off and add one reason or example.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are plenty of flowers near my hostel — a vendor around the corner sells them at affordable prices. For example, I often see couples buying bouquets on weekends, which brightens the street and creates a pleasant atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid unnecessary adjectives or awkward phrases ('good lighting', not 'good lightning'). Use linking words to connect ideas and give a specific example of when you take photos. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph flowers when the lighting is nice, such as at sunrise when petals look sun-kissed. I keep these photos on my phone as reminders of happy moments, like a walk in the park that made me smile.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, structured answer with specific examples and correct grammar. Use linking words to list occasions and correct phrasing ('Valentine’s Week' and 'enjoy those moments'). Avoid vague phrases and keep it natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, flowers are commonly given for birthdays, hospital visits and other celebrations. For instance, my friends and I usually receive bouquets during Valentine’s Week, which makes those days feel extra special.

× Yes, I love flowers such as rose, lilies and Lotus.

✓ Yes, I love flowers such as roses, lilies, and lotuses.

The nouns 'rose' and 'Lotus' are inconsistent in number and capitalization. When listing examples of flowers, use plural forms 'roses' and 'lotuses' to match the general noun 'flowers'. Also 'lotus' should not be capitalized here. Suggestion: use plural forms for category examples and keep consistent lowercase for common nouns.

× Lotus can rarely be fined and so I like rare things.

✓ Lotuses are rare, and so I like rare things.

The original uses 'can rarely be fined' which is incorrect: 'fined' means punished with a monetary penalty. Also singular/plural and verb form are wrong. Use 'are rare' to state a general fact about lotuses. Suggestion: use the adjective 'rare' and the plural form when speaking generally.

× But I also like roses because of their symbol of love and cherishness.

✓ But I also like roses because they symbolize love and affection.

'Their symbol of love and cherishness' is awkward and uses 'cherishness' (not a natural noun). Use the verb 'symbolize' and the noun 'affection' for clarity. The pronoun 'they' correctly refers to 'roses'. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'symbolize love' and 'affection' instead of uncommon words.

× Lily is because they are pretty.

✓ I like lilies because they are pretty.

Sentence lacks a clear subject and verb: 'Lily is because they are pretty' is ungrammatical. Use 'I like lilies' to mirror previous sentences and use plural 'lilies' with pronoun 'they'. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and main verb.

× All of my friends loves flowers and so I give them whenever I want to give them something and it's it doesn't have to be such an special occasion.

✓ All of my friends love flowers, so I give them flowers whenever I want to give them something, and it doesn't have to be a special occasion.

'Friends' is plural so verb should be 'love' not 'loves' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'it's it doesn't' is redundant; use 'it doesn't'. 'Such an special occasion' should be 'a special occasion' because 'special' begins with a consonant sound, so use 'a'. Suggestion: match verb number to subject and choose correct article 'a' vs 'an'.

× I do that a lot because I like seeing them happy and they like receiving flowers from me because it is.

✓ I do that a lot because I like seeing them happy, and they like receiving flowers from me.

The clause 'because it is' is incomplete and unclear. Remove it to make the sentence complete. Pronoun usage 'them' is fine. Suggestion: avoid unfinished clauses; if you mean 'because it is thoughtful', state it fully.

× Yes, there is a vendor who sells flowers where I live, it's around the corner in my hostel and they sell flowers in good pricing too.

✓ Yes, there is a vendor who sells flowers where I live; it's around the corner from my hostel, and they sell flowers at good prices too.

Use 'around the corner from my hostel' not 'in my hostel'. 'Good pricing' is unnatural; use 'good prices' or 'reasonable prices'. Also combine clauses properly. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'from' with 'around the corner' and natural collocation 'good prices'.

× So whenever I see people holding flowers such as couples or my friends, I really like it because.

✓ So whenever I see people holding flowers, such as couples or my friends, I really like it because it looks pleasant.

Original ends with 'because.' which leaves the reason incomplete. Complete the clause by stating the reason: e.g., 'because it looks pleasant.' Suggestion: always finish 'because' clauses with a clear reason.

× Yes, whenever I see flowers that are looking pretty or in a good lightning such as sun kissed so I take their photos to keep in my memories because they are special to me and I like holding them and it really makes me smile and blush.

✓ Yes, whenever I see flowers that look pretty or are in good lighting, such as being sun-kissed, I take photos of them to keep in my memories because they are special to me; I like holding them and they really make me smile and blush.

Use base verb 'look' after 'that' to describe appearance rather than 'are looking' which implies ongoing action (present continuous) — both could work but 'look' is more natural for descriptions. 'Lightning' is a wrong word for 'lighting' (illumination). 'Sun-kissed' should be hyphenated and 'being' clarifies the phrase. 'Take their photos' is awkward; use 'take photos of them'. Also split long sentence for clarity. Suggestion: use correct nouns ('lighting'), natural phrasing ('take photos of them'), and appropriate verb forms for descriptions.

× Yes, people often receive flowers when it's their birthdays or when they are in hospitals or whenever it's a special occasion.

✓ Yes, people often receive flowers on their birthdays, when they are in hospitals, or on other special occasions.

Use 'on their birthdays' not 'when it's their birthdays' for correct preposition and agreement. 'Whenever it's a special occasion' is better as 'on other special occasions.' Suggestion: use correct prepositions for time expressions: 'on birthdays', 'in hospitals'.

× Me and my friends mostly get it when it's Valentine's week and I enjoy that moments because it really makes a day special with holding flowers.

✓ My friends and I mostly receive them during Valentine's week, and I enjoy those moments because holding flowers really makes the day special.

Use subject pronoun order 'My friends and I' instead of 'Me and my friends'. 'Get it' is vague; use 'receive them' (flowers). 'Valentine's week' is acceptable but 'during' fits better. 'That moments' should be 'those moments' (plural demonstrative). 'Makes a day special with holding flowers' is unnatural; rephrase to 'makes the day special' and place the gerund 'holding flowers' appropriately. Suggestion: use correct pronoun order, plural demonstrative 'those', and clear verb/object references.