Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be careful with grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and reduce repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases like "I will always" twice and correct collocations ("symbolizes positivity" not "symbolized positives").

Ejemplo: I love flowers, and my favourite is the sunflower because it symbolizes positivity. For example, sunflowers turn toward the sun, which reminds me to stay optimistic when I feel sad or face challenges.

Sugerencia: Fix tense consistency and grammar (use present/past correctly), plural forms and articles. Be more specific and avoid vague repetition like "pretty...pretty." Use a linking word to add detail (e.g., "for example").

Ejemplo: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers. In her garden she grows many kinds, such as sunflowers, roses and tulips; the tulips are her favourite because of their elegant shape and bright colours.

Sugerencia: Correct articles and pronouns, reduce redundancy and use varied sentence structures. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (e.g., "for example" or "also") to give a specific example. Avoid repeated words like "walk through walk past."

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many flowers near my home. For example, an elderly neighbour plants a variety in her garden, so whenever I walk past her house I stop to admire the sunflowers, tulips and roses from the pavement.

Sugerencia: Be concise and coherent: avoid sentence fragments and repetition. Use correct grammar and link ideas logically. Specify which flower you mean (name), and give one clear reason why you photograph it. Avoid vague phrases like "the red color of the color."

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph flowers in the park during my evening walk. One I photograph a lot is the hibiscus, Malaysia's national flower; its bright red petals stand out against the green background and photograph beautifully.

Sugerencia: Improve fluency by removing fillers ("uh") and tightening sentences. Use correct plural forms and articles ("Mother's Day, Father's Day"), and give one or two specific occasions with linking words. Keep it natural and concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, people here often send flowers on special occasions. For instance, couples exchange bouquets on anniversaries, and families give flowers for graduations or on Mother's Day and Father's Day to show love and gratitude.

× Yes, I really love flowers so my favorite flowers is sunflower because it's symbolized positives as the sunflowers always go towards the sun.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers, so my favorite flower is the sunflower because it symbolizes positivity as sunflowers always turn toward the sun.

The student used plural 'flowers' with singular verb 'is' and said 'favorite flowers is sunflower' which is inconsistent. Change to singular 'favorite flower is the sunflower'. 'Symbolized positives' is incorrect word choice and form: use present tense 'symbolizes' and the uncountable noun 'positivity'. Also use 'turn toward' (or 'face') instead of 'go towards'. Suggestion: match singular/plural, use correct verb tense and idiomatic nouns.

× So whenever I I'm sad or disappointed I will always think of the spirit of sunflower which can guide me through the difficulties or challenges I have been facing.

✓ So whenever I'm sad or disappointed, I always think of the spirit of the sunflower, which guides me through the difficulties or challenges I face.

Mixed future/modal 'will always' with present habit; use simple present 'always think' for habitual actions. 'I I'm' is a typo; remove duplication. Use definite article 'the sunflower' when referring to the symbolic flower. 'Can guide me' is acceptable but present 'which guides me' is more natural. 'Have been facing' is present perfect continuous; simplify to present 'I face' for general statements.

× Yes, my grandmother loved flower very much, so in her garden she usually like to plants different kind of flower, for example sunflower, rose, Tulip.

✓ Yes, my grandmother loved flowers very much, so in her garden she usually liked to plant different kinds of flowers, for example sunflowers, roses, and tulips.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' when speaking generally. Verb forms: 'she usually like' should be past 'she usually liked' to match 'loved', and 'to plants' should be infinitive 'to plant'. 'Different kind of flower' should be 'different kinds of flowers'. Capitalization of common nouns like 'tulip' should be lowercase. Use plural forms for examples.

× And the Tulip is her favorite because it is really pretty and the color is really pretty too.

✓ And the tulip was her favorite because it was really pretty and its color was very beautiful too.

Maintain past tense consistent with earlier 'loved'. 'The Tulip' can be 'the tulip' but when referring to a type as favorite, 'was her favorite' fits. 'The color is really pretty too' should be 'its color was very beautiful too' to avoid repetition of 'pretty' and to match tense. Use possessive 'its' to refer to the tulip's color.

× Yes there are a lot of flower near where I live.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers near where I live.

Plural noun required: 'a lot of flower' should be 'a lot of flowers'. Structure 'there are' is correct but must agree with plural noun. Add comma for clarity.

× So one of my neighbors she is a old lady and she loves planting all different kind of the flower in her garden.

✓ One of my neighbors is an old lady, and she loves planting all different kinds of flowers in her garden.

Redundant subject 'one of my neighbors she' should be 'one of my neighbors is'. Use article 'an old lady' before vowel sound. 'All different kind of the flower' should be 'all different kinds of flowers'. Remove unnecessary 'the'.

× So whenever I walk through walk past his her houses I will always stop by to see from outside to see the sunflowers, the Tulip or the roses.

✓ So whenever I walk past her house, I always stop to look from outside at the sunflowers, tulips, or roses.

Remove duplicated verbs 'walk through walk past'. Use correct possessive 'her house' not 'his her houses'. Use simple present 'I always stop' for habitual action. 'Stop by to see from outside to see' is redundant; use 'stop to look from outside at'. Maintain plural forms and lowercase common nouns. Use consistent list punctuation.

× Yes, I really love taking photos of flowers in my daily life. So when in the evening I always go to the playground to have a walk and at the time in the park there is there are a lot of flowers.

✓ Yes, I really love taking photos of flowers in my daily life. In the evenings I usually go to the playground for a walk, and at that time the park has a lot of flowers.

Use 'In the evenings' or 'In the evening' consistently; 'when in the evening I always go' is awkward—use 'In the evenings I usually go'. Remove duplicated 'there is there are'. Use present simple 'the park has' to describe a habitual state. 'To have a walk' is less natural than 'for a walk'.

× Like one of my favorite flowers there is because it's the national flowers of Malaysia and it's really pretty.

✓ One of my favorite flowers is the hibiscus because it is the national flower of Malaysia and it is really pretty.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and missing the flower name; specify the national flower (hibiscus) to make sense. Use singular 'flower' for the national symbol: 'the national flower of Malaysia'. Keep consistent singular forms and use clear clause order: 'One of my favorite flowers is X because...'.

× The red color of the color is really shining.

✓ Its red color is very vibrant.

'The red color of the color' is redundant and awkward. 'Is really shining' is not idiomatic for color; use 'vibrant' or 'bright'. Use possessive 'its' to refer back to the flower. Keep concise phrasing.

× Yes, people in my country often like to send flowers to the other, especially during the important occasions, for example, the anniversary for the couples and the graduations or even just uh, Mother Days or Father Days.

✓ Yes, people in my country often like to send flowers to others, especially on important occasions, for example anniversaries for couples, graduations, or even Mother's Day or Father's Day.

'To the other' is incorrect; use 'to others'. Use preposition 'on' with occasions. 'The anniversary for the couples' should be 'anniversaries for couples'. Use correct singular forms 'Mother's Day' and 'Father's Day' and remove filler 'uh'.

× This is because it can show the love and our gratitude to our loved ones and it's a meaningful gift especially.

✓ This is because it can show love and gratitude to our loved ones, and it is a especially meaningful gift.

Avoid redundant possessives: 'the love and our gratitude' -> 'love and gratitude'. 'It's a meaningful gift especially' has awkward word order; place 'especially' before 'meaningful' or at end more naturally: 'and it is an especially meaningful gift.' Use article 'an' before 'especially' if needed: here 'an especially meaningful gift'.