Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is natural and directly answers the question with a clear reason, but you can improve by adding one brief specific example and using a linking word to connect ideas. Also avoid repeating 'love' in close proximity to sound more varied.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I especially love roses because they have a rich, sweet fragrance and vivid colors. For example, I enjoy placing a small rose bouquet on my desk which brightens my mood while I study.

Sugerencia: Good content and personal detail, but the answer has minor grammar/word-order issues and slight redundancy. Use a clear topic sentence, one linking word, and correct phrasing (e.g., 'her favorite flowers are roses').

Ejemplo: Yes, my mother loves flowers. Every year on her birthday I give her a bouquet, usually of her favorite flowers, roses, because she likes their scent and elegance.

Sugerencia: Your answer attempts to explain but has repetition, an incomplete ending, and an unclear example. Aim for one concise topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details with a linking word. Correct redundancy and finish the thought.

Ejemplo: Not really. Because Malaysia is very humid, many delicate species struggle to thrive, so we mainly see hardy, common flowers such as hibiscus and frangipani instead of a wide variety of garden blooms.

Sugerencia: Clear opinion and reason but contains repetition and minor grammar errors. Use a linking word, avoid repeating 'same' and correct tense/word forms ('appreciate their beauty'). Keep it under five concise sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't. Since I often see the same local flowers, I prefer to appreciate their beauty with my eyes rather than photographing them.

Sugerencia: You address the question well and give cultural context, but there is repetition and some awkward phrasing ('we as Muslims, we don't celebrate'). Streamline with one topic sentence and a linked supporting detail. Avoid repeating words and correct small grammar issues.

Ejemplo: Yes, people often send flowers, particularly on Valentine's Day. Although many Muslims do not observe the holiday, Malaysia is multicultural, so couples commonly exchange bouquets as a romantic gesture.

× Of course, my mother does love flowers so much.

✓ Of course, my mother loves flowers very much.

The auxiliary 'does' is unnecessary in a simple present positive statement about a third person singular subject. Use the simple present 'loves' to match subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'My mother loves' for affirmative statements.

× Every time on her birthday I will give her a bouquet of flowers.

✓ Every year on her birthday I give her a bouquet of flowers.

Using 'will' for a habitual action is incorrect; use the simple present to express regular routines. Also 'every time on her birthday' is awkward; 'every year on her birthday' is clearer for an annual habit.

× Her favorite flowers to be exact, which is roses.

✓ Her favorite flowers, to be exact, are roses.

The original is a fragment and has word order problems. Insert commas around the parenthetical phrase 'to be exact' and use the plural verb 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'flowers.' This creates a complete, grammatical sentence.

× I don't think so because in Malaysia, due to the humid atmosphere, there are not so many flowers that can grow that can grow in that specific weather.

✓ I don't think so because in Malaysia, due to the humid climate, not many flowers can grow in that specific weather.

The sentence contains repetition ('that can grow' twice) and awkward phrasing. Simplify by removing redundancy, change 'atmosphere' to 'climate' for natural collocation, and place the modal correctly: 'not many flowers can grow in that specific weather.'

× So I think there are just not a lot of flowers, but common flowers such as.

✓ So I think there are just not many flowers, only common ones such as roses and lilies.

The original is a sentence fragment ending abruptly after 'such as.' Replace with a complete clause and use 'many' instead of 'a lot of' for a smoother formal phrasing. Provide examples to complete 'such as.'

× I only see the same flowers blooming and then I felt like it is good for me to appreciate those beauty by my eyes instead of taking pictures of that flower.

✓ I only see the same flowers blooming, and I feel it is better for me to appreciate their beauty with my eyes instead of taking pictures of the flowers.

Tense shifts: 'see' (present) mixed with 'felt' (past) is inconsistent; keep present tense 'feel.' Also 'those beauty' is incorrect; 'their beauty' is correct possessive plural. Use 'with my eyes' instead of 'by my eyes,' and plural 'flowers' consistently.

× I would say no because whenever I go out it's just the same flowers all over again.

✓ I would say no because whenever I go out, it's just the same flowers everywhere.

The sentence is mostly acceptable, but 'all over again' is awkward here; 'everywhere' or 'all over' fits better. Add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× I know that we as Muslims, we don't celebrate celebrate Valentine's.

✓ I know that as Muslims, we don't celebrate Valentine's Day.

The repetition of 'we' is redundant; remove the extra pronoun. Also use 'Valentine's Day' as the correct name. Avoid repeating words ('celebrate' twice).

× So they tend to give those bouquet of flowers to their partners on that day and I feel like it's such a sweet thing to do.

✓ So they tend to give bouquets of flowers to their partners on that day, and I feel it's such a sweet thing to do.

'Those bouquet' is incorrect article/number agreement. Use the plural 'bouquets' without 'those' or use 'those bouquets' if pointing to specific ones. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.