Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining ideas and use clearer linking words. For example, start with a direct topic sentence, then explain why you write, and mention exams as an additional reason. Also, use more precise vocabulary such as 'express' instead of 'send'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite often, especially after reading meaningful books because I enjoy expressing my emotions and knowledge through writing. Additionally, I write during examinations as part of my studies.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Begin with a direct statement about what you like to write, then explain why, using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'. Avoid vague phrases like 'some challenging' and be specific about the emotions or experiences you write about.

Ejemplo: I enjoy writing about my daily life, especially the emotions I experience in the morning or after facing challenges, because it helps me express my feelings and reflect on my experiences.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why your writing might change using linking words like 'because' or 'as'. Use correct grammar and avoid vague phrases like 'my favorite thing is share'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe the things I write will change in the future because as I grow older, my thoughts and feelings will evolve, which will influence how I express myself in writing.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs clearer expression and better vocabulary. Begin with a direct statement of your preference, then explain why using linking words like 'because'. Use more precise phrases such as 'handwriting feels more emotional' and avoid unclear expressions like 'send your mood into your right'.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and emotional; I can immediately convey my mood through my writing, which makes it more meaningful when sharing with others.

× Yes, I always write after reading meaningful books as my favorite thing.

✓ Yes, I always write after reading meaningful books because it is my favourite thing.

The original sentence lacks a proper conjunction to connect the clauses. Using 'because' clarifies the reason and improves sentence structure.

× I love the way that I can send all my emotion and knowledge in the writing.

✓ I love the way that I can express all my emotions and knowledge in writing.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used here; 'in writing' is the correct phrase. Also, 'send' is not appropriate; 'express' fits better. 'Emotion' should be plural as 'emotions'.

× Also, I have to write when I have an examination.

✓ Also, I have to write when I have an examination.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I'd love to write about my daily life, such as the emotion that I go through in the morning or after some challenging, I feel very excited to express my emotions and my knowledge.

✓ I'd love to write about my daily life, such as the emotions that I go through in the morning or after some challenges. I feel very excited to express my emotions and my knowledge.

The word 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context. 'Some challenging' is incorrect; it should be 'some challenges'. The original sentence is a run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× Yes, maybe in the future, because when I grow up, my thought is different, therefore how I writing the way I can express my feelings and my knowledge is more much more different.

✓ Yes, maybe in the future, because when I grow up, my thoughts will be different; therefore, the way I write to express my feelings and my knowledge will be much different.

'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts'. 'How I writing' is incorrect; it should be 'the way I write'. The sentence mixes tenses and needs future tense consistency. 'More much more different' is redundant; 'much different' suffices.

× For example, maybe my favorite thing is share.

✓ For example, maybe my favourite thing is sharing.

'Share' is a verb; here, a noun or gerund 'sharing' is needed to fit the sentence structure.

× I prefer handwriting when I writing because I think it's more emotion like you can immediately send your mood into your right and it's also meaningful when you send it to another person.

✓ I prefer handwriting when I write because I think it's more emotional; you can immediately convey your mood through your writing, and it's also meaningful when you send it to another person.

'When I writing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I write'. 'More emotion' should be 'more emotional'. 'Send your mood into your right' is unclear and incorrect; 'convey your mood through your writing' is clearer and grammatically correct.