Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add a clear reason with proper sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are coherent.

Ejemplo: No, I do not write a lot. However, I write important things when necessary, especially to remember tasks or information I might forget later.

Sugerencia: Your answer is too long and a bit confusing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Also, correct grammar and avoid filler words like 'yeah'.

Ejemplo: I do not usually like writing, but when I feel stressed, I write to express my thoughts and feelings, especially when no one is around to listen.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use clear sentences and linking words to explain different situations. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. For example, I do not change my exam answers, but when I write personal notes or feelings, I may erase or edit them later.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more formal language and clearer sentence structure. Avoid filler words like 'yeah' and use linking words to explain your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing because my handwriting is often difficult for others to read. Therefore, typing ensures my writing is clear and easy to understand.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to answer directly, use correct grammar, and provide specific examples with linking words to explain your habit.

Ejemplo: I keep a diary regularly because it helps me remember important things from meetings and my personal life. For example, I write down what I have done each day when I am busy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but needs better sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar mistakes for better fluency.

Ejemplo: I usually use my mobile phone to record my life because it is always with me. Additionally, I write important notes in my diary. However, I prefer the mobile phone since I can easily edit or delete notes.

× Often I write something important when required that if I forgot that things in that situation I write the things.

✓ Often I write something important when required, and if I forget those things in that situation, I write them down.

The sentence has incorrect verb tense and awkward phrasing. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context. 'That things' is incorrect; it should be 'those things' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs conjunctions for clarity.

× As far as I know, I do not like to write, but yeah, sometimes when I am very stressful and I want to express my thought or I want to explain that how I feel in that condition, if nobody is there, I only write my whole the things or my expression.

✓ As far as I know, I do not like to write, but sometimes when I am very stressed and want to express my thoughts or explain how I feel in that condition, if nobody is there, I only write down all my thoughts or my expressions.

'Stressful' is an adjective describing a situation, but here the speaker is describing their feeling, so 'stressed' is correct. 'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to match the context. 'Write my whole the things' is incorrect; it should be 'write down all my thoughts or expressions' for clarity and correctness.

× I think that is depend on the situation that what you write in which situation.

✓ I think that depends on the situation and what you write in each situation.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the subject 'that'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Like an example if I am I write something during my examination then I do not change that writing.

✓ For example, if I write something during my examination, then I do not change that writing.

The phrase 'if I am I write' is incorrect and redundant. It should be simplified to 'if I write'. The sentence also needs commas for clarity.

× But if I write for myself as I express my feelings, I want to write down some important notes at that time I can erase.

✓ But if I write for myself to express my feelings, I want to write down some important notes, and at that time I can erase them.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and missing conjunctions. 'As I express' should be 'to express' to indicate purpose. Also, 'at that time I can erase' needs a conjunction and object 'them' for clarity.

× I prefer typing because personally my handwriting is not good enough to understand other people that what is ever written.

✓ I prefer typing because personally my handwriting is not good enough for other people to understand what is written.

The pronoun usage is incorrect and confusing. 'To understand other people that what is ever written' is incorrect. It should be 'for other people to understand what is written' to correctly express the idea.

× I always give Diaries because it is helps to remember and note down the important things during the meetings and also during my personal things also like an example if I remember my important things that what I have done today so I will write it down at that time because our busy.

✓ I always keep diaries because they help me remember and note down important things during meetings and also personal matters. For example, if I remember important things I have done today, I write them down at that time because we are busy.

'Give Diaries' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep diaries'. 'It is helps' is incorrect; it should be 'they help'. 'During my personal things' is awkward; 'personal matters' is better. 'Our busy' is incorrect; it should be 'we are busy'. The sentence also needs to be split for clarity.

× I usually prefer the mobile phones because mobile phones it's always available with me.

✓ I usually prefer mobile phones because they are always available to me.

'Mobile phones it's' is incorrect; 'they are' is the correct pronoun and verb agreement. Also, 'available with me' should be 'available to me' for correct preposition usage.

× I also prefer note it down to the some important things in the diary also.

✓ I also prefer to note down some important things in the diary.

The phrase 'note it down to the some important things' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'note down some important things'. The preposition 'to' and article 'the' are unnecessary here.

× But generally I prefer mobile because it can be erased or it can be removed from your noted pad.

✓ But generally I prefer mobile because notes can be erased or removed from your notepad.

'It can be erased' is unclear; 'notes' is the subject that can be erased. 'Noted pad' is incorrect; the correct word is 'notepad'. The pronoun usage and noun form need correction.