Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答较为自然，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议简化句子，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ejemplo: Yes, I write a lot, especially at university, where I often have to complete essays and other assignments. Writing has become an essential part of my daily routine.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更具体的内容。

Ejemplo: I like to keep a diary where I record my daily activities and achievements. Writing helps me build confidence and remember important events.

Sugerencia: 回答内容重复且语法有误。建议使用更连贯的句子，并丰富细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Since my life experiences change daily, the entries in my diary vary accordingly, reflecting different events and feelings.

Sugerencia: 回答中有过多的语气词，影响流畅性。建议减少口头语，使用更自然的表达。

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting over typing because it reduces screen time, which is better for my eyes and overall health.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更清晰。

Ejemplo: I keep a diary every day to reflect on my activities and achievements, which helps me stay confident and focused on my goals.

Sugerencia: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构稍显复杂。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达。

Ejemplo: Besides keeping a diary, I often call my mother to share my daily experiences and achievements. She gives me advice that helps me improve and brings us closer.

× I have many courseworks like writing essays and so on.

✓ I have many coursework assignments like writing essays and so on.

“coursework”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“courseworks”，应使用“coursework assignments”来表达多个作业。

× I always keep the diary like what did I do today and what achievements that I achieve and so on.

✓ I always keep a diary about what I did today and what achievements I have made, and so on.

“what did I do today”是疑问句结构，作为宾语从句应使用陈述句结构“what I did today”。“what achievements that I achieve”结构不正确，应改为“what achievements I have made”以表达完成时态。

× By writing these things I can feel more confident and also memory the things that happened.

✓ By writing these things I can feel more confident and also remember the things that happened.

“memory”是名词，句中应使用动词“remember”表示“记住”。

× I like keeping a diary which record the events that happened today.

✓ I like keeping a diary which records the events that happened today.

关系代词“which”指代单数“diary”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“records”。

× I keep Diaries every day because I want to know what did I do today and would achievement I make today.

✓ I keep a diary every day because I want to know what I did today and what achievements I made today.

“Diaries”复数形式不符合语境，通常保持单数形式“a diary”。“what did I do today”应为陈述句“what I did today”。“would achievement”结构错误，应为“what achievements”。

× Besides keeping Diaries, I usually make phone calls with my mother to tell her the experience and achievements that I made today.

✓ Besides keeping a diary, I usually make phone calls to my mother to tell her about the experiences and achievements I made today.

“make phone calls with my mother”表达不准确，应为“make phone calls to my mother”。“experience”应使用复数“experiences”表示多项经历。

× After doing that, my mother will give me some advice and feedback which could help me to improve myself and also strengthen our relationship.

✓ After doing that, my mother will give me some advice and feedback which could help me improve myself and also strengthen our relationship.

“help me to improve”中“to”可省略，英语中“help”后接动词不定式时常省略“to”，使表达更自然。