Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples. Use correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g., 'write emails to my manager' not 'need to emails'). Avoid repetition and filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I write quite a lot, mainly for work. For example, I regularly write emails to my manager to update her about the team and store safety, and I also update the UMM document with new information.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and then one clear reason with a concrete example. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'when it comes to writing' and 'in different categories'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' coherently.

Ejemplo: I prefer writing plans because it helps me organize tasks clearly. For instance, I divide a plan into categories such as goals, deadlines, and resources, so I can analyze each part easily.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tenses and vocabulary. Say why and how your writing will change with specific examples (e.g., more varied vocabulary, better grammar). Avoid vague phrases and filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, my writing will improve over time as my English vocabulary and grammar get better. For example, after practicing for several months I now use more precise words and fewer grammar mistakes when writing reports.

Sugerencia: State preference clearly, then give a specific reason and an example. Use correct expressions (e.g., 'I prefer handwriting because it gives me a tactile feeling' and 'when I hold a pen'). Keep it concise and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because the tactile feeling of holding a pen helps me think more creatively. For example, I often brainstorm ideas on paper before typing them up.

Sugerencia: Give a clear frequency (e.g., 'I don't keep a diary daily'), then explain an alternative with details. Correct noun and verb forms ('diary', 'I take notes on my phone') and avoid filler words.

Ejemplo: I don't keep a daily diary, but I often use my phone to take notes. For example, I save shopping lists and reminders as notes so I can quickly review what I need to do.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use correct verb phrases (e.g., 'One method I use is taking photos' and 'I also screenshot web pages'). Provide one clear example and avoid unclear expressions like 'skin shock the screen'.

Ejemplo: One method I use is taking photos of moments I want to remember, and I also take screenshots of useful web pages. For example, I photograph important receipts and screenshot recipes I want to try later.

× Well yes in my everyday life I do have a lot of writings especially at work when I need to emails my manager and keep her updated about the team and the safety in the store and for in in their. I also need to write the information in the updated UMM.

✓ Well yes, in my everyday life I do a lot of writing, especially at work when I need to email my manager and keep her updated about the team and safety in the store. I also need to write information in the updated UMM.

Multiple issues: incorrect noun form 'writings' should be the uncountable noun 'writing'; phrase 'need to emails' incorrectly uses plural verb form—should be the base form 'email' after 'need to'; extra and repeated words 'for in in their' are unclear and removed; 'the information' can be simplified to 'information' and word order improved. Suggestion: keep nouns in correct countability, use base verb after 'need to', remove redundant words, and split into shorter sentences for clarity.

× Well, umm, when it come to writing, I would always prefer writing about the plans because that how I can, umm, write everything in details and, uh, in a different categories. So make it easier for me to umm, umm, umm, analyze and, you know, imagining.

✓ Well, umm, when it comes to writing, I would always prefer writing about plans because that is how I can write everything in detail and in different categories, which makes it easier for me to analyze and imagine.

Errors: 'come' should be third-person singular 'comes' (present tense agreement); 'that how' missing verb 'is'; 'in details' should be 'in detail' (adverbial phrase); 'a different categories' mix of singular article with plural noun—use 'different categories' without 'a'; sentence fragments like 'So make it easier' need subject and verb ('which makes it easier'); 'imagining' should be base verb 'imagine' to match parallel structure. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, correct articles with plural nouns, use parallel verb forms, and combine clauses properly.

× Well, that definitely my writing would change over the time, especially because of my English vocabulary industrial umm, and the grammar structure might be improving, uh, one day by one day. So, and at the moment it's quite improving after, umm, someone of practicing. So in the future it would make a little bit.

✓ Well, my writing will definitely change over time, especially as my English vocabulary improves and my grammar structures become better day by day. At the moment it is improving after some practice, so in the future it will improve a little more.

Issues: word order and auxiliary verbs: 'that definitely my writing would change' reordered and tense adjusted to 'will definitely change'; 'over the time' should be 'over time'; 'vocabulary industrial' is incorrect—likely 'vocabulary improves'; 'grammar structure might be improving, one day by one day' awkward—use 'grammar structures become better day by day'; 'someone of practicing' incorrect phrase—use 'some practice'; 'it would make a little bit' unclear—use 'it will improve a little more'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and idiomatic phrases, simplify and sequence ideas, and avoid literal translations.

× Well, I always prefer handwriting because if you mere tactical feelings when I, when I'm holding a pens and, uh, writing on a piece of paper, it will give me, umm, the sense of uh, uh, creative and, umm, analysing, uh, what I'm writing more.

✓ Well, I always prefer handwriting because the tactile feeling when I'm holding a pen and writing on a piece of paper gives me a greater sense of creativity and helps me analyze what I'm writing.

Errors: 'mere tactical feelings' misused—should be 'the tactile feeling'; pronoun and article issues: 'a pens' should be singular 'a pen'; unnecessary second-person 'if you' removed to keep first-person focus; 'the sense of creative and analysing' incorrect forms—use 'a sense of creativity' and 'helps me analyze'. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and articles, keep consistent pronouns, and use gerund/noun forms ('creativity', 'analysis') where appropriate.

× Well, honestly speaking, I don't have a Diaries in my everyday life, but however, I usually keep things umm uh, and off the note on my phones because that's how I easily umm uh, keep myself updated and re memorize umm, what are the things I need to.

✓ Well, honestly speaking, I don't keep a diary every day; however, I usually make notes on my phone because that's how I easily keep myself updated and remember the things I need to.

Errors: 'a Diaries' wrong article and plural—should be 'a diary' or 'diaries' without 'a'; 'but however' redundant—use 'however' or 'but'; 'off the note on my phones' incorrect—use 'make notes on my phone'; 're memorize' should be 'remember'; question-word order 'what are the things I need to' awkward—use 'the things I need to'. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural with articles, avoid redundant conjunctions, and use standard collocations like 'take notes' or 'make notes on my phone'.

× One of the method I usually do in my everyday life is taking off photos of something that I really want to memorize for the long term especially, I usually umm, skin shock the the screen of something online that I wanna keep it and memorize it later.

✓ One of the methods I usually use in my everyday life is taking photos of things that I really want to remember for the long term. Especially, I usually screenshot something on the screen online that I want to keep and save to view later.

Errors: 'One of the method' should be 'One of the methods' (quantifier with plural noun); 'taking off photos' incorrect verb—use 'taking photos' or 'taking pictures'; 'memorize for the long term' better as 'remember for the long term'; 'skin shock the the screen' is garbled—intended 'screenshot the screen' or 'take a screenshot'; 'wanna' informal—use 'want to'. Suggestion: match 'one of the' with plural noun, use correct verb phrases ('take photos', 'take a screenshot'), and use formal 'want to' in tests.