Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct, use a clear topic sentence, avoid long hesitations and repetition. Give one or two specific reasons with a linking phrase (e.g., “because” or “however”), and keep it within 2–4 concise sentences. Focus on natural phrasing: say whether you write often, then briefly explain why and how that has changed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to write a lot by hand because I find it helps me concentrate and remember information. However, nowadays I mostly type on a laptop or phone because it’s faster and easier to organize notes digitally.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question (e.g., “I like to write…”). Use linking words like “for example” or “such as” and give specific, coherent reasons. Avoid unfinished sentences and reduce repetitions; be precise about what you write and why.

Ejemplo: I like to write a mix of creative and practical things. For example, I doodle and sketch for fun, and I write down financial calculations and notes when I’m researching property because those details help me make buying decisions.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly: state whether you think your writing will change, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words like “because” or “as”. Avoid unclear phrases and ensure tense/word choices are natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think my writing will change as my interests and responsibilities change. For instance, I expect to write more planning documents and use AI tools for research and decision-making when I focus on investments.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference or say you use both, then explain with two concise reasons using linking words (“because”, “however”). Remove filler words (“umm”) and correct small errors (e.g., “birthday cards”). Keep sentences natural and within the length limit.

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting for sentimental things like birthday cards and thank-you notes because it feels more personal and shows effort. However, I use typing for work and long documents because it’s faster and easier to edit.

Sugerencia: Give a direct frequency answer (e.g., “I rarely keep a diary” or “I don’t keep one now”), then explain briefly how you record personal thoughts. Avoid rambling and filler words; use clear linking words like “because” or “instead”.

Ejemplo: I rarely keep a physical diary these days. Instead, I record my thoughts and daily activities on social media or a notes app because it’s more convenient and easier to search later.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with one main method, then give 1–2 specific examples using linking words like “for example” or “such as”. Avoid vague or confusing phrases and unnecessary repetitions.

Ejemplo: I mainly use social media to record my life. For example, I post short videos on TikTok about trips and milestones, and I write longer travel posts or essays on my blog to keep a more detailed record.

× Hands on a paper or pen on pencil on the piece of paper in front of me and to actually write.

✓ I have a piece of paper and a pen in front of me to actually write.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear because words are repeated and the structure lacks a main verb and proper noun phrases. Reconstruct the sentence with a clear subject ('I'), verb ('have'), and objects ('a piece of paper and a pen') to make the meaning explicit and grammatically correct.

× And though back in the days I actually hand wrote a lot because I believe the handwriting fosters cognitive engagement and the activation of meticulousness when you know, putting things on paper or perhaps.

✓ Back in the day I hand-wrote a lot because I believe handwriting fosters cognitive engagement and attention to detail when putting things on paper.

Problems: 'though back in the days' is unidiomatic, 'hand wrote' should be hyphenated as 'hand-wrote' or written as two words in past tense, and 'activation of meticulousness' is awkward; use 'attention to detail'. Also remove filler phrases like 'you know' and 'or perhaps' for clarity.

× But this day things have changed.

✓ But nowadays things have changed.

'This day' is not idiomatic when referring to current times. Use 'nowadays' or 'these days'. The present perfect 'have changed' is correct but phrase choice needed improvement.

× A whole bunch of things, doodling, sketching, mathematical formulas or numbers and complex numbers or those necessary data and information that can help me to call a shot and put a trigger on a buying a property buying decisions.

✓ I write a whole bunch of things: doodles, sketches, mathematical formulas and data that help me make decisions about buying property.

The original is a run-on with redundancy ('complex numbers or those necessary data') and unidiomatic phrases ('call a shot', 'put a trigger on a buying a property'). Simplify and use correct collocations: 'make decisions about buying property' and list items clearly.

× I would say the content of writing is heavily dependent on individual preferences and.

✓ I would say the content I write heavily depends on individual preferences.

The original ends abruptly with 'and.' Rearrange to a complete sentence: subject and verb agreement and remove trailing conjunction.

× Certainly if I am more mature with Tam and as I grow up, the sort of content I would write and be digitally on manually would definitely shift according to my personal interest and individual inclination.

✓ Certainly, as I mature and grow up, the sort of content I write, whether digitally or manually, will definitely shift according to my personal interests and inclinations.

Issues: tense consistency and awkward phrase 'more mature with Tam'. Use 'as I mature' and future 'will shift' to express change over time. Use parallel phrasing 'whether digitally or manually' and plural 'interests' and 'inclinations' for natural expression.

× I would say it is. I'm shifting towards AI generated content and plans for purchasing decisions.

✓ I am shifting toward AI-generated content and using it to plan purchasing decisions.

Original fragments 'I would say it is.' is incomplete. 'Shifting towards' is acceptable but 'toward' and hyphenate 'AI-generated'. Clarify the purpose: 'using it to plan purchasing decisions.' Maintain present progressive for ongoing change.

× Umm handwriting is uh, perfectly umm, suitable for me when it comes to sentimental content such as letters, uh, birthday cost, thank you notes, umm, because umm handwriting umm would enhance his umm, emotional engagement and umm and the act of labour.

✓ Handwriting is perfectly suitable for me when it comes to sentimental content such as letters, birthday cards, and thank-you notes because handwriting enhances emotional engagement and shows effort.

Problems: fillers like 'umm', incorrect 'birthday cost' should be 'birthday cards', incorrect pronoun 'his' and awkward 'act of labour'. Clean the sentence, correct vocabulary and pronoun, and use 'shows effort' for natural phrasing.

× The labour intensive test umm, shows that you care.

✓ The labor-intensive nature of handwriting shows that you care.

Original awkward 'labour intensive test' is ungrammatical. Use the adjectival phrase 'labor-intensive' and 'nature of handwriting' to make the sentence grammatical and clear.

× But that being said, typing is more convenient and that level of convenience.

✓ But that being said, typing is more convenient.

The phrase 'and that level of convenience' is redundant and creates a fragment. Remove redundancy to form a concise sentence.

× I'm not a really often, umm, as far as I'm concerned, now a day is we no longer umm, keep in our possessions physical, umm, sort of diary and physical format or publications that show umm, you know, personal or daily content.

✓ I don't keep a diary very often. Nowadays we no longer keep physical diaries or publications showing personal daily content in our possessions.

Original contains quantifier errors and awkward phrasing ('I'm not a really often'). Correct to 'I don't keep a diary very often' and 'Nowadays we no longer keep physical diaries' for natural quantifier and noun usage.

× Umm, but we transitioned it umm, into a more digital formats, umm, such as Facebook, uh, pages and the village and.

✓ We have transitioned to more digital formats, such as Facebook pages and blogs.

Use correct verb-preposition collocation 'transitioned to' (not 'into it') and correct plural agreement 'formats'. 'The village' is unclear; likely 'blogs' fits context.

× I would post on various social media platforms to record the daily happenings and and the important unforgettable milestones of my life such as Tiktok contents and those new entries on my, you know, travel flower on my writing blouse that I documented all sort of essays.

✓ I post on various social media platforms to record daily happenings and important milestones of my life, such as TikTok videos and blog entries about my travels and writing, where I document various essays.

Original is a long, confused sentence with repetition and incorrect phrases ('travel flower', 'writing blouse'). Clean structure, correct platform names ('TikTok'), and use clear nouns ('videos', 'blog entries') and verbs 'post' and 'document' for coherence.