Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Correct tense and pronoun errors (e.g., "weekly journal", "in the future"). Avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes. I write a weekly journal to record what happened during the week. For example, I note one skill I want to improve and one habit I want to keep, which helps me track progress.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and a specific reason with a linking word. Replace vague phrases ("complete person") with clearer explanations and avoid filler words like "just."

Ejemplo: I like to write short stories about daily events because they remind me of lessons I learned. For instance, I wrote about a conversation with a friend that taught me to listen more carefully.

Sugerencia: Clarify the idea and fix pronouns and tense. Explain how your writing would change (opinion, tone, details) with a clear example and logical linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes. My writing often changes as I reflect; for example, I might first write angrily about a teacher's strictness, but later I would revise the entry to acknowledge positive intentions after thinking more calmly.

Sugerencia: Remove fillers and be concise. Give one clear reason and one specific example of convenience. Use natural phrases like "take notes" and avoid unnecessary hesitation sounds.

Ejemplo: I prefer typing because it's more convenient. For example, I carry my phone everywhere, so I can quickly type notes or ideas whenever they occur.

Sugerencia: Use correct phrasing ("I keep a weekly journal once a week" is redundant—say "I keep a weekly journal"). Limit to two sentences: frequency and a brief reason with a specific example.

Ejemplo: I keep a weekly journal to record important moments. For example, every Sunday I summarize one success and one lesson from the past week to help me learn and improve.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating the same information; mention alternative methods (photos, voice notes, apps) with a brief reason and an example. Correct grammar ("helps" not "helps me to").

Ejemplo: Besides a weekly journal, I use my phone's voice notes to record quick thoughts and take photos of events. For example, I record a short voice memo after a meaningful conversation so I don't forget details.

× Yes, I have the habit of writing a week journal to record what had happened in this week and I think it could help me to check what I have to improve in your future and what I just need to keep.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of writing a weekly journal to record what has happened during the week, and I think it helps me see what I need to improve in the future and what I should keep.

'a week journal' is incorrect; use 'a weekly journal' (adjective form) or 'a weeklong journal'. 'what had happened' uses past perfect unnecessarily; use present perfect 'what has happened' to link past events to the present. 'in your future' is wrong pronoun and article; use 'in the future'. 'what I just need to keep' is informal and awkward; 'what I should keep' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I just like to write some small stories that happened in my daily life because I think those small things can help me become a complete person and I have to remember them.

✓ I like to write short stories about things that happen in my daily life because I think those small events can help me grow as a person, and I need to remember them.

'I just like' is acceptable but 'I just like to write some small stories that happened' mixes time references; use simple present 'I like to write' and present 'that happen' to describe habitual actions. 'small stories' -> 'short stories' is more natural. 'become a complete person' is awkward; 'grow as a person' is a more natural expression. 'I have to remember them' -> 'I need to remember them' fits tone.

× For example, maybe today I have written a story about my teacher and I expressed my dissatisfaction to her because of his bad temper and later maybe I will realize his.

✓ For example, today I wrote a story about my teacher and expressed my dissatisfaction with her because of her bad temper, and later I might realize it.

Mixed tenses and pronouns: 'maybe today I have written' mixes modality and present perfect; use simple past 'today I wrote' or present perfect 'I have written' (choose one). 'I expressed my dissatisfaction to her' is better as 'expressed my dissatisfaction with her'. 'because of his bad temper' uses wrong gender pronoun; should match 'her'. 'later maybe I will realize his' is ungrammatical; 'later I might realize it' is concise and correct.

× Umm, nowadays I prefer typing while I am writing because I think it's more convenient.

✓ Umm, nowadays I prefer typing when I write because I think it's more convenient.

'prefer typing while I am writing' is redundant and wordy; 'prefer typing when I write' is more natural. Verb forms should be consistent: use base form 'write' after 'when' to indicate habitual action.

× I always carry my phone, uh, with myself, so every time I'd like to, umm, take down something, I can write on my phone.

✓ I always carry my phone with me, so whenever I want to note something down, I can write it on my phone.

'carry my phone with myself' is incorrect; use 'with me'. 'every time I'd like to, umm, take down something' is awkward; 'whenever I want to note something down' is natural. 'write on my phone' -> 'write it on my phone' clarifies the object.

× Maybe once a week I just keep week journal to record some important moments that had happened within this week and I think it's a good way to help me reflect and learn from some small things happening in my day life.

✓ Maybe once a week I keep a weekly journal to record important moments that have happened during the week, and I think it's a good way to help me reflect and learn from small things that happen in my daily life.

Use 'a weekly journal' not 'week journal' and include the article 'a'. 'that had happened' should be present perfect 'that have happened' to relate past events to now. 'within this week' -> 'during the week'. 'day life' -> 'daily life'. Adjust word order and remove unnecessary 'just'.

× I have the habit of writing a weekly journal about once a week. UMM and I will write down the important memorable moments that have happened during this week.

✓ I have the habit of writing a weekly journal about once a week, and I write down the important memorable moments that have happened during the week.

'UMM and I will write down' is incorrect; filler 'umm' should be removed and tense should be consistent. Use present simple 'I write down' or present perfect for the events. Repeating 'about once a week' and 'weekly' is redundant; keep one.

× It can also helps me to reflect and learn from this experience.

✓ It can also help me reflect and learn from these experiences.

'can also helps' is incorrect verb form; after modal 'can' use base verb 'help'. 'this experience' is singular but context implies multiple entries; use plural 'these experiences'. 'to reflect' -> 'reflect' after 'help' is more natural.