Writing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 用简洁自然的句子直接回答问题，避免时态和词汇错误；把细节分成1-2个连贯句子，使用连接词（e.g. because, so）并改正常见词汇拼写（例如 diary, exercise, e-pencil）。可以把“最近准备雅思，所以写得多”作为主句，随后说明写作方式和过去习惯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Recently I’ve been preparing for the IELTS exam, so I’ve been doing a lot of writing on my iPad with an e‑pencil. I also used to keep a diary every day in the past.

Sugerencia: 回答要先给出主题句（我喜欢写日记），接着用2句具体说明写作内容和原因，避免用不自然或错误的词（aspired→used to / like to；down→sad），并用连接词（for example, because）使条理清楚。

Ejemplo: I like to write a diary because it helps me record my daily life and feelings. For example, I often note my emotions, interesting events, and reasons why I feel sad, so I can reflect later.

Sugerencia: 注意词汇和拼写错误（diarrhea→diary; frequency of taking→how often I keep one），句子要更简洁并使用连接词（as, because）。说明变化并给出原因，避免冗长或不自然的结构。

Ejemplo: Maybe. As I grow older, I will probably keep a diary less often because I need to spend more time on my studies and academic work.

Sugerencia: 先直接给出偏好（I prefer handwriting），然后用1-2句具体理由并使用连接词（because, moreover）。修正语法（I from a habit→I have a habit）并使用更自然表达（affects my workload→slows me down）。

Ejemplo: I prefer handwriting because I have a habit of taking notes and highlighting my textbooks with a pencil. Moreover, my typing speed is quite slow, so handwriting is more efficient for me.

Sugerencia: 先给出现在的频率，然后对比过去并说明原因。修正词汇拼写（diary, diarrhea）、数量表达（five times a week）和语法（sleep enough→to get enough sleep）。保持句子数量不超过5句且连贯。

Ejemplo: I usually write in my diary about twice a week now. When I was in primary school I wrote nearly five times a week, but nowadays I’m busier and try to get enough sleep, so I write less.

Sugerencia: 直接回答并给出具体例子，使用更自然的词汇（my phone and a camera；capture memories rather than memorize）。用连接词（for example）列举几类照片，并稍微精简表述使之更地道。

Ejemplo: I usually use my phone and a camera to record my life. For example, I take photos of landscapes, interesting scenes, and myself to capture memories for the future.

× For recent days I prepare for the IELTS exam so I do a lot of exercise and I usually use my E pencil to write on my iPad and in the past I used to take a diary everyday.

✓ These days I am preparing for the IELTS exam, so I do a lot of practice. I usually use my Apple Pencil to write on my iPad, and in the past I used to keep a diary every day.

问题类型：现在进行时与一般现在时混用不当。原句中“For recent days I prepare”与语境不符，应使用现在进行时表示正在进行的准备（These days I am preparing）。另外“a lot of exercise”在写作/练习语境下应改为“a lot of practice”；“E pencil”应为Apple Pencil，且“take a diary”用词不当，应为“keep a diary”或“write in a diary”。建议：当描述目前正在进行的动作用现在进行时（am/is/are + -ing），习惯性动作用一般现在时。注意固定搭配（keep a diary, Apple Pencil）。

× I aspired to take a diary every day and I can write on the emotion and the things I experience or why I am down these days to record my life on a daily basis.

✓ I used to keep a diary every day where I could write about my emotions and the things I experienced, or why I have been feeling down recently, to record my daily life.

问题类型：动词过去分词/时态与搭配错误。原句“I aspired to take a diary”语义和时态不对，应该表达“过去常做”的习惯用“used to”或“would”。“write on the emotion”搭配错误，应为“write about my emotions”。“the things I experience”在谈过去经历时应用过去时或现在完成时“experienced / have experienced”。建议：使用正确短语（keep a diary, write about），根据时间背景选择过去时或现在完成时。

× Maybe as I grow up my frequency of taking diarrhea is down.

✓ Maybe as I grow up the frequency with which I keep a diary will decrease.

问题类型：时态与词汇错误。原句用词错误，将“diarrhea（腹泻）”误用，正确应为“diary（日记）”。此外“my frequency of taking … is down”结构不自然，关于未来趋势应使用“will decrease”或“has decreased”。建议：注意同形近词区分（diary 与 diarrhea），用更自然的表达（the frequency of keeping a diary will decrease / has decreased）。

× Instead of it, I maybe need to use more time to tackle with my study and academics become more important for me.

✓ Instead, I may need to spend more time dealing with my studies, and academics are becoming more important to me.

问题类型：介词与动词搭配错误。“Instead of it”用法不当，可直接用“Instead”。“I maybe need”应为“I may need”。“use more time to tackle with my study”中“tackle with”搭配错误，常用“tackle”或“deal with”；“my study”应为复数或不可数“my studies”。最后分句时态应为进行性“are becoming”。建议：注意固定搭配（deal with / tackle），使用正确小品词（may）和名词形式（studies）。

× It's no doubt that I would choose the handwriting I from a habit of using pencil to take notes and highlight on my textbook.

✓ There is no doubt that I would choose handwriting because I have a habit of using a pencil to take notes and highlight in my textbook.

问题类型：代词与词序用法错误。原句“It’s no doubt that”应为“There is no doubt that”。“the handwriting I from a habit”词序和结构混乱，应改为“choose handwriting because I have a habit of…”。“using pencil”需加冠词“a pencil”；“highlight on my textbook”介词应为“in”。建议：注意固定表达（There is no doubt that）、因果连词（because）和常用介词（highlight in/on）。

× In addition, my typing speed is extremely slow and it affects my workload.

✓ In addition, my typing speed is extremely slow, which affects my workload.

问题类型：现在时与句子衔接。原句语法基本正确，但衔接更自然应使用非限定性定语从句“which affects my workload”来说明前一句的结果。建议：用“which”连接说明性从句，使句子更自然流畅。

× When I was in primary school I needed to take diary about 5 * a week or even more.

✓ When I was in primary school I used to keep a diary about five times a week or even more.

问题类型：过去时与措辞错误。原句“needed to take diary”不自然，应为“used to keep a diary”或“kept a diary”。数字写法也改为“five times a week”。建议：描述过去习惯用“used to”或一般过去时，注意常用搭配（keep a diary/five times a week）。

× But now I don't have much time to do the things I want, even sleep enough, so I usually take diarrhea twice.

✓ But now I don't have much time to do the things I want, not even enough time to sleep, so I usually keep a diary twice a week.

问题类型：时态与词汇错误。再次将“diary”误写为“diarrhea”。“even sleep enough”词序不当，应为“not even enough time to sleep”。“take diarrhea twice”应为“keep a diary twice a week”或“write in my diary twice a week”。建议：注意词汇拼写、时间频率表达（twice a week）和否定结构（not even）。

× It's my CCD camera and my phone.

✓ I use my CCD camera and my phone.

问题类型：代词/句子结构错误。原句“It’s my CCD camera and my phone”结构不完整，听起来像在回答“what is it?”更自然要说明用途“it's my CCD camera and my phone”可理解但在上下文中更合适的是“I use my CCD camera and my phone”。建议：根据上下文补全句子，使用动词表达用途。

× There's nothing quite the feeling of taking pictures from my device.

✓ There's nothing quite like the feeling of taking pictures with my device.

问题类型：介词使用错误。“nothing quite the feeling”缺少介词“like”。“taking pictures from my device”应为“with my device”或“on my device”。建议：记住固定表达“nothing quite like”以及合适的工具介词“with / on”。

× I can photograph the landscape, the scenery and also myself to memorize in the future.

✓ I can photograph landscapes, scenery, and myself to remember them in the future.

问题类型：代词与动词搭配不当。“the landscape, the scenery”可改为复数“landscapes, scenery”。“to memorize in the future”用词不当，应该是“to remember them in the future”或“to keep memories for the future”。建议：使用正确动词（remember / keep memories）和复数形式以匹配泛指。