Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to use clearer vocabulary and avoid repeating the same words. Also, keep your answer concise and structured with a topic sentence and supporting details.

Ejemplo: I live in a hilly region where the weather is generally mild. Summers can be quite warm, while winters are cold and chilly, making it a place with distinct seasons.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making the sentence flow better. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I enjoy both cold and hot weather because in winter, I like wearing warm clothes like boots and shawls, while in summer, I prefer comfortable shorts and T-shirts.

Sugerencia: Good content but avoid repeating words and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to be more specific about why you like the rain.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because heavy rain refreshes the environment. For example, I enjoy sitting with a cup of coffee during the rainy season, which brings me peace and relaxation.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with clear and correct sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because I am often busy with my assignments and spending time with my friends.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to clearly state your opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

Ejemplo: I think climate change is mainly caused by human pollution, such as emissions from factories and vehicles, which harm the environment and affect the climate.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar.

Ejemplo: No, I prefer to stay in my city because I like its mild cold winters and warm summers. I feel comfortable living here.

× I live in a hilly region so it's basically milled cold and melt hot in the summer and when it when it's in winter time we can feel the cold winters, cold winter and cold here in the hilly region.

✓ I live in a hilly region so it's basically mild cold and mild hot in the summer and when it's winter time we can feel the cold winters here in the hilly region.

The words 'milled' and 'melt' are incorrect adjectives here. The correct adjective is 'mild' to describe moderate cold or hot weather. Also, 'cold winters, cold winter and cold' is redundant; simplifying to 'cold winters' is clearer.

× I prefer both of them because I love to wear warm clothes, boots and shawl when it's winter time and when when in summer time I like wearing shorts and T-shirt which is good for me.

✓ I prefer both of them because I love to wear warm clothes, boots, and a shawl in winter time, and in summer time I like wearing shorts and a T-shirt which is good for me.

Repeated 'when' is incorrect; also, 'and when when in summer time' is awkward. Use 'and in summer time' instead. Articles 'a' are needed before 'shawl' and 'T-shirt' as they are singular countable nouns.

× I would prefer wet weather rather than dry weather because in wet weather it rains heavily. I I love rain and I always enjoy rainy season while having a coffee. It is It is my favorite kind of weather which brings my soul peace so.

✓ I would prefer wet weather rather than dry weather because in wet weather it rains heavily. I love rain and I always enjoy the rainy season while having coffee. It is my favorite kind of weather which brings peace to my soul.

Repeated 'I' and 'It is' are errors. 'Rainy season' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Having a coffee' is better as 'having coffee' in this context. 'Brings my soul peace' is awkward; 'brings peace to my soul' is the correct expression.

× Actually no, I don't have the habit to check the weather forecast because I I'm always busy with my assignment and my days are went by with my friends and that's all.

✓ Actually no, I don't have the habit of checking the weather forecast because I'm always busy with my assignments and my days are spent with my friends and that's all.

'Habit to check' should be 'habit of checking'. 'My assignment' should be plural 'assignments' if referring to multiple tasks. 'My days are went by' is incorrect; the correct form is 'my days are spent' or 'my days go by'.

× I believe it's the pollution that we humans make increasing of bagels which is affecting our climate and use industries.

✓ I believe it's the pollution caused by humans, including the increase of vehicles, which is affecting our climate and industries.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors: 'make increasing of bagels' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'increase of vehicles'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× No, I don't want to migrate from my city to another city because I love weather. In my cities it is a mild cold and milled hot so I think I prefer my own city to live.

✓ No, I don't want to migrate from my city to another city because I love the weather. In my city, it is mildly cold and mildly hot, so I think I prefer my own city to live in.

'I love weather' needs the definite article 'the weather'. 'My cities' should be singular 'my city' as the speaker refers to their own city. 'Milled' is incorrect; 'mildly' is the correct adverb form. Also, 'to live' should be 'to live in' for correct preposition use.