Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer deer iluu todorhoi, todorhoilson ug helj, ug helbertee anhaarah heregtei. Jishee ni, 'My country has four distinct seasons, with hot summers and cold, snowy winters.' gesen meter bogino, todorhoi helber ashiglaarai.

Ejemplo: My country experiences four distinct seasons. For instance, summers are hot and sometimes windy, while winters are cold and snowy, with temperatures dropping significantly.

Sugerencia: Utga uchriig iluu todorhoi, todorhoilson ug ashiglan ilerhiileh heregtei. "Sun baking" gesen ug ni buruu, zuv ni "sunbathing" gesen ug ashiglah heregtei. Mөн, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy sunbathing at the beach during summer. For example, my family and I often swim and relax at the lake, which makes me happy and helps me appreciate nature's beauty.

Sugerencia: Utga uchriig todorhoi, bogino, todorhoi helber deer ilerhiileh heregtei. Link hiih ugiig iluu hereglej, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because the fresh, humid air after rain feels refreshing. For example, walking through wheat fields after rain makes me feel calm and peaceful.

Sugerencia: Utga uchriig iluu todorhoi, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei. "and from my daily activities more effectively" gesen heseg buruu, zuv helber ni "plan my daily activities better" gesen ug ashiglah heregtei.

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before leaving. This helps me choose suitable clothes and plan my daily activities better. For example, if rain is expected, I bring an umbrella or change my schedule.

Sugerencia: Utga uchriig todorhoi, buren helj, aldaa zovgui bichih heregtei. "melting glasses" gesen ug buruu, zuv ni "melting glaciers" gesen ug. Mөн, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei, ug duusgah heregtei.

Ejemplo: Climate change causes serious problems like melting glaciers and increased flooding. For example, countries near rivers often face more floods, which harm people and the environment.

Sugerencia: Utga uchriig todorhoi, buren helj, aldaa zovgui bichih heregtei. "I visiting" gesen heseg buruu, zuv ni "I would visit" gesen ug ashiglah heregtei. Mөн, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei, "uh" gesen ugig arilgaj bichih heregtei.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, since I live in a cold place, I would visit a warm city to enjoy different foods and outdoor activities.

× I prefer hot weather because during the summer I enjoy going to the beach and sun baking.

✓ I prefer hot weather because during the summer I enjoy going to the beach and sunbathing.

The phrase 'sun baking' is incorrect; the correct gerund form is 'sunbathing' which means to sit or lie in the sun to get a tan. Using the correct gerund form improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× which helps me feel happy and appreciate the beauty of the nature.

✓ which helps me feel happy and appreciate the beauty of nature.

The word 'nature' is a general concept and does not require the definite article 'the'. Removing 'the' before 'nature' is grammatically correct and sounds more natural.

× Knowing the weather in advance helps me choose appropriate clothes and from my daily activities more effectively.

✓ Knowing the weather in advance helps me choose appropriate clothes and plan my daily activities more effectively.

The phrase 'choose appropriate clothes and from my daily activities' is incorrect. The preposition 'from' is unnecessary and the verb 'plan' fits better to express organizing daily activities. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× if it is going to rain, I make sure to bring an umbrella or adjust my schedule to it getting wet.

✓ if it is going to rain, I make sure to bring an umbrella or adjust my schedule to avoid getting wet.

The phrase 'adjust my schedule to it getting wet' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'adjust my schedule to avoid getting wet' where 'avoid' properly connects the action to the purpose. This correction clarifies meaning and fixes prepositional misuse.

× Climate change is one of the most serious threats facing the world today because it causes many harmful effects such as melting glasses and sewer floating.

✓ Climate change is one of the most serious threats facing the world today because it causes many harmful effects such as melting glaciers and sewer flooding.

The words 'glasses' and 'sewer floating' are incorrect. The intended words are 'glaciers' (large ice masses) and 'sewer flooding' (overflow of sewers). Correct plural forms and word choice are necessary for accurate meaning.

× These changes not only damage humans but also affect.

✓ These changes not only damage humans but also affect the environment.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'affect'. Adding 'the environment' completes the sentence and clarifies what is affected, improving sentence structure and meaning.

× Uh, for example, I live in a cold place, so I visiting a warm city uh to enjoy different foods and outdoor activities.

✓ Uh, for example, I live in a cold place, so I visit a warm city to enjoy different foods and outdoor activities.

The phrase 'I visiting' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I visit' as the simple present tense is needed here. Using the correct verb form ensures subject-verb agreement and grammatical correctness.