Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“no matter in daytime or at night”应改为“whether it is daytime or nighttime”。此外，结尾句“it's not already good weather to stay outdoor”表达不够地道，建议改为“it's not very comfortable to stay outdoors”。

Ejemplo: The weather is quite hot right now because it's summer. The temperature ranges from 30 to 35 degrees Celsius, whether it is daytime or nighttime. It is also quite humid, around 70%. Therefore, it's not very comfortable to stay outdoors for long periods.

Sugerencia: 回答中出现了拼写错误，如“fries and crisps feeling”应为“fresh and crisp feeling”。此外，表达可以更自然流畅，避免重复和不准确的词汇。

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it lets me wear a variety of clothes, especially my favorite jackets and winter outfits. In summer, I usually just wear shorts and T-shirts, which can be a bit boring. I also enjoy the fresh and crisp feeling of cold air.

Sugerencia: 回答较为清晰，但“clothings”应改为“clothes”，并且可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。建议增加具体细节来丰富内容。

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because I enjoy exercising. However, when I exercise in the summer, I sweat a lot, and my clothes become very wet, which is uncomfortable. Therefore, dry weather is much better for me.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法和表达不够自然的问题，如“everything can be in rainy weather”不准确，建议改为“it often rains in Taiwan”。同时，时态应保持一致，避免“usually”与“actually checked”混用。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast because it often rains in Taiwan. I always check it before going to work to see if I need to bring an umbrella. So, I check the weather forecast every day.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达有待改进，如“the climate changes quite a lot”应为“the climate has changed a lot”。此外，句子连接不够自然，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ejemplo: I think the climate has changed a lot in recent years due to global warming. Summers are much hotter compared to ten years ago. For example, when I was in Europe before, the summer temperature was around 20 degrees Celsius, but now it can reach 30 degrees, so air conditioning is necessary.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from where I live. For example, I want to visit Norway, Finland, and Iceland because their cold weather is fascinating, and I really love snow.

× The temperature is between 30 to 35° no matter in daytime or at night.

✓ The temperature is between 30 and 35° no matter if it is daytime or at night.

这里“between”后面应该用“and”连接两个数值，而不是“to”。另外，表达“无论白天还是晚上”时，应该用完整的从句结构“no matter if it is daytime or at night”。

× So overall it's not already good weather to stay outdoor.

✓ So overall it's not good weather to stay outdoors.

“stay outdoor”中的“outdoor”应改为副词形式“outdoors”，表示“在户外”。

× I also enjoy the fries and crisps feeling of cold air.

✓ I also enjoy the fresh and crisp feeling of cold air.

“fries and crisps”是指薯条和薯片，错误使用。应使用形容词“fresh”和“crisp”来形容空气的感觉。

× ...in the end my clothings are so wet, which is not comfortable at all.

✓ ...in the end my clothes are so wet, which is not comfortable at all.

“clothings”不是正确的复数形式，正确的复数形式是“clothes”，表示衣服。

× So I actually checked the weather forecast every day.

✓ So I actually check the weather forecast every day.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“check”，而不是过去时“checked”。

× I think the climate changes quite a lot in recent years because of the global warming.

✓ I think the climate has changed quite a lot in recent years because of global warming.

“in recent years”表示从过去到现在的变化，应使用现在完成时“has changed”而不是一般现在时“changes”。另外，“global warming”前不需要冠词“the”。

× The summer is getting much hotter compared to 10 years ago.

✓ Summer is getting much hotter compared to 10 years ago.

表示季节时，通常不加冠词“the”，所以应去掉“the”。

× Also I was in Europe before, the summer is around 20° but now it is like 30 and air conditioner is needed.

✓ Also, I was in Europe before; the summer temperature was around 20°, but now it is about 30°, and air conditioning is needed.

“the summer is around 20°”表达不准确，应改为“the summer temperature was around 20°”。“air conditioner”指空调设备，表达需要空调时应使用“air conditioning”。

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast because in Taiwan everything can be in rainy weather, so you have to check it before you go to work, whether you need to bring your umbrella or not.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast because in Taiwan it can rain anytime, so you have to check it before you go to work to see whether you need to bring your umbrella or not.

“everything can be in rainy weather”表达不自然，应改为“it can rain anytime”。“whether you need to bring your umbrella or not”前应加“to see”使句子完整。