Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Жавобингиз табиий ва мазмунли, лекин сўзларнинг тўлиқлиги ва грамматик тузилмасига эътибор беришингиз керак. Масалан, сўнгги жумладаги 'which also has it' ибораси тушунарсиз ва тўлиқ эмас. Шунингдек, сўзларни бир-бирига боғлаш учун кўпроқ боғловчи сўзлардан фойдаланинг.

Ejemplo: The weather in my country is mostly cloudy, which I really enjoy because it makes me feel calm and comfortable. For example, on cloudy days, I find it easier to focus on my work or relax at home. However, the weather changes a lot throughout the year; sometimes it becomes rainy or sunny, which also affects my mood.

Sugerencia: Жавобингиз яхши, лекин янада бой ва аниқ луғатлардан фойдаланишингиз мумкин. Шунингдек, боғловчи сўзлар билан жумла ва фикрларни бир-бирига боғлашни кучайтиришингиз керак.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because it enables me to enjoy outdoor activities such as swimming, which I find very refreshing. Moreover, during warm seasons, I often travel to other countries to explore new places and experience different cultures, which broadens my horizons.

Sugerencia: Жавобингизда сўзлар тўлиқ эмас ва сўнгги жумладаги 'rain or' ибораси тушунарсиз. Шунингдек, сўзларни боғлаш учун кўпроқ боғловчи сўзлардан фойдаланинг ва сўзларни тўлиқ ва аниқ ифодалашга эътибор беринг.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing. For example, when the weather is dry, I can focus better on my work or enjoy relaxing at home without feeling too hot or sticky. However, I know that the weather can change quickly, so I always try to be prepared for sudden rain or storms.

Sugerencia: Жавобингиз жуда яхши, лекин янада табиийроқ ва мукаммалроқ бўлиши учун сўзларни бир-бирига боғловчи сўзлардан кўпроқ фойдаланинг.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving for work. This helps me decide what to wear and whether I need to carry an umbrella. For instance, if rain is expected, I make sure to dress accordingly to stay comfortable throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Жавобингизда кўп грамматик хатолар ва тушунарсиз иборалар мавжуд. Масалан, 'floods and roads' ва 'damage to exhaust system and human' иборалари маъноли эмас. Шунингдек, сўзларни аниқ ва тўлиқ ифодалашга эътибор беринг.

Ejemplo: In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and society. For example, we have witnessed more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes and floods, which have caused significant damage to homes and infrastructure, as well as affected people's lives.

Sugerencia: Жавобингизда баъзи сўзлар нотўғри ёки тушунарсиз ишлатилган, масалан, 'refrigerating' ва 'unequal'. Шунингдек, сўзларни аниқ ва тўғри ифодалашга эътибор беринг ва боғловчи сўзлардан фойдаланинг.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my own. Experiencing a new climate, such as a colder or more tropical environment, can be refreshing and exciting. For example, visiting a snowy city would allow me to try winter activities that are not possible where I live, which would be a unique and memorable experience.

× However, the weather can change a lot throughout the year, sometimes becoming rainy or sunny, which also has it.

✓ However, the weather can change a lot throughout the year, sometimes becoming rainy or sunny, which also happens.

The phrase 'which also has it' is incorrect because 'has it' does not fit the context. The correct expression is 'which also happens' to indicate that the weather changes to rainy or sunny conditions as well.

× However, I know that weather can change quickly, so I always try to be prepared for sudden rain or.

✓ However, I know that weather can change quickly, so I always try to be prepared for sudden rain or storms.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'or' without completing the phrase. It needs a noun after 'or' to complete the idea, such as 'storms' or 'showers'.

× In recent years, climate change has a profound effect on the environment and society.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and society.

The verb 'has' should be followed by the past participle 'had' to correctly express the present perfect tense indicating an effect that started in the past and continues now.

× Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods and roads, which have caused significant damage to exhaust system and human.

✓ Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and landslides, which have caused significant damage to infrastructure and humans.

The word 'roads' is incorrect in this context; 'landslides' fits better as a weather event. Also, 'exhaust system' is incorrect; 'infrastructure' is appropriate. 'Human' should be plural 'humans' to refer to people affected.

× Experiencing a new climate, such as a colder or more tropical environment can be refrigerating and exciting.

✓ Experiencing a new climate, such as a colder or more tropical environment, can be refreshing and exciting.

The word 'refrigerating' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'refreshing' to describe a pleasant feeling.

× ...which would be an unequal and memorable.

✓ ...which would be a unique and memorable experience.

The word 'unequal' is incorrect; the intended word is 'unique' meaning one of a kind. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs a noun like 'experience' to complete the thought.