Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“below the 0”应为“below 0 degrees”。此外，回答可以更自然简洁，避免重复表达。

Ejemplo: The weather in my city is quite dry and colder than nearby cities. For instance, temperatures often drop below zero in winter.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“like another extremely cold nor very hot weather”不通顺。建议使用更自然的表达，并且注意句子结构。

Ejemplo: I prefer mild and pleasant weather because it lets me wear comfortable and stylish clothes.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构不完整。建议使用连贯的句子，并具体说明原因。

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because my city is very dry, which often makes my skin dry and uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: 回答较好，但有语法错误，如“temperatures are changed”应为“temperatures change”。建议注意时态和表达的准确性。

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast daily because the temperature changes quickly, so I can decide what to wear the next day.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在主谓不一致和表达不准确的问题，如“vehicle emissions is”应为“vehicle emissions are”，以及“adds so much pressure in air pollution”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和语法。

Ejemplo: Firstly, vehicle emissions are a major cause of climate change because they increase air pollution, leading to global warming worldwide.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法和表达不自然，如“the city, which weather is humid”应为“cities with humid weather”。建议使用更自然的表达，并避免使用不恰当的短语。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with humid weather and plenty of sunshine because it helps me relax and improves my skin condition.

× For example, temperatures in my city always drop below the 0.

✓ For example, temperatures in my city always drop below 0.

数字前不需要加定冠词“the”，这里的“0”是温度的数值，直接使用数字即可。

× I like another extremely cold nor very hot weather.

✓ I don't like extremely cold nor very hot weather.

表达否定时，应该使用“don't like”而不是“like another”，且“another”用法不当。

× I like another extremely cold nor very hot weather.

✓ I don't like extremely cold or very hot weather.

连接词应使用“or”连接两个否定的形容词，表示两者都不喜欢。

× I enjoy temperate and pleasant weather because it allows me to wear comfortable dresses and beautiful clothes.

✓ I enjoy temperate and pleasant weather because it allows me to wear comfortable dresses and beautiful clothes.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× Maybe wet weather because my city is in the northern part of China, which is so dry that my face is always in poor conditions and can't dress up.

✓ Maybe wet weather because my city is in the northern part of China, which is so dry that my face is always in poor condition and I can't dress up.

“condition”应为不可数名词，且“can't dress up”前应加主语“I”。

× I usually check the weather forecast every day because my city's temperatures are changed too quickly, so I have to check the forecast and decide what I should wear next day.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every day because my city's temperatures change too quickly, so I have to check the forecast and decide what I should wear the next day.

“temperatures are changed”应改为主动语态“temperatures change”，且“next day”前应加定冠词“the”。

× First and foremost, I think vehicle emissions is one of the most significant reasons for climate change because it adds so much pressure in air pollution, which lead to global warming around the world.

✓ First and foremost, I think vehicle emissions are one of the most significant reasons for climate change because they add so much pressure to air pollution, which leads to global warming around the world.

“vehicle emissions”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”和“add”，且“pressure in air pollution”应改为“pressure to air pollution”，“which lead”应为“which leads”。

× First and foremost, I think vehicle emissions is one of the most significant reasons for climate change because it adds so much pressure in air pollution, which lead to global warming around the world.

✓ First and foremost, I think vehicle emissions are one of the most significant reasons for climate change because they add so much pressure to air pollution, which leads to global warming around the world.

“pressure in air pollution”应改为“pressure to air pollution”，表示对空气污染的压力。

× Yeah, absolutely. I want to travel the city, which weather is humid and with sufficient sunshine.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I want to travel to a city where the weather is humid and there is sufficient sunshine.

“travel the city”应为“travel to a city”，“which weather is humid”应改为“where the weather is humid”，且“with sufficient sunshine”应改为“there is sufficient sunshine”。

× I think it can help me put my feet up and light my hair down and give my face a good condition to dress up.

✓ I think it can help me put my feet up, let my hair down, and give my face a good condition to dress up.

“light my hair down”应为“let my hair down”，表示放松；句子中动作应并列，使用逗号分隔。