Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về thời tiết ở nơi bạn sống. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "in my reason" (nên là "in my region") và "the weather always change in the month of the year" (nên là "the weather changes throughout the year").

Ejemplo: The weather in my region changes throughout the year because we have four distinct seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh", "umm" và nói câu hoàn chỉnh, đúng ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp lý do cụ thể. Ví dụ, thay vì nói "I can going out", hãy nói "I can go out".

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather to hot weather because in winter, I can go out with my friends to enjoy hot food and celebrate Christmas outdoors.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lủng củng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ví dụ, "wet weather" không nên dùng từ "censor" mà nên dùng "interrupt" hoặc "affect".

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because I can go to school and meet my friends easily. Wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable since it interrupts my plans to go outside.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai như "frog" thay vì "forecast". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast twice a day, in the morning and in the evening, because my grandparents like watching the news that includes the weather forecast.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý. Ví dụ, "IT costs to floods" không đúng, nên nói "it causes floods". Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối.

Ejemplo: I think one important effect of climate change is global warming, which causes rising temperatures worldwide. This leads to floods, droughts, melting ice, and harms both people and the environment.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên nói câu hoàn chỉnh và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "different climate" nên là "different climates" và "In Safar" có thể là "In Sapa". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from mine, such as Sapa in Vietnam or some places in China. They have cold winters with snow, which I really like.

× In my reason, there are Four Seasons are spring, summer, autumn or winter, and the weather always change in the month of the year.

✓ In my region, there are four seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter, and the weather always changes throughout the months of the year.

The word 'reason' is incorrect; it should be 'region'. 'Four Seasons' should not be capitalized and 'are' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Autumn or winter' should be 'autumn and winter' to list all seasons. 'Change' should be 'changes' to agree with singular subject 'weather'. Also, 'in the month of the year' is awkward; 'throughout the months of the year' is clearer.

× Uh on hand, I prefer cold weather than hot weather because, umm, because in the winter I can going out with my friend, uh, to eat hot hot foods and going outside for play in a Christmas Day.

✓ On one hand, I prefer cold weather to hot weather because in the winter I can go out with my friends to eat hot food and go outside to play on Christmas Day.

The phrase 'on hand' should be 'on one hand'. The comparison should use 'prefer cold weather to hot weather' not 'than'. 'Can going out' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' should be followed by base verb 'go'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match context. 'Hot hot foods' is redundant; 'hot food' is sufficient. 'Going outside for play' should be 'go outside to play'. 'In a Christmas Day' should be 'on Christmas Day'.

× I prefer dry weather because I need to go to school and I want to go outside with my friends regularly so when the wet weather I feel uncomfortable because it censor my uh meeting and all of my going outside with my friends and dry.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I need to go to school and I want to go outside with my friends regularly. When the weather is wet, I feel uncomfortable because it cancels my meetings and all my plans to go outside with my friends.

The sentence is run-on and unclear. 'When the wet weather' should be 'when the weather is wet'. 'It censor my meeting' is incorrect; 'censor' should be 'cancels' and 'meeting' should be plural 'meetings'. 'All of my going outside' is awkward; better to say 'all my plans to go outside'. The last word 'and dry' is unclear and removed for clarity.

× Yes, because my grandparents like watching uh news. So the news contain the frog weather forecast. So I usually watching it like and when I watching it right in the morning and in the evening.

✓ Yes, because my grandparents like watching the news. The news contains the weather forecast. So I usually watch it in the morning and in the evening.

'News' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'the'. 'Contain' should be 'contains' to agree with singular subject 'news'. 'Frog weather forecast' is incorrect; likely meant 'weather forecast'. 'I usually watching it like and when I watching it' is incorrect; should be 'I usually watch it in the morning and in the evening'.

× I think the important effects of climate change in recent years is global warming, when the temperature rise up around the world and the IT costs to floods and drought melting ice or harm people and the environment for ex.

✓ I think the important effect of climate change in recent years is global warming, when the temperature rises around the world and it causes floods, droughts, melting ice, and harms people and the environment, for example.

'Effects' should be singular 'effect' to agree with 'is'. 'Rise up' should be 'rises'. 'The IT costs to floods and drought melting ice or harm people' is incorrect; should be 'it causes floods, droughts, melting ice, and harms people'. 'For ex.' should be 'for example'.

× Yeah, I would like to visit other cities that have different climate from where I live, like in China or in my country Vietnam. In Safar it have winter and it have snow and I like snow very much.

✓ Yeah, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live, like in China or in my country Vietnam. In Sa Pa, it has winter and it has snow, and I like snow very much.

'Different climate' should be plural 'different climates' to agree with 'cities'. 'Safar' is likely 'Sa Pa', a place in Vietnam. 'It have' should be 'it has' to agree with singular subject. Added commas for clarity.