Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: حاول تتكلم بشكل أوضح وبدون ترددات كثيرة. استعمل جمل قصيرة ومباشرة، وابتعد عن الكلمات الزائدة مثل "uh" و"like". حاول تستخدم ربط بين الجمل مثل "but" أو "while" لتكون إجابتك أكثر ترابطاً.

Ejemplo: The weather where I live is mostly sunny. It rains occasionally, especially in winter and autumn. In spring and summer, the weather is usually clear and warm.

Sugerencia: حاول تستخدم كلمات مناسبة وواضحة للتعبير عن مشاعرك وأسبابك. تجنب التردد والكلمات الغير واضحة. استعمل جمل مترابطة مع ربط مثل "because" و"when" لتوضيح أفكارك.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it feels romantic and joyful. When it rains or snows, I feel happy and it helps me create special memories.

Sugerencia: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر سلاسة وترابطاً. استعمل جمل كاملة وواضحة، وابتعد عن التوقفات المفاجئة. يمكنك ربط الجمل باستخدام "because" و"so" لتوضيح السبب والنتيجة.

Ejemplo: I don't like dry weather because I have allergies. Whenever the weather is dry, I sneeze and cough, so I prefer wet weather.

Sugerencia: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً ووضوحاً. استخدم كلمات مناسبة وابتعد عن التكرار. ربط الجمل باستخدام "because" و"so" يساعد على توضيح أفكارك.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my smartphone before going to work. I want to know if it will be rainy, cold, or hot. I prefer cold weather, so I hope for that when I check.

Sugerencia: حاول أن تستخدم جمل واضحة ومترابطة مع تجنب الترددات. استعمل مفردات دقيقة مثل "deforestation" و"global warming". ربط الأفكار باستخدام "because" و"therefore" يجعل إجابتك أكثر منطقية.

Ejemplo: Climate change has caused many global problems recently. Because of deforestation and increased use of public transportation, the Earth is becoming warmer. Therefore, temperatures are rising worldwide.

Sugerencia: حاول أن تتحدث بثقة وبدون تردد. استخدم جمل واضحة ومترابطة مع ربط مثل "when" و"so". تأكد من استخدام الكلمات الصحيحة مثل "warmer" بدلاً من "rice temperature".

Ejemplo: Yes, when it is winter and cold in my city, I like to visit other cities with warmer climates. So, I prefer to travel to places that have different weather from mine.

× The weather is like, mostly it's sunny and uh, sometimes there's rain, uh, but mostly in the, uh, winter and, uh, autumn, while uh, in the, uh, other seasons like, uh, spring and summer, there will be uh, almost sunny, but it's quite actually really, uh.

✓ The weather is mostly sunny, and sometimes there is rain, mostly in winter and autumn, while in other seasons like spring and summer, it is almost always sunny, but actually quite warm.

The original sentence misuses 'like' and has awkward phrasing. 'Is like' is unnecessary here. Also, 'there will be almost sunny' is incorrect; 'it is almost always sunny' is the correct present tense expression. The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct verb forms.

× I really like cold weather because it's romantic weather. It's, uh, bring a lot of joy and makes me happy when I see raining, when I see snow, it really makes me, uh, you know, really strong one and help me to create memories. That's why.

✓ I really like cold weather because it's romantic. It brings a lot of joy and makes me happy when I see rain or snow. It really makes me feel strong and helps me create memories. That's why.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'It's, uh, bring' instead of 'It brings'. Also, 'when I see raining' should be 'when I see rain'. 'Help me to create' should be 'helps me create' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. The corrections fix subject-verb agreement and verb form errors.

× I really don't like dry weather because I have an an allergy. Whenever I face dry weather I will sneeze and cough. That's why I prefer. Wet weather.

✓ I really don't like dry weather because I have an allergy. Whenever I face dry weather, I sneeze and cough. That's why I prefer wet weather.

The phrase 'an an allergy' has a repeated article; it should be 'an allergy'. Also, 'I will sneeze and cough' is better as 'I sneeze and cough' to express habitual action. The period after 'prefer' is incorrect and should be removed to connect the sentence properly.

× Yeah, I really like to check weather, weather webcast, because every time when I go before work, I always check and see whether it's raining, it's cold, it's hot. Well, I really like to be cold weather, so I always pray for cold weather when I check the weather on my smartphone.

✓ Yeah, I really like to check the weather forecast because every time before I go to work, I always check to see whether it's raining, cold, or hot. Well, I really like cold weather, so I always hope for cold weather when I check the weather on my smartphone.

The phrase 'check weather, weather webcast' is unclear; 'check the weather forecast' is correct. 'Every time when I go before work' should be 'every time before I go to work'. 'I really like to be cold weather' is incorrect; it should be 'I really like cold weather'. 'Pray for cold weather' is better expressed as 'hope for cold weather' in this context.

× Nowadays, climate change play a huge role in global, uh, problems, uh, because of them, as you know, the deforestation and public transportation, these affects the climate change. So the climate change goes towards to be, uh, more warm and hot, uh, instead of being.

✓ Nowadays, climate change plays a huge role in global problems because of factors like deforestation and public transportation; these affect climate change. So, climate change is causing the world to become warmer and hotter.

The verb 'play' should be 'plays' to agree with singular subject 'climate change'. 'These affects' should be 'these affect' because 'these' is plural. 'Goes towards to be more warm and hot' is awkward; 'is causing the world to become warmer and hotter' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, uh, every time when in my city there is winter, uh, it's cold and I want to go to another city, uh, which have a, umm, more rice temperature. So I always prefer to go to cities. That's the, uh, On the contrary of my city temperature.

✓ Yes, every time there is winter in my city and it's cold, I want to go to another city which has a milder temperature. So I always prefer to go to cities with climates opposite to my city's temperature.

'Which have' should be 'which has' to agree with singular 'city'. 'More rice temperature' is incorrect; likely meant 'milder temperature'. 'On the contrary of my city temperature' is incorrect; 'opposite to my city's temperature' is correct. The sentence needed subject-verb agreement and correct adjective use.