Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Старайтесь отвечать на вопрос прямо и избегать выражения негативных эмоций по поводу вопроса. Начинайте с описания погоды, а затем можете добавить детали.

Ejemplo: The weather in Kazakhstan is mostly cold, especially during the winter months. It can be quite harsh, but I am used to it.

Sugerencia: Используйте более точные выражения и избегайте слов-паразитов. Начинайте с чёткой темы, затем объясните причину.

Ejemplo: I prefer warm weather because I feel uncomfortable when it is too cold or too hot.

Sugerencia: Старайтесь строить предложения логично, используя связки. Избегайте повторов и слов-паразитов.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer wet weather because it feels refreshing when I stay at home. However, I enjoy dry weather when I go to the beach.

Sugerencia: Отвечайте более развёрнуто, объясняя причину и используя связки для плавности речи.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because I prefer to be spontaneous and dress according to how I feel.

Sugerencia: Старайтесь использовать более простые и понятные выражения, избегайте повторов и говорите чётко.

Ejemplo: I believe climate change has caused many natural disasters recently, which are very harmful to our environment.

Sugerencia: Используйте правильные времена и грамматические формы, а также стройте предложения логично.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because it has been my dream since I was a child. I used to watch travel shows about places like Dubai and Egypt.

× I live in Kazakhstan and my country known for its cold weather.

✓ I live in Kazakhstan and my country is known for its cold weather.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to form the correct present simple passive structure 'is known'. Without the verb, the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.

× I prefer not to cold and not too hot.

✓ I prefer not too cold and not too hot.

The phrase 'not to cold' is incorrect; the correct form is 'not too cold' where 'too' is an adverb modifying the adjective 'cold'. Also, 'to' is a preposition and does not fit here.

× I'm keen on a warm weather because umm, I feel very awful if I felt a cold or hot.

✓ I'm keen on warm weather because, umm, I feel very awful if I feel cold or hot.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. Also, the tense in the conditional clause should be present simple 'if I feel' instead of past 'if I felt' to express general truth.

× I feel very awful if I felt a cold or hot.

✓ I feel very awful if I feel cold or hot.

In conditional sentences expressing general truths, the present simple tense should be used in the 'if' clause, not the past tense.

× when I stayed at home I like wet weather.

✓ when I stay at home I like wet weather.

The sentence mixes past tense 'stayed' with present tense 'like'. To express habitual actions, present simple tense should be used consistently.

× But if I go to the beach, of course I wanted to try.

✓ But if I go to the beach, of course I want to try.

The verb 'wanted' is past tense, but the conditional clause 'if I go' is present tense, so the main clause should also be present tense 'want' to maintain consistency.

× I don't have this habit.

✓ I don't have the habit.

The phrase 'the habit' is more natural and idiomatic in English when referring to a specific habit previously mentioned or understood.

× I'm not checking the weather forecast.

✓ I don't check the weather forecast.

The present continuous 'I'm not checking' is incorrect here because the question is about habitual action; present simple 'I don't check' is appropriate.

× I think that they are effects of climate change in recent years, extremely hazardous for our environment because step by step every year we have a any natural disasters like climate change or CLI climate warming, like multi-scale.

✓ I think that the effects of climate change in recent years are extremely hazardous for our environment because, step by step, every year we have natural disasters caused by climate change or global warming on multiple scales.

The original sentence has several structural issues: incorrect use of 'they are effects', unnecessary 'a any', unclear phrase 'CLI climate warming', and awkward phrasing. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.

× Until I was 7 I always watching any traveling clocks to other countries like Dubai or or Egypt.

✓ Until I was 7, I was always watching travel shows about other countries like Dubai or Egypt.

The original sentence has incorrect verb form 'watching' without auxiliary, incorrect phrase 'traveling clocks', and redundant 'or or'. The correction uses past continuous tense and correct vocabulary.