Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer deer iluu todorhoi, togtooltoi ug helj, unnecessary heseg baiguulalt, davtaltig bagasgah heregtei. Jishee ni, ug helj baigaa ug helber, tsag agaarin oorchlolt, todorhoi jishig oruulj helne uu.

Ejemplo: The weather in my city is quite unpredictable. For example, it can be freezing cold in the morning but become warm and hot by the afternoon. At night, the temperature might drop again, making it feel chilly or sometimes remain warm.

Sugerencia: Ug helj baigaa ug helber, ug songolt todorhoi baih heregtei. Tovch, todorhoi ug songoj, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei. Jishee ni, ug songoltiin uchriig todorhoi tailbarlahad anhaaraarai.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because Ulaanbaatar is known as the coldest capital city in the world. The freezing temperatures are hard for me to tolerate, so I enjoy warmer climates more.

Sugerencia: Ug helj baigaa ug helber, ug songolt todorhoi baih heregtei. Tailbar, jishig, todorhoi ug songoj, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei. Davtalt bagasgah, ug helber iluu todorhoi bolgoh heregtei.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because I live in Lombardy, which is known for its dry climate. Dry weather often makes my skin and hair dry, which I find uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: Ug helber duuren duusgah, tailbar, jishig, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei. Ug helber iluu todorhoi, duuren baih heregtei. Davtalt bagasgah, ug helber iluu todorhoi bolgoh heregtei.

Ejemplo: I usually don't check the weather forecast in winter because it's cold every day, so I always wear warm clothes. However, in summer, I often check the forecast to decide what to wear or plan outdoor activities.

Sugerencia: Ug helber, ug songolt todorhoi baih heregtei. Ug helber, tailbar, jishig, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei. Ug helber iluu todorhoi, ug helber duuren baih heregtei. Davtalt bagasgah heregtei.

Ejemplo: Climate change has caused icebergs in Antarctica to melt, which raises sea levels and threatens the habitats of animals living there, putting many species at risk.

Sugerencia: Ug helber, tailbar, jishig, ug helber deer anhaarah heregtei. Ug helber iluu todorhoi, ug helber duuren baih heregtei. Davtalt bagasgah heregtei.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because it would be a new experience. For example, I want to visit hot countries like Thailand and parts of the United States.

× It's actually unpredictable since it could be freezing in the morning and warm hot, or like hot in the afternoon and in the night it can be umm, either freezing or kind of warm.

✓ It's actually unpredictable since it could be freezing in the morning and warm or hot, or like hot in the afternoon and at night it can be, umm, either freezing or kind of warm.

The phrase 'warm hot' is incorrect because two adjectives describing temperature should be connected properly, such as using 'or' to separate them. Also, 'in the night' should be 'at night' as the correct preposition for time of day is 'at'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Umm in my opinion I prefer hot weather since the the UB is the coldest capital in the world so it's no joke.

✓ Umm, in my opinion, I prefer hot weather since UB is the coldest capital in the world, so it's no joke.

The phrase 'the the UB' contains a repeated article 'the' which is incorrect. Also, 'the UB' is better as 'UB' since 'UB' is a proper noun (Ulaanbaatar) and does not require 'the'. Adding commas improves sentence flow.

× It's really freezing and I just couldn't stand cold so I prefer hot weather.

✓ It's really freezing and I just can't stand the cold, so I prefer hot weather.

The phrase 'couldn't stand cold' is incorrect because 'cold' as a noun requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'couldn't' suggests past ability, but the context is present preference, so 'can't' is more appropriate.

× I prefer wet weather because again, living in Lombardy, which is known as one of the dry cities in the world, I just couldn't stand the dryness because in the dry weather your skin and hair will become dry too, and I don't really like that.

✓ I prefer wet weather because, again, living in Lombardy, which is known as one of the driest cities in the world, I just can't stand the dryness because in dry weather your skin and hair become dry too, and I don't really like that.

The phrase 'one of the dry cities' should be 'one of the driest cities' to use the superlative form correctly. Also, 'in the dry weather' is better as 'in dry weather' because general statements about weather do not require 'the'. 'Couldn't' is changed to 'can't' to reflect present ability.

× I always need to wear what warm clothes.

✓ I always need to wear warm clothes.

The phrase 'what warm clothes' is incorrect; 'what' is unnecessary and disrupts the adjective-noun order. The correct phrase is simply 'warm clothes'.

× But in comparison in the summer I often check the forecast because.

✓ But in comparison, in the summer I often check the forecast because the weather is more unpredictable.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. Adding a reason completes the sentence logically.

× Due to the climate change, the icebergs in Umm Antri anticipate is melting and that is affecting the sea level and the habitat of animals.

✓ Due to climate change, the icebergs in Umm Antri are melting and that is affecting the sea level and the habitat of animals.

The phrase 'anticipate is melting' is incorrect; 'anticipate' is unnecessary and causes confusion. The correct verb form is 'are melting' to agree with the plural subject 'icebergs'. Also, 'the climate change' should be 'climate change' without 'the'.

× Who lives there is endangered, yeah.

✓ The animals that live there are endangered, yeah.

The sentence lacks a clear subject; 'Who lives there is endangered' is incorrect. Replacing with 'The animals that live there are endangered' clarifies the subject and verb agreement.

× Yeah, I would love to visit other cities that have different climate from my country.

✓ Yeah, I would love to visit other cities that have a different climate from my country.

The phrase 'different climate' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'different' because 'climate' is a singular countable noun here.

× Since it's a new experience.

✓ Since it would be a new experience.

The sentence fragment 'Since it's a new experience.' lacks a main clause and is incomplete. Adding 'it would be' completes the sentence logically.

× For example, I would I really want to visit hot places such as Thailand and America.

✓ For example, I really want to visit hot places such as Thailand and America.

The phrase 'I would I really want' is redundant and incorrect. Removing 'I would' corrects the sentence structure.