Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and provides good examples, but try to avoid repeating similar ideas like 'four seasons in one day' and 'unpredictable weather' which are quite close in meaning. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly, such as 'for instance' or 'however'.

Ejemplo: I live in Melbourne, which is known for its unpredictable weather. For instance, the morning can be mild and sunny like spring; however, by afternoon, it often turns chilly, resembling winter. This variety makes living here quite interesting.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some errors such as 'cheating' instead of 'cold' or 'chilly', and 'Simply' should be lowercase. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy by not repeating 'hot weather' multiple times.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because it's easier to stay comfortable by layering clothes. For example, when it's chilly, I can simply put on a jumper or jacket to feel cozy outdoors. However, in hot weather, it's difficult to cool down since you can't remove many clothes.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but some phrases are unclear or incorrect, such as 'less motivated on the climate' and 'Sunny weather leaves my mood'. Try to use clearer expressions and linking words like 'because' and 'which'.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because rainy days often make me feel gloomy and less motivated. In contrast, sunny weather improves my mood and makes me feel more energetic and confident, which helps me stay productive throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there is a grammatical error in 'is my responsibility' which should be 'it is my responsibility'. Also, avoid unnecessary questions in your answer and use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning before we start our day because I have a 2-year-old son who can't decide what to wear. It is my responsibility to dress him appropriately depending on the weather, so I usually use a weather app on my phone to ensure he's comfortable and well protected.

Sugerencia: Your answer is well-structured and informative. To improve, you could add linking words like 'for example' or 'as a result' to connect ideas more smoothly and provide more specific examples.

Ejemplo: I think one of the most significant effects of climate change in recent years is global warming, which is mainly caused by pollution from human activities such as burning fossil fuels. As a result, we have seen dramatic changes in our climate, for example, the melting of polar ice caps.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but could be improved by using linking words like 'because' or 'such as' more effectively and by avoiding repetition of 'climate'. Also, try to be more specific about which climates you want to experience and why.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with climates different from my hometown because the weather here changes dramatically within a single day. Experiencing climates such as tropical heat or snowy winters would be fascinating and offer a new perspective.

× For example, when it's cheating, I can Simply put on a warmer jumper or jacket, which helps me feel cozy even outdoors.

✓ For example, when it's chilly, I can simply put on a warmer jumper or jacket, which helps me feel cozy even outdoors.

The word 'cheating' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'chilly' to describe cold weather. Also, 'Simply' should not be capitalised mid-sentence. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Actually, I prefer dry weather to wet weather because rainy days often make me feel a bit gloomy and less motivated on the climate.

✓ Actually, I prefer dry weather to wet weather because rainy days often make me feel a bit gloomy and less motivated about the climate.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'about' when expressing feelings or attitudes towards something. This change makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× Since I have a 2 year old son who can't decide what to wear, is my responsibility to dress him appropriately depending on the weather?

✓ Since I have a 2 year old son who can't decide what to wear, it is my responsibility to dress him appropriately depending on the weather.

The sentence is missing the subject pronoun 'it' before 'is my responsibility'. Without 'it', the sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Adding 'it' corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, I would love to visit other cities with the climate different from where I live.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities with a climate different from where I live.

The definite article 'the' is incorrect here because 'climate' is being introduced for the first time in a general sense. The indefinite article 'a' is appropriate to indicate any climate different from the current one.