Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper sentence structures and avoiding redundancy. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: In my country, the weather is usually hot during the summer, but I really enjoy the spring season because it feels more relaxing and comfortable.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific feelings.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I don't like feeling hot; it makes me feel uncomfortable and irritable. Cold weather, on the other hand, makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Sugerencia: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to support your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the rain. When it rains in my country, I like to play outside near my home, which makes me feel very happy.

Sugerencia: Improve fluency by reducing hesitation and filler words. Use clear and complete sentences with linking words to explain your habits specifically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast on my mobile phone whenever I want to know if it will rain. I especially check it when rain is expected in my country.

Sugerencia: Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide more specific reasons or examples.

Ejemplo: I think climate change has caused our country to become hotter each year. This might be due to global warming and increased greenhouse gases in the atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide specific details about your preferences.

Ejemplo: Yes, absolutely. I would like to visit countries that have snow because it rarely snows in my country nowadays, and I want to experience that climate.

× In my country usually we have a summer weather, but I like so much spring weather.

✓ In my country, we usually have summer weather, but I like spring weather very much.

The word 'weather' is uncountable, so it should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'so much' is better placed after the object for clarity, and 'usually' should be placed after the subject for natural word order.

× I feel more relaxation when this weather.

✓ I feel more relaxed in this weather.

The phrase 'feel more relaxation' is incorrect; 'feel relaxed' is the correct adjective form. Also, 'when this weather' is incomplete; 'in this weather' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I prefer cold weather, I didn't like hot weather.

✓ I prefer cold weather; I don't like hot weather.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the preference is current, 'didn't like' should be 'don't like' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I feel angry and uh, uh, don't relax.

✓ I feel angry and don't feel relaxed.

The phrase 'don't relax' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'don't feel relaxed' to describe the state of not being relaxed.

× So I prefer cold, uh, give me a, a happy feeling.

✓ So I prefer cold weather; it gives me a happy feeling.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks a subject in the second clause. Adding 'it' clarifies the subject and improves sentence structure.

× I like rain so much uh, when my country come the rain, I didn't go uh, inside, I play outside, uh, our home.

✓ I like rain very much. When it rains in my country, I don't go inside; I play outside near my home.

'Come the rain' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'it rains'. Also, 'didn't go' should be 'don't go' to match present tense. 'Our home' is better expressed as 'near my home' for clarity.

× I also feel more happy when.

✓ I also feel happier then.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'More happy' should be 'happier' (comparative adjective). 'When' is replaced with 'then' to complete the thought.

× Empire in checking the weather.

✓ I am in the habit of checking the weather.

'Empire' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'I am'. The phrase 'in checking the weather' is incomplete; 'in the habit of checking the weather' is the correct expression.

× When I want to check uh, the weather, I use my mobile phone uh, So I check in uh, with our map and I see uh, the weather, especially when uh says come the rain on my country, I check it.

✓ When I want to check the weather, I use my mobile phone. I check the map and see the weather, especially when it says it will rain in my country; I check it.

'Check in with our map' is incorrect; 'check the map' is correct. 'Says come the rain' is incorrect; 'it says it will rain' is correct. Prepositions and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× I believe every years, uh, our golf come more hot rather than than previous year.

✓ I believe every year, our Gulf becomes hotter than the previous year.

'Every years' should be 'every year' (singular). 'Golf' is likely 'Gulf'. 'Come more hot' is incorrect; 'becomes hotter' is correct comparative form.

× Uh, I don't know why, but I think because, uh, uh, global or some gas or I don't know actually why, but every year come hot.

✓ I don't know why, but I think it's because of global warming or some gases. I don't actually know why, but every year it gets hotter.

The sentence lacks clear subjects and verbs. 'Global or some gas' is vague; 'global warming or some gases' is clearer. 'Every year come hot' should be 'every year it gets hotter'.

× Yes, absolutely. I would do visit another country.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I would like to visit another country.

'Would do visit' is incorrect; the correct modal verb phrase is 'would like to visit' to express desire.

× Uh, I think I want to visit the, uh, country, uh, have a snow, uh, because my country didn't see that anymore or rare, uh, comes now.

✓ I think I want to visit a country that has snow because my country doesn't see snow anymore or it rarely comes now.

'The country have a snow' is incorrect; it should be 'a country that has snow'. 'Didn't see' should be 'doesn't see' to match present tense. 'Rare comes now' is corrected to 'it rarely comes now'.