Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by adding a bit more specific detail about the weather or how it affects you. Avoid redundancy by combining sentences effectively.

Ejemplo: I live in the central part of Russia, where the weather is often windy, cloudy, and rainy. Because of this gloomy climate, I usually feel a bit down, so I don't enjoy spending much time outdoors.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent. Also, be more specific about why you prefer hot weather.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I find it more comfortable and enjoyable. For example, I plan to move to Italy in the future since its sunny climate and proximity to the ocean suit me well.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words and some grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid fillers like 'umm' and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, clarify your explanation with more precise language.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because my hair is very curly, and I usually straighten it. When the weather is wet, my hair always becomes curly again, which I don't like.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words to make it more coherent. Also, specify how often you check the forecast to fully answer the question.

Ejemplo: I usually check the weather forecast every morning because the climate in Russia is quite unpredictable. For example, it might be 0° today and 10° tomorrow.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion more clearly and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I don't think the climate has changed much in recent years in Russia because winters remain very cold and summers very hot. Our climate is quite extreme and unpredictable.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but is somewhat repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to organize your ideas clearly with linking words and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Of course, I would like to visit other cities with different climates. I often travel to other countries and cities, and my dream is to move to another country someday.

× For example, in the future my goal is move to Italy because I think the climate there so well for me and I really enjoy sunny days and ocean.

✓ For example, in the future my goal is to move to Italy because I think the climate there is so good for me and I really enjoy sunny days and the ocean.

The sentence is missing the infinitive 'to' after 'is' in 'my goal is move to Italy', which is required to express future intention correctly. Also, 'climate there so well for me' is incorrect; it should be 'climate there is so good for me' to properly describe suitability. Additionally, 'sunny days and ocean' needs the definite article 'the' before 'ocean' because it refers to a specific ocean.

× For example, in the future my goal is move to Italy because I think the climate there so well for me and I really enjoy sunny days and ocean.

✓ For example, in the future my goal is to move to Italy because I think the climate there is so good for me and I really enjoy sunny days and the ocean.

The noun 'ocean' is a specific noun here and requires the definite article 'the' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer and enjoy dry weather because my hair is so curly and I straighten my hair and when umm weather is wet my hair umm always become curly.

✓ I prefer and enjoy dry weather because my hair is very curly and I straighten it, but when the weather is wet, my hair always becomes curly.

The sentence uses 'and' incorrectly to connect contrasting ideas; 'but' is more appropriate to show contrast. Also, 'umm' is filler and should be omitted. 'Become' should be 'becomes' to agree with singular subject 'hair'. 'The weather' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I have the habit of checking the weather because in Russia there are really strange climate.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather because in Russia there is really strange climate.

'Climate' is an uncountable noun and should be singular; therefore, 'there are' is incorrect and should be 'there is'. Also, 'strange climate' is acceptable but could be improved with an article or adjective, but the main issue is subject-verb agreement.

× I have the habit of checking the weather because in Russia there are really strange climate.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather because in Russia there is really strange climate.

'Climate' is singular and uncountable, so 'are' should be 'is' to agree with the singular noun.

× I don't think so, because in Russia climate doesn't change in recent years because winters are so cold, summers are so hot, so our climate is so crazy and nobody can be.

✓ I don't think so, because in Russia the climate hasn't changed in recent years; winters are very cold, summers are very hot, so our climate is quite extreme and nobody can predict it.

The phrase 'doesn't change in recent years' is incorrect because 'recent years' refers to a period up to now, so present perfect tense 'hasn't changed' is appropriate. Also, 'nobody can be' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'nobody can predict it' or similar. Added 'the' before 'climate' as it is specific.

× I don't think so, because in Russia climate doesn't change in recent years because winters are so cold, summers are so hot, so our climate is so crazy and nobody can be.

✓ I don't think so, because in Russia the climate hasn't changed in recent years; winters are very cold, summers are very hot, so our climate is quite extreme and nobody can predict it.

The noun 'climate' here is specific to Russia and requires the definite article 'the'.

× Of course, since I can see more that I usually visit other countries, other cities that have different climates from my city, Moscow and I will move to another country.

✓ Of course, since I can see more, I usually visit other countries and cities that have different climates from my city, Moscow, and I will move to another country.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Adding commas and 'and' improves clarity and sentence flow.