Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, clarify your points and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, explain how the weather affects your activities clearly.

Ejemplo: The weather where I live is generally cold and windy for most of the year. However, summers can be really hot, which makes outdoor activities enjoyable during that season.

Sugerencia: Focus on fluency and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'a hot weather' should be 'hot weather' and 'heavy clothes' instead of 'a heavy clothes'.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because it feels more comfortable and convenient. For instance, in winter, you have to wear heavy clothes and you can get cold easily, which I find unpleasant.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence clarity and avoid filler words. Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for daily activities. For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet from rain.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your routine.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast the day before I go somewhere. Also, in the evenings, I check the next day's weather to choose suitable clothes.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity. Avoid vague statements and provide specific examples. Use linking words to explain the effects logically.

Ejemplo: Climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and people's lives. For example, it has increased health problems like respiratory illnesses and even some cancers. Overall, the climate is becoming more unpredictable and severe.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and improve sentence fluency. Use linking words to explain your preferences clearly and provide complete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, I want to visit tropical countries because I enjoy hot weather and feel very comfortable there.

× The weather where I live is generally cold, it's so windy most of the time of the year, umm, and uh, the summer is really hot there. Umm, which make outdoor activities. I'm trying as well.

✓ The weather where I live is generally cold; it's so windy most of the year, and the summer is really hot there, which makes outdoor activities enjoyable. I'm trying as well.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'which make outdoor activities' as a fragment and lacks subject-verb agreement. 'Which' refers to 'summer is really hot there' and should be followed by 'makes' (third person singular). Also, the sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be combined properly for clarity.

× I prefer a hot weather because I find it more comfortable and easy.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I find it more comfortable and easy.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× during the winter you you have to wait, you have to wear a heavy clothes and.

✓ During the winter, you have to wait; you have to wear heavy clothes.

'Clothes' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, the sentence has a repeated word 'you' and an incomplete phrase 'have to wait' which seems incorrect or incomplete. The correction removes the article and fixes repetition.

× I prefer to dry weather because it's more comfortable and convenient for a daily activity.

✓ I prefer dry weather because it's more comfortable and convenient for daily activities.

'Weather' is uncountable and should not be preceded by 'to'. Also, 'a daily activity' is too specific; 'daily activities' is more natural here.

× Some uh, for example, I can go outside without worrying uh, to get to wait umm or umm, or. Drop in a which suffices.

✓ For example, I can go outside without worrying about getting wet or rain dropping on me.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrasing. 'Worrying to get to wait' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'worrying about getting wet'. Also, 'drop in a which suffices' is unclear and corrected to 'rain dropping on me' for clarity.

× Yeah, I usually, umm, check whether, uh, the day before I go somewhere.

✓ Yeah, I usually check the weather the day before I go somewhere.

'Whether' is a homophone of 'weather' but incorrect here. The correct word is 'weather'. Also, the sentence is simplified for clarity.

× Or, uh, in the evenings I always check next day whether to pick my outfit for it.

✓ Or, in the evenings, I always check the next day's weather to pick my outfit accordingly.

Again, 'whether' should be 'weather'. Also, 'next day' should be 'next day's weather' and 'for it' is vague; 'accordingly' clarifies the purpose.

× It must be suitable for. Next days.

✓ It must be suitable for the next day.

The phrase is fragmented and unclear. 'Next days' should be singular 'next day' and connected properly to the previous sentence.

× Will the climate change has really profound effect on the environment and people's life.

✓ Climate change has a really profound effect on the environment and people's lives.

'Will' is incorrectly used here; the sentence is about current effects, so present tense is appropriate. Also, 'has' should be followed by 'a' before 'really profound effect'. 'People's life' should be plural 'lives'.

× It causes some illnesses, is cancer.

✓ It causes some illnesses, such as cancer.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a connector. Adding 'such as' clarifies that cancer is an example of illnesses caused.

× Yeah, I would definitely like to visit other cities which have different climate.

✓ Yeah, I would definitely like to visit other cities which have different climates.

'Climate' should be plural 'climates' because it refers to different types of climate in multiple cities.

× I want to visit visit tropical country some because I like hot weather and I feel really. Comfortable.

✓ I want to visit some tropical countries because I like hot weather and I feel really comfortable.

The sentence has repeated words 'visit visit', incorrect word order 'tropical country some', and a fragmented sentence ending. Correcting word order, removing repetition, and combining sentences improves clarity.