Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and complete. Avoid trailing off at the end and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples about the foods you enjoy in winter.

Ejemplo: Where I live, the weather is mostly rainy, with occasional windy or sunny days. However, I love winter because it offers a variety of delicious seasonal foods, such as hot soups and roasted chestnuts, which make the cold weather enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your speech more fluent. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide more specific reasons or examples for your preference.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather, especially winter, because I enjoy trying seasonal foods and taking advantage of the winter vacation at the end of the year. In contrast, summer is often too hot and sunny, which makes me feel tired and gives me headaches.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Make your points clear and concise, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, try to complete your thoughts fully and provide specific examples.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because wet weather, especially heavy rain, makes it difficult for people to move around. For example, during heavy downpours, many businesses and students face disruptions in their daily activities.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Structure your answer clearly by stating your habit first, then explaining when and why you check the forecast. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details.

Ejemplo: I don't check the weather forecast regularly, but if I have planned activities, I make sure to check it in advance. This helps me avoid any interruptions caused by bad weather and ensures my plans go smoothly.

Sugerencia: Complete your sentences and avoid trailing off. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Provide specific examples and clarify your ideas, such as explaining how climate change causes these effects.

Ejemplo: In recent years, climate change has caused global warming, increased air pollution, and deforestation. These changes have also led to the spread of certain diseases, which affect people's health and the environment.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide more specific reasons and examples about why you enjoy visiting places with different climates. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy exploring new environments and cultures. For instance, I have visited countries with tropical and cold climates, which gave me unique experiences and broadened my perspective.

× Where I live it's mostly rainy because I come from a city where rainfall is really a common factor and rest of the time it is windy or sunny.

✓ Where I live, it's mostly rainy because I come from a city where rainfall is really a common factor, and the rest of the time it is windy or sunny.

The phrase 'rest of the time' requires the definite article 'the' to specify the particular time period being referred to. Omitting 'the' is a common error with singular nouns used in a specific context.

× But I love my city in winter because I get to experience a lot of foods and.

✓ But I love my city in winter because I get to experience a lot of foods.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× during summer it's too, uh, sunny and I get headache and I get too exhausted.

✓ During summer, it's too sunny, and I get headaches and become too exhausted.

The phrase 'I get headache' is incorrect; 'headache' is a countable noun and should be pluralized as 'headaches' or preceded by an article. Also, 'I get too exhausted' is better expressed as 'become too exhausted' for natural phrasing.

× in wet weather, I mean like in rainy season, it makes people really difficult to move.

✓ In wet weather, I mean like in the rainy season, it makes it really difficult for people to move.

The phrase 'makes people really difficult to move' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'makes it difficult for people to move.' Also, 'in rainy season' requires the definite article 'the' before 'rainy season.'

× And it's like, uh, if it's pouring like cats and dogs, then it is going to hamper a lot of people's business or work life or we students and have.

✓ And it's like, if it's pouring cats and dogs, then it is going to hamper a lot of people's business, work life, or our studies as students.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear, ending with 'we students and have.' The correction clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence properly.

× No, I don't check the weather forecast, uh, quite often, but usually if I have something we planned, uh, as I'm a pre planner, so I love to be updated about the weather so that my plans don't get interrupted.

✓ No, I don't check the weather forecast quite often, but usually if I have something planned, as I'm a pre-planner, I love to be updated about the weather so that my plans don't get interrupted.

The phrase 'if I have something we planned' is incorrect; it should be 'if I have something planned.' Also, 'pre planner' should be hyphenated as 'pre-planner.'

× And, uh, yes, I love to be have to stay updated, but it's sometimes.

✓ And yes, I love to stay updated, but sometimes I don't.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. The correction provides a clear and complete sentence.

× Over the years I have seen a lot of changes in our climate such as global warming, having a lot of air pollution than before and some diseases that are spread through the ear and also the deforestation and these are the.

✓ Over the years, I have seen a lot of changes in our climate such as global warming, increased air pollution compared to before, some diseases that are spread through the air, and deforestation.

The phrase 'having a lot of air pollution than before' is incorrect; it should be 'increased air pollution compared to before.' Also, 'spread through the ear' is a mistake for 'spread through the air.' The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I would love to visit other cities that have different climates from my country. Uh, I have visited quite a few countries with different climates and I love them because I love to explore new things. I am an adventurous umm person and I love to.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities that have different climates from my country. I have visited quite a few countries with different climates, and I love them because I love to explore new things. I am an adventurous person, and I love to travel.

The last sentence is incomplete ending with 'I love to.' The correction completes the sentence logically. Also, unnecessary fillers like 'umm' are removed for clarity.