Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence about the usual weather, then add a brief comment about recent changes. Reduce hesitation and correct basic grammar (e.g., "tropical region", "it's kind of hot and dry", "it tends to be cooler now"). Use one or two supporting details only.

Ejemplo: I live in Cambodia, which is in the tropical region, so it is usually hot and dry. However, recently it has been cooler than normal, probably because of climate change; the current cold season has caused temperatures to drop.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct answer first, then provide one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and fewer hesitations. Avoid redundant phrases ("I and myself"). Use linking words like "because" and "so" properly.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I sweat easily in high temperatures, which makes me feel uncomfortable. For example, in hot weather I often feel sticky and self-conscious when I walk with friends.

Sugerencia: Clarify your choice and give a specific reason. Fix pronunciation/word choice errors ("wet season" or "rainy season", "commute"). Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting detail and avoid filler sounds.

Ejemplo: Although I like cold weather, I prefer dry weather because the rainy season makes commuting difficult; heavy rain often delays buses and makes travel inconvenient.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a specific routine (when/how often) with fewer hesitations. Improve grammar ("before I travel", "so I check it") and use a linking phrase like "because" to explain the reason clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes. I usually check the weather forecast before I travel or go on a road trip, especially a day before and on the morning of departure, because heavy rain can disrupt travel plans and increase the risk of accidents.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, specific statement about one or two effects and support them with concise reasons or examples. Avoid unfinished sentences and improve grammar ("temperatures tend to increase", "extreme weather events happen more often"). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I think climate change has caused higher temperatures and more extreme weather. For example, pollution and greenhouse gases have raised average temperatures, and this leads to more frequent heatwaves and unpredictable rainy or cold seasons.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct response and one or two clear reasons. Remove hesitations and use correct phrasing ("visit other cities", "experience snow"). Mention a specific activity to make the answer more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, especially in Australia, to experience snow and winter activities. For instance, I would love to try walking in the snow and maybe go skiing or build a snowman.

× So basically I'm based in Cambodia, so the weather is in the Tropic region, so it kinda hot and dry.

✓ So basically I'm based in Cambodia, in the tropical region, so it is kind of hot and dry.

Use 'tropical' (adjective) not 'Tropic' for region description; use 'it is' for correct verb usage and 'kind of' instead of 'kinda' in formal speech. Also include 'in the' before 'tropical region' for natural phrasing.

× But recently it's umm, where I live right now because of the climate change, I guess, uh, the weather is, tends to be cold because it right now is a cold seasons, uh, the temperature is drop.

✓ But recently, where I live because of climate change, the weather tends to be colder; right now it is the cold season and the temperature has dropped.

Use present simple 'tends to be' for habitual tendency and comparative 'colder'. Use 'cold season' (singular) and present perfect 'has dropped' to indicate a recent change. Remove filler words and fix word order for clarity.

× I personally prefer cold weather because I and myself easily get sweat when I walks in the environment that has a high temperature, especially in the hot seasons.

✓ I personally prefer cold weather because I easily sweat when I walk in a hot environment, especially during the hot season.

Subject-verb agreement: use 'I walk' (not 'walks') and 'I sweat' (not 'get sweat'). Phrase 'I and myself' is incorrect and redundant. Use 'during the hot season' for natural expression.

× So it's make me feel smell stingy when I walk with other people like my friends.

✓ So it makes me feel unpleasantly sweaty when I walk with other people, like my friends.

Use correct verb form 'makes' to agree with 'it'. 'Smell stingy' is incorrect; use 'unpleasantly sweaty' or 'like I smell bad'. Ensure adjective/adverb order is natural.

× So definitely cold weather is the.

✓ So I definitely prefer cold weather.

Original sentence is incomplete ('is the' is unfinished). Rephrase to a complete sentence that conveys preference.

× So I even though I like cold weather but I don't like wet weather UMM because raining season is so hard to commute to other places.

✓ Even though I like cold weather, I don't like wet weather because the rainy season makes commuting difficult.

Remove redundant conjunctions ('so' and 'but' together). Use 'rainy season' and 'makes commuting difficult' for correct noun and verb choices and natural word order.

× So prefer try is the best UMM at most beer for me.

✓ I prefer dry weather the most; it is best for me.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. Rewritten to express the intended meaning: preference for dry weather and that it is best for the speaker.

× Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast, umm, before I traveling to other places, uh, or I have a road trip, I normally check it because I don't want to disturb my travel.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast before I travel to other places or go on a road trip; I normally check it because I don't want my travel plans to be disrupted.

Use base verb 'travel' after 'before I' (not 'traveling'). Use 'go on a road trip' and 'disrupted' instead of 'disturb my travel'. Fix article and verb forms for grammatical correctness.

× And you know, it's, it's also high risk if we travel in the heavy rain, it can cause like accidents or something.

✓ And you know, it's also risky to travel in heavy rain; it can cause accidents.

Avoid redundancy and informal fillers. Use 'risky' (adjective) and remove 'the' before 'heavy rain' unless specifying. Simplify sentence structure and remove vague 'or something'.

× From my perspective, I can see that there are a lot of negative impacts of climate change in today's world.

✓ From my perspective, I can see that there are many negative impacts of climate change in today's world.

Use 'many' with plural countable 'impacts' (though 'a lot of' is not wrong in speech, 'many' is more formal). This corrects register rather than strict grammar but aligns with list.

× The temperature in tends to increase the degree because of the pollution and when the cold season come out, there's tend to be.

✓ Temperatures tend to increase because of pollution, and when the cold season comes, it tends to be milder or less predictable.

Fix word order and verb forms: 'temperatures tend to increase', 'comes' for third person singular, and complete the second clause which was unfinished. Use clearer phrasing to express intended meaning.

× Umm, I definitely want to visit to other city, especially in Australia.

✓ I definitely want to visit other cities, especially in Australia.

Do not use 'visit to'; use 'visit' followed by the object. Use plural 'cities' if speaking generally. 'In Australia' is acceptable.

× I would like to play and feel about the snow. What is it?

✓ I would like to play in and experience snow.

'Play and feel about the snow' is ungrammatical. Use 'play in' and 'experience' to convey the desire to enjoy snow. Remove filler question 'What is it?'.

× And Yup, because in Cambodia we don't have a winter and snow season.

✓ Yes, because in Cambodia we don't have a winter or a snowy season.

Use 'a winter' and 'a snowy season' or simply 'we don't have winter or snow' for natural phrasing. 'Yup' -> 'Yes' for formality.

× So uh, perhaps want to travel that the country that have snow.

✓ So perhaps I want to travel to a country that has snow.

Include subject 'I', use 'travel to', and 'has' for third person singular agreement with 'country'. Fix word order for clarity.