Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be clearer, accurate and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence describing typical weather, then briefly provide specific seasonal details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid fillers (umm, uh) and incorrect words (e.g. 'forces'). Use up to 3–4 short sentences.

Ejemplo: The weather in Tehran varies by season. In spring it is generally pleasant with rising temperatures and frequent rain. Summers are hot and dry, sometimes reaching 40°C, while autumn is mild and windy.

Sugerencia: Give a direct preference sentence, then support with a specific reason. Use correct temperature expressions and avoid hesitations. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: I prefer hot weather because I grew up in Ahworth where summers are very warm. Because I'm used to higher temperatures, I find heat more comfortable than cold.

Sugerencia: State your preference directly and give clear, specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and fillers. Mention one or two concrete benefits and possibly one minor drawback for balance.

Ejemplo: I prefer wet weather because it keeps the air humid and prevents my skin and hair from drying out. However, it can be inconvenient when it rains a lot and you have to carry an umbrella.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear frequency and purpose. Use simple correct structures like 'I check the forecast every morning' and explain when (before travel, before going out) and why. Remove hesitations and grammar mistakes.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning and again before I travel. I do this to decide what clothes to pack and whether I need an umbrella.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence then give 2–3 specific effects with linking words and correct vocabulary (e.g. 'greenhouse gases have increased global temperatures'). Avoid incomplete sentences and hesitations. Provide examples or consequences to show range of knowledge.

Ejemplo: Climate change has caused rising global temperatures because greenhouse gas emissions have increased. As a result, some regions experience heavier rainfall and more floods, while others suffer prolonged droughts and heatwaves.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and a specific reason, then give a concrete example of a destination or activity. Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be a refreshing change from Tehran's weather. For example, I would enjoy visiting a coastal city with cool breezes to relax and try outdoor activities like walking along the beach.

× You can't experience forces and climate in Tehran.

✓ You can experience various seasons and climates in Tehran.

The original uses 'can't' which contradicts context and misuses 'forces' for 'seasons'. Replace with 'can experience various seasons and climates' to accurately convey meaning and correct quantifier use ('various').

× In general, the weather is pleasant in a springs with graduating rising temperature and frequent rains.

✓ In general, the weather is pleasant in spring with gradually rising temperatures and frequent rain.

Use singular 'spring' (season) not 'a springs'. 'Graduating' is incorrect; use 'gradually'. 'Temperature' should be plural 'temperatures' for general trend. 'Rains' better as uncountable 'rain'. Articles adjusted accordingly.

× Summer become hot and dry and the heat exists and sometimes 40°C and UMM.

✓ Summer becomes hot and dry, and the heat reaches sometimes 40°C.

Subject 'Summer' requires verb 'becomes' (third-person singular). 'Heat exists' is unnatural; use 'the heat reaches' to indicate temperature. Remove filler 'UMM'.

× During the autumn weather, uh.

✓ During autumn, the weather is cooler and often rainy.

Original is an incomplete fragment. Provide a full clause describing autumn. Remove filler 'uh' and supply verb and object to complete sentence.

× Definitely, I prefer hot weather because I was raised and live in Ahworth, which is umm, a place, umm, with hot weather, uh, in summer and the heat extremely exceeds the uh, 15°.

✓ Definitely, I prefer hot weather because I was raised and live in Ahworth, which is a place with hot summers where the temperature often exceeds 35°C.

Fix unnecessary fillers and article use 'a place'. 'The heat extremely exceeds the 15°' is incorrect; use 'temperature often exceeds 35°C' (provide realistic value). 'Was raised and live' is acceptable but better phrased; kept tense consistent. Use modal 'often' rather than 'extremely' before 'exceeds'. Replace '15°' which is inconsistent with 'hot'.

× I think, uh, I prefer uh, wet weather because I think it's advantageous outside its disadvantages, uh, because umm, this weather can nourish, uh, your skin, uh, or your hair and uh, you know, it keep you.

✓ I prefer wet weather because, despite its disadvantages, it has advantages: it can nourish your skin and hair, and it keeps you comfortable.

Original repeats 'because' and 'I think' unnecessarily and contains filler words. 'Outside its disadvantages' is wrong; use 'despite its disadvantages'. Verb agreement: 'it keep you' should be 'it keeps you'. Clarify and streamline sentence structure.

× Yes, most of the time I uh, check weather forecast, especially when, uh, whenever I want to go somewhere, uh, for traveling, you know, uh, I used uh, to checking weather forecast to uh, where uh, or pack up my clothes.

✓ Yes, most of the time I check the weather forecast, especially whenever I want to travel; I use it to plan where to go and to pack my clothes.

Use 'check the weather forecast' (add article). 'For traveling' better as 'to travel'. 'I used to checking' is ungrammatical; use 'I use it to' or 'I check it to' followed by infinitives. Remove filler words and clarify purpose.

× Climate change has had dire impacts in different regions.

✓ Climate change has had dire impacts in various regions.

'Different regions' is not incorrect but 'various regions' sounds more natural; article use is fine. This correction improves word choice rather than fixing an article error; kept for clarity.

× The culprit is greenhouse gases have interest the overall temperature of our planet.

✓ The culprit is greenhouse gases, which have increased the overall temperature of our planet.

Run-on sentence lacking relative clause. Insert 'which' and correct verb: 'have increased' (present perfect) not 'have interest'. 'Interest' is wrong word.

× As a result, we are witnessing more rains in some areas which uh, lead to umm, flood.

✓ As a result, we are witnessing more rain in some areas, which leads to flooding.

Use uncountable 'rain' not 'rains'. Relative clause requires third-person singular verb 'leads'. 'Flood' should be noun 'flooding'. Adjust punctuation and remove filler.

× And on the other hand, uh, we can see.

✓ On the other hand, we can see droughts in other regions.

Original is an incomplete sentence. Provide contrasting complete idea (droughts) to balance the previous clause. Remove filler.

× Yes, experiencing a different climate can be very enjoyable, especially when when the weather is extremely cold in Tehran.

✓ Yes, experiencing a different climate can be very enjoyable, especially when the weather is extremely cold in Tehran.

Duplicate 'when when' is an error; remove one. Article use is fine otherwise.

× I try to travel my hometown and I was to have a relief time and, and do some uh.

✓ I try to leave my hometown to have a relaxing time and do some sightseeing.

'Travel my hometown' is incorrect; use 'leave my hometown' or 'travel from my hometown'. 'I was to have a relief time' is ungrammatical; use 'to have a relaxing time'. Clarify intent and use correct verb forms; remove filler.