Weather— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g. "I live in a city with a mild, tropical climate"), avoid contradictions ("tropical" and "four seasons" can conflict) and limit to 2–3 sentences. Add one specific detail (e.g. typical temperature or a seasonal example).

Ejemplo: I live in a city with a mild, mostly tropical climate, so temperatures stay comfortable most of the year. For example, winters are short and cool at around 18°C, while summers are warm but not extreme.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give a clear reason using linking words (because/so). Avoid repetition and fix grammar ("I prefer cold weather because..."). One supporting specific example (what you do in cold weather) will strengthen the answer.

Ejemplo: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and energetic. For example, I enjoy walking outside and exercising in cool weather, while hot days make me tired and reluctant to go out.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid filler words. State preference and give a specific reason with linking words (because/so). Clarify the relationship between temperature and dryness. Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer dry weather because it makes outdoor activities easier and more pleasant. Also, when the temperature is mild and dry, I feel relaxed and more energetic, so I can spend time outside comfortably.

Sugerencia: Be concise and precise: say how often and why. Remove hesitation and use linking words (so/so that). Provide a concrete example of when you check (morning before going out) to add specificity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning so I can plan my day. For example, I look at the forecast before I leave for work to decide whether to take an umbrella or wear a warmer coat.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence about effects, then list 2–3 specific effects with brief explanations and use linking words (for example, therefore). Avoid vague phrases and finish with a concise prediction or opinion. Correct grammar and expand slightly on consequences.

Ejemplo: I think major effects of climate change include melting glaciers, rising sea levels, and more extreme weather. For example, melting ice contributes to sea-level rise, which could flood coastal cities in the coming decades.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give reasons with linking words (because/so). Remove fillers and be specific about what you want to experience (e.g. snow, deserts, mountains) and how it relates to your interests. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy experiencing new landscapes and cultures. For instance, I want to see snowy mountains to try skiing and to compare how people live in cold environments.

× It's a mild weather in the city where I live and see tropical climate here.

✓ The weather in the city where I live is mild and has a tropical climate.

Replace the incorrect article 'a' before 'weather' with no article and rephrase word order. 'Weather' is an uncountable noun, so we do not use 'a'. Also invert subject and verb to form a grammatical clause and use 'has a tropical climate' to express the climate.

× So we have Four Seasons and we have the temperature very comfortable all of the seasons.

✓ We have four seasons, and the temperature is very comfortable in all of them.

Use lowercase 'four' and add subject-verb agreement: 'the temperature is'. Add preposition 'in' and replace 'all of the seasons' with 'in all of them' for natural phrasing.

× From my perspective called the cold weather is more comfortable than hot weather because I don't like going outside when it's hot out outside it's for me tiring and not feel comfortable.

✓ From my perspective, cold weather is more comfortable than hot weather because I don't like going outside when it's hot; it is tiring for me and I don't feel comfortable.

Remove 'called' which is incorrect here. Use commas and a semicolon to separate clauses. Replace 'it's for me tiring and not feel comfortable' with 'it is tiring for me and I don't feel comfortable' to correct word order, verb forms, and pronoun use.

× I prefer, of course, uh, dry weather. Uh, Even so, uh, I like, uh, mild temperature and the cold weather is in the hot weather, I prefer, uh, the dry day because you can go outside, feel relaxed and stay positive.

✓ I prefer, of course, dry weather. I also like mild temperatures, but when the weather is hot I prefer dry days because you can go outside, feel relaxed, and stay positive.

Remove filler 'uh' and reorganize the sentence for clarity. Use plural 'temperatures' for general statements, correct 'the cold weather is in the hot weather' to 'when the weather is hot', and use plural 'days' to match meaning. Ensure parallel list with commas.

× Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast and uh, I uh, do near this, uh, I think every day, uh, because it's uh, uh, necessary to see, uh, to then to, uh, take on appropriate and be ready for any conditions.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast; I do this almost every day because it is necessary to see the forecast and then take appropriate measures to be ready for any conditions.

Remove fillers and correct 'do near this' to 'do this almost every day'. Use 'forecast' consistently and 'take appropriate measures' rather than 'take on appropriate'. Maintain present simple tense for habitual action.

× I think the main effects of climate change in recent years is. The glaciers melting, it's very dangerous. So maybe we don't understand this now, but after 50 years it will be.

✓ I think the main effects of climate change in recent years are the melting of glaciers, which is very dangerous. Maybe we don't fully understand this now, but it will be worse after 50 years.

Change 'is' to 'are' to match plural 'effects' (subject-verb agreement). Replace fragment 'The glaciers melting' with 'the melting of glaciers' and link clauses using 'which'. Clarify final clause to 'it will be worse' for completeness and correct tense usage.

× Yes, I like to visit at the city, uh, that, uh, have different climates from where I live because I like to explore, uh, other cultures, natures climates.

✓ Yes, I like to visit cities that have different climates from where I live because I like to explore other cultures and natural climates.

Remove incorrect preposition 'at' and use plural 'cities' to match general preference. Use 'that have' (plural agreement) and replace 'natures climates' with 'natural climates'. Remove fillers.

× And for me it's uh, uh, they like a hobby and I always try to explore new settings.

✓ For me, traveling is a hobby, and I always try to explore new places.

'They like a hobby' is ungrammatical and unclear. Clarify the subject as 'traveling' or 'visiting new places' and state 'is a hobby'. Replace 'new settings' with the more natural 'new places'. Remove fillers.