Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且略显冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，同时使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks during work or study breaks because I feel very hungry before meals. However, I try to avoid snacks since they are often high in calories.

Sugerencia: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但部分表达如“Children's Health”应注意大小写和语法。建议使用更多连接词使逻辑更流畅。

Ejemplo: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because many contain high levels of sugar, salt, and unhealthy fats. Moreover, excessive snacking can lead to weight gain and negatively affect children's health.

Sugerencia: 回答直接且内容丰富，但句子之间缺少连接词，建议使用连接词增强连贯性，同时注意句子简洁。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. I used to save my pocket money to buy them, even though my parents didn't allow it. Because I enjoyed junk food a lot, I was quite chubby back then.

Sugerencia: 回答内容丰富但表达略显口语化且不够连贯。建议避免口语化表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意词汇准确性。

Ejemplo: I really like sweet snacks such as chocolate and rock sugar. In fact, I also enjoy dishes that use sugar as a seasoning because it enhances the umami flavor. However, I find it interesting that many Chinese people generally do not prefer sweet dishes.

× I feel super starving before the formal meal time.

✓ I feel very hungry before the formal meal time.

“super starving”是错误的用法，starving是形容极度饥饿的形容词，前面不需要加“super”，应使用“very hungry”来表达“非常饿”。

× They are detrimental to people, especially to Children's Health and growth.

✓ They are detrimental to people, especially to children's health and growth.

“Children's Health”中的“Health”不应大写，且“children's”应为小写，表示“儿童的健康”，英文中专有名词以外的普通名词不应大写。

× Even my parents didn't allow me.

✓ Even though my parents didn't allow me.

句子缺少连词“though”来连接前后句，使句子完整，表达“即使我父母不允许我”。

× You know, not only desserts and sugar.

✓ You know, not only desserts but also sugar.

“not only”后面应跟“but also”构成固定搭配，表示“不仅……而且……”，缺少“but also”使句子不完整。

× which can make dishes more umami.

✓ which can make dishes more flavorful.

“umami”是名词，不能直接用作形容词修饰“dishes”，应使用“more flavorful”或“more savory”来表达“更美味”。