Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same information.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks in the evening while taking a stroll in the park because it's a perfect time to relax and enjoy my food.

Sugerencia: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Use clearer vocabulary and correct grammar to express your opinion. Also, provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they often contain too much oil and can discourage physical activity. Therefore, I try to limit my snack intake to stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly by stating your habits and reasons, and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I often ate snacks, but not too frequently because I knew they weren't healthy. I usually avoided them, but sometimes I gave in to cravings.

Sugerencia: Your answer contains unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Be specific about the snacks you like and avoid confusing words. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

Ejemplo: I usually enjoy eating French fries and burgers. Additionally, when I go out, I like to try different snacks such as Italian and Chinese dishes.

× Actually, daily evening time I like to eat snacks and that time is perfect for eat snacks.

✓ Actually, I like to eat snacks in the evening daily, and that time is perfect for eating snacks.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions. 'Daily evening time' should be 'in the evening daily' to follow English syntax. Also, 'perfect for eat snacks' should be 'perfect for eating snacks' because 'for' is followed by a gerund.

× Actually, daily evening time I like to eat snacks and that time is perfect for eat snacks.

✓ Actually, I like to eat snacks in the evening daily, and that time is perfect for eating snacks.

After the preposition 'for', the verb should be in the '-ing' form (gerund). Therefore, 'eat' should be corrected to 'eating'.

× I always try to enjoy snacks in this time and that time I am going to stroll in the park and I eat snacks and strolling.

✓ I always try to enjoy snacks at this time. At that time, I go for a stroll in the park, eat snacks, and stroll.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. It needs to be split into clearer sentences and use consistent verb tenses. 'I am going to stroll' should be 'I go for a stroll' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'eat snacks and strolling' is incorrect; 'strolling' should be parallel to 'eat snacks' as a verb phrase.

× I don't think eating snack is healthy for me and others because snacks are too much wily and it is a chance to avoid game.

✓ I don't think eating snacks is healthy for me and others because snacks are too oily and it can cause people to avoid exercise.

'Eating snack' should be 'eating snacks' (plural). 'Too much wily' is incorrect; likely intended 'too oily'. 'It is a chance to avoid game' is unclear; 'game' should be 'exercise' or 'physical activity'. The sentence needs clearer quantifiers and vocabulary.

× So I always try to limited eating snacks.

✓ So I always try to limit eating snacks.

'Try to limited' is incorrect; after 'try to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'limit' instead of 'limited'.

× And this is not like a homemade for fast food, this is always bad for health.

✓ And this is not like homemade food; fast food is always bad for health.

'Not like a homemade for fast food' is unclear. 'Homemade' is an adjective and should modify 'food'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct adjective use.

× Yes I often eat snacks when I'm young but not always.

✓ Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young, but not always.

The question is about past habits, so past tense 'ate' and 'was' should be used instead of present tense 'eat' and 'I'm'.

× Sometimes I try to eat snacks because snacks are not healthy for our body and it is not well in for our daily life so I always avoid it and sometimes I have craving that time I eat.

✓ Sometimes I try to eat snacks, but snacks are not healthy for our body and are not good for our daily life, so I always avoid them. Sometimes, when I have cravings, I eat them.

'Not well in for our daily life' is incorrect; 'not good for our daily life' is correct. 'Have craving that time I eat' is unclear; it should be 'when I have cravings, I eat them'. Also, pronouns should agree in number.

× Most of the time I usually like to eat French fry or burgers and other snacks.

✓ Most of the time, I usually like to eat French fries, burgers, and other snacks.

'French fry' should be plural 'French fries' as it refers to multiple pieces. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× But mostly I love friends right?

✓ But mostly, I love fries, right?

'Friends' is incorrect in context; likely meant 'fries' (French fries). This is a pronunciation or spelling error affecting meaning.

× And I always try to eat that and when I'm going outside and I buy other snacks that is like Italian and also Chinese type.

✓ I always try to eat those, and when I go outside, I buy other snacks like Italian and Chinese types.

The sentence is run-on and awkward. 'That is like Italian and also Chinese type' should be 'snacks like Italian and Chinese types'. Also, 'when I'm going outside' should be 'when I go outside' for habitual action.