Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, neden gece atıştırdığınızı daha açık ve net bir şekilde belirtmelisiniz. Cümlenizi daha kısa ve anlamlı tutarak, gereksiz tekrarları önleyin.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks at night because I have a bad habit of snacking late. It's something I want to change.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizi daha açık ve anlaşılır hale getirmek için yapıyı basitleştirin ve karşılaştırmayı net ifade edin. Ayrıca, neden sağlıklı olmadığını daha spesifik açıklayın.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think eating snacks is healthy because vegetables and other natural foods are better for the body.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizi daha düzgün ve akıcı hale getirmek için zaman ifadelerini net kullanın ve cümleleri daha kısa tutun. Ayrıca, sağlıklı yaşam tercihinizi daha açık ifade edin.

Ejemplo: I used to eat a lot of snacks when I was between 10 and 20 years old. However, now I prefer vegetables because I am living a healthier life.

Sugerencia: Cümlenizde tekrarları azaltın ve duygusal bağınızı daha net ifade edin. Ayrıca, neden bu atıştırmalıkları sevdiğinizi daha açık anlatın.

Ejemplo: I like eating chips and chocolates because they remind me of my childhood and bring back happy memories.

× I usually eat them when the night comes 'cause I have a condition that like very bad habit so I am eating them at night.

✓ I usually eat them when night comes because I have a condition that is a very bad habit, so I eat them at night.

The phrase 'that like very bad habit' is incorrect; it should be 'that is a very bad habit' to properly describe the condition. Also, 'I am eating them at night' is better expressed as 'I eat them at night' to match the habitual action indicated by 'usually'.

× No, I don't think so because I don't think it's a really healthy option to provide your body to comparing others vegetables or something else.

✓ No, I don't think so because I don't think it's a really healthy option to provide your body compared to other vegetables or something else.

The phrase 'to provide your body to comparing others vegetables' is incorrect. The correct form is 'to provide your body compared to other vegetables' to express comparison properly. Also, 'others vegetables' should be 'other vegetables'.

× This I was eating a lot of snacks when I was at, I don't know like 10 to 20.

✓ I used to eat a lot of snacks when I was, I don't know, like 10 to 20 years old.

The original sentence uses 'was eating' which is continuous past tense but the context suggests a habitual past action, so 'used to eat' is more appropriate. Also, 'when I was at' is incomplete; adding 'years old' clarifies the age range.

× But I I am getting more stepping a more healthy life.

✓ But I am adopting a healthier lifestyle.

The phrase 'I am getting more stepping a more healthy life' is ungrammatical. 'Adopting a healthier lifestyle' is a clearer and grammatically correct way to express the intended meaning.

× So I am preferring veggies.

✓ So I prefer veggies.

The verb 'prefer' is a stative verb and is generally not used in the continuous form. Therefore, 'I prefer veggies' is correct.

× I like chips, like chocolates, chocolates.

✓ I like chips and chocolates.

Repeating 'chocolates' is redundant. Also, 'chips' and 'chocolates' are plural nouns and should be connected properly with 'and'.

× It's important to me, 'cause, you know, it's bring me back to my childhood.

✓ It's important to me because, you know, it brings me back to my childhood.

The verb 'bring' should be in the third person singular present tense 'brings' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formal correctness.

× So it's, it's memorizing something in my brain.

✓ So it reminds me of something from my childhood.

'Memorizing' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is that it triggers a memory. 'Reminds me of' is the correct expression. Also, 'something in my brain' is unnatural; 'something from my childhood' is clearer.