Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific details using linking words to make your response more coherent. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. For example, you can say: "I usually eat snacks when I go to the cinema or travel. However, my mom often tells me that snacks are unhealthy, so I try to eat them in small amounts."

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks when I go to the cinema or travel. However, my mom often tells me that snacks are unhealthy, so I try to eat them in small amounts.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas. Avoid repeating phrases and try to be more fluent. For example: "I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they contain a lot of sugar. However, I enjoy sweet snacks, so I try to eat them in moderation."

Ejemplo: I don't think eating snacks is healthy because they contain a lot of sugar. However, I enjoy sweet snacks, so I try to eat them in moderation.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear grammar and sentence structure. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. For example: "I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because my mom didn't allow it. She believed that snacks contain too much sugar and could make children sick."

Ejemplo: I didn't often eat snacks when I was young because my mom didn't allow it. She believed that snacks contain too much sugar and could make children sick.

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly and clearly. Avoid unclear or confusing phrases. Use specific examples and linking words to make your answer more natural. For example: "I like to eat snacks such as Takis, sweets, and lollipops. I enjoy a variety of snacks because they taste good."

Ejemplo: I like to eat snacks such as Takis, sweets, and lollipops. I enjoy a variety of snacks because they taste good.

× My mom always say that the snacks are not healthy.

✓ My mom always says that the snacks are not healthy.

The subject 'My mom' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'says' to agree in number and person. Using 'say' is incorrect here because it does not match the singular subject.

× I usually eat snacks when I go to cinema or or when I go to a trip.

✓ I usually eat snacks when I go to the cinema or when I go on a trip.

The correct preposition for 'cinema' is 'to the cinema' with the definite article 'the'. For 'trip', the correct preposition is 'on a trip', not 'to a trip'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'cinema'.

× I can eat little little after.

✓ I can eat a little later.

The phrase 'little little' is incorrect and redundant. The correct quantifier is 'a little' to indicate a small amount, and 'later' is the proper adverb to indicate time after something.

× because because there it contains so much sugar.

✓ because it contains so much sugar.

The phrase 'there it contains' is incorrect. The word 'there' is unnecessary and should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I will try my best to eat little bit.

✓ I will try my best to eat a little bit.

The phrase 'little bit' needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct when indicating a small amount.

× my mom don't let me didn't let me to eat the snacks

✓ my mom didn't let me eat the snacks

The sentence incorrectly mixes present tense 'don't let' and past tense 'didn't let'. The correct past tense form is 'didn't let'. Also, 'to eat' should be 'eat' after 'let'.

× because the young kids snacks will let them to be sick

✓ because the snacks will make young kids sick

The phrase 'let them to be sick' is incorrect. The verb 'let' is not used this way. Instead, 'make' is appropriate to indicate causing sickness. Also, 'young kids snacks' is awkward; 'snacks' is sufficient.

× That's why kids kids are aren't allowed to eat snacks.

✓ That's why kids aren't allowed to eat snacks.

The repetition 'kids kids' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'kids'. Also, 'are aren't' is incorrect; only 'aren't' is needed for the negative form.

× Are you surely like Takis or some sweet and teas?

✓ Do you really like Takis or some sweets and teas?

The original sentence has incorrect word order and word choice. 'Are you surely like' is incorrect; the correct question form is 'Do you really like'. Also, 'sweet' should be plural 'sweets' to match 'some', and 'teas' is acceptable but should be plural.