Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'like' and repeated words such as 'I I'. Also, use singular form 'popcorn' instead of 'popcorns'. Make your answer more concise and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding supporting details with linking words.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks in the evening. For example, I enjoy munching on popcorn or chips while watching TV or reading a book, as it feels like a little treat for myself.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation sounds like 'umm' and repeated words. Use linking words such as 'however' to connect ideas. Also, use correct comparative form 'healthier' instead of 'more healthier'. Be more specific and concise in your explanation.

Ejemplo: I don't think most snacks I eat are healthy because they are often fried or too salty and sweet. However, I sometimes choose healthier options like dry fruits, which are lighter and better for my health.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition such as 'timing specific timings' and unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain. Be more precise and fluent in your response.

Ejemplo: When I was young, my mother closely monitored my snacking habits. Therefore, I could only eat snacks at specific times, and they were mostly healthy snacks provided by her.

Sugerencia: Avoid redundancy like 'I like to try new things' and 'I like usually try'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid vague endings like 'etcetera' and be more specific.

Ejemplo: I enjoy trying new snacks, especially different types of candies and chocolates. Additionally, I love eating fruits and nuts as healthy alternatives.

× I I like munching on popcorns or chips while watching TV or reading a book.

✓ I like munching on popcorn or chips while watching TV or reading a book.

The word 'popcorn' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form. Saying 'popcorns' is incorrect. Use 'popcorn' without 's' to refer to the snack in general.

× sometimes I try to have umm, more healthier version of uh, snacks which are umm, which are also lighter for my health.

✓ sometimes I try to have a healthier version of snacks which are also lighter for my health.

The phrase 'more healthier' is incorrect because 'healthier' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant. Also, 'a' is needed before 'healthier version' as it is a singular countable noun.

× I like munching on popcorns or chips while watching TV or reading a book.

✓ I like munching on popcorn or chips while watching TV or reading a book.

As explained earlier, 'popcorn' is uncountable and should not be pluralized. 'Chips' is plural and correct here.

× I like usually try new types of candies and chocolates, but I also love eating other fruits and nuts etcetera.

✓ I usually like to try new types of candy and chocolate, but I also love eating other fruits and nuts etcetera.

The words 'candy' and 'chocolate' are generally uncountable when referring to the substance or types, so plural forms 'candies' and 'chocolates' are less common here. Also, the word order 'I like usually try' is awkward; 'I usually like to try' is better.

× I like usually try new types of candies and chocolates, but I also love eating other fruits and nuts etcetera.

✓ I usually like to try new types of candy and chocolate, but I also love eating other fruits and nuts etcetera.

The original sentence has incorrect word order. 'I like usually try' is not grammatically correct. The correct order is 'I usually like to try' to express habitual action properly.