Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and using more natural phrasing. For example, instead of "after the noon," say "in the afternoon." Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly and using linking words to connect sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually eat snacks between meals, especially in the afternoon. For instance, I often have a protein bar to keep my energy levels up. This helps me feel refreshed and ready to focus on any activities I need to do.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains some awkward phrasing and grammatical mistakes, such as "more healthier" and "in moderation having nutrients." Try to use clearer, more natural expressions and link your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I believe eating snacks can be unhealthy if they contain a lot of sugar or fat. However, I usually choose healthier options like fruits and nuts because they provide essential nutrients and help maintain my overall well-being when eaten in moderation.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make the response more coherent. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and try to be more concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to eat snacks every day when I was young. Although they were somewhat unhealthy, I found them delicious. I often craved quick snacks like instant noodles and chocolates because they were easy to prepare and convenient to eat whenever I felt hungry between meals.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but ends abruptly and contains some grammatical errors, such as "focus on more on my health" and incomplete ending "to make." Try to complete your thoughts fully and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: It depends on my mood, but I usually prefer snacks that are quick and easy to prepare, like instant noodles, chocolate, and potato chips. I enjoy these because they satisfy my cravings and are convenient when I'm busy. However, lately, I have been trying to focus more on my health, so I sometimes choose healthier snacks like nuts and fruits instead.

× I like to reward myself few healthy snacks such as an protein bar to keep my energy level up.

✓ I like to reward myself with a few healthy snacks such as a protein bar to keep my energy level up.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'with' after 'reward myself'. Also, 'few' should be preceded by 'a' to indicate a small number, and 'an protein bar' is incorrect because 'protein' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a' should be used instead of 'an'.

× Eating snacks make me feel more refreshed and ready to focus on any kind of activities that I'm about to do or perform.

✓ Eating snacks makes me feel more refreshed and ready to focus on any kind of activities that I'm about to do or perform.

The subject 'Eating snacks' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number.

× especially after the noon.

✓ especially after noon.

'Noon' is a time of day and does not require the definite article 'the' before it.

× I do usually try to choose snacks that are more healthier like fruits or any kind of nuts, which provide essential nutrients and help maintain my overall well-being in moderation having nutrients.

✓ I usually try to choose snacks that are healthier, like fruits or any kind of nuts, which provide essential nutrients and help maintain my overall well-being when eaten in moderation.

'More healthier' is incorrect because 'healthier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is redundant. Also, the phrase 'in moderation having nutrients' is awkward and unclear; it should be 'when eaten in moderation' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Though they are a bit unhealthy, I found them quite delicious.

✓ Though they were a bit unhealthy, I found them quite delicious.

The sentence refers to past time ('when I was young'), so 'are' should be changed to 'were' to maintain past tense consistency.

× These snacks were my go to choice whenever I felt hungry between meals.

✓ These snacks were my go-to choice whenever I felt hungry between meals.

'Go to' as an adjective should be hyphenated to 'go-to' to correctly modify 'choice'.

× I often craved quick snacks like instant noodles and chocolates because they were easy to prep and I could eat them without any effort.

✓ I often craved quick snacks like instant noodles and chocolates because they were easy to prepare and I could eat them without any effort.

'Prep' is a noun or informal verb; in formal speech, 'prepare' is more appropriate as the verb form.

× However, I have been lately trying to focus on more on my health, so sometimes I choose healthier snacks like nuts and fruits to make.

✓ However, I have lately been trying to focus more on my health, so sometimes I choose healthier snacks like nuts and fruits to eat.

The adverb 'lately' should be placed after 'have' and before 'been' for correct placement. Also, 'focus on more on' is redundant; it should be 'focus more on'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'to make' which is incomplete; 'to eat' fits the context better.