Snacks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise and directly structured: start with a clear topic sentence stating when you snack, then give one or two brief supporting details. Correct tense and article errors, and avoid repetition (e.g., "usually" and "I did it while I eat something"). Use linking words like "because" to explain the reason.

Ejemplo: I usually have snacks while I'm writing my thesis because I work long hours as a research assistant. For example, I often eat a small sandwich or fruit during afternoon writing sessions to keep my energy up.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason and one specific example. Avoid hesitations and repetitions ("I need, I need"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" and suggest how you manage it (e.g., set limits, choose healthier options).

Ejemplo: I don't think it's very healthy because many snacks are high in sugar and fat. Therefore, I try to limit myself to one small portion a day and choose healthier options like nuts or yogurt to avoid overeating.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence ("No, I rarely snacked when I was young") and give a concise comparison with now using linking words like "but" or "whereas". Correct grammar (past tense) and avoid awkward phrasing.

Ejemplo: No, I rarely snacked when I was young. I used to eat full meals frequently—sometimes four times a day—whereas now, as an adult, I snack more often between meals while working.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, concise description of the snack and correct word choice and grammar (e.g., "particular snack," not "snake"). Use linking words to add one specific detail about why you like it (taste, texture) and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: My favorite snack right now is a crispy chocolate-filled sandwich biscuit. I like it because it combines crunchy texture with a sweet cream filling, and I usually enjoy one with a cup of tea in the afternoon.

× Well, I usually eat snacks while I write my thesis since now I'm working as a research assistant so I spent a lot of time typing with my laptops and usually I did it while I eat something.

✓ Well, I usually eat snacks while I write my thesis. Now I'm working as a research assistant, so I spend a lot of time typing on my laptop, and I usually do it while I eat something.

Multiple present-tense consistency and sentence-structure problems: 'spend' should be present tense to match 'I'm working' and 'usually eat'; 'laptops' should be 'my laptop' (singular) and use 'on' for typing; 'did it while I eat' mixes past and present—use 'do it while I eat'. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× Actually, I think it's not healthy, but I need, I need to maintain my self-control so that I don't eat it excessively. And yeah, to know the limit.

✓ Actually, I think it's not healthy, but I need to maintain my self-control so that I don't eat excessively and know my limits.

Simplify modal and verb phrases: remove the repeated 'I need'; 'eat it excessively' is awkward—use 'eat excessively'; 'to know the limit' should be 'know my limits'. Combine fragments into one coherent sentence.

× I don't think so, I am eating more snacks when I already as an adult. When I was young I rarely eat snacks but I eat a lot of main course like 4 times a day.

✓ I don't think so. I have been eating more snacks since I became an adult. When I was young, I rarely ate snacks, but I ate full meals about four times a day.

Tense and aspect corrections: use present perfect continuous or present perfect ('have been eating') to describe a change that started in the past and continues. 'When I was young' requires past tense 'ate'. 'Main course' is better expressed as 'full meals'; write numbers in words or 'about four times a day' for clarity.

× Well, there is one particulars particular snake that I currently eating. Eat it often.

✓ Well, there is one particular snack that I'm currently eating. I eat it often.

Spelling and article use: 'particulars particular snake' contains typos: should be 'one particular snack'. Use contraction 'I'm currently eating' for present continuous. Separate into two sentences and correct 'Eat it often' to 'I eat it often' (include subject).

× It is like a sandwich sandwich snack layered with a chocolate, but it's crispy and there is a cream within it.

✓ It's like a sandwich snack layered with chocolate; it's crispy and has a cream filling.

Remove repeated word 'sandwich sandwich' and use 'chocolate' without article. 'There is a cream within it' is wordy—use 'has a cream filling'. Use a semicolon or two clauses to join related ideas concisely.