Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it can be improved by avoiding repetition and making the sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person, especially in difficult situations, because I remain calm and focus on finding better solutions to my problems.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit unclear and incomplete. Try to be more specific and avoid vague phrases like 'some other reasons'. Also, correct grammar and avoid repetition for clarity.

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when I put in my best effort but fail to achieve my goal due to my own shortcomings or external factors. Additionally, I get impatient when I am eagerly waiting to receive something I really like.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect your feelings and actions clearly.

Ejemplo: When I have to do something for a long time, I often feel confused and bored; however, I motivate myself to complete the task confidently and give my best effort.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to structure your answer clearly with correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words to contrast different situations.

Ejemplo: As a nurse, I often have to perform tasks quickly due to limited time; however, when providing care to patients, I must remain calm and act patiently.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to show contrast between past and present.

Ejemplo: Yes, absolutely. When I was a child, I was unaware of many important aspects of life, but now I am more mature and understand what is essential to handle during my lifetime.

× Yes, I always try to be patient in difficult situations as well and I always try to remain calm and find better solution for my problems.

✓ Yes, I always try to be patient in difficult situations as well and I always try to remain calm and find better solutions for my problems.

The word 'solution' should be plural 'solutions' because it refers to multiple problems, so the plural form is appropriate here.

× When I try my best but I didn't achieve my goal because of some lack of qualities and because of some other reasons, then that thing make me feel impatient and the other thing is when I am about to get my favorite thing for for instance.

✓ When I try my best but I don't achieve my goal because of some lack of qualities and because of some other reasons, then that thing makes me feel impatient and the other thing is when I am about to get my favorite thing, for instance.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Didn't achieve' should be 'don't achieve' to match the present tense context. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'that thing'. Additionally, 'for for' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'for'.

× After doing a task for a longer time, I often feel confused and bored, but I always motivate myself that I should complete it with with confidence and with full motivation and always give my best.

✓ After doing a task for a long time, I often feel confused and bored, but I always motivate myself that I should complete it with confidence and full motivation and always give my best.

The phrase 'for a longer time' is better expressed as 'for a long time' to indicate duration. Also, 'with with' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'with'.

× As being a nurse, I often I have to do task in a hurry because we have limited time since sometimes situation is like that that we don't have enough time to be patient. But in some task like providing care to the patient, we have to remain calm and we have to took action with. We have to take action with.

✓ As a nurse, I often have to do tasks in a hurry because we have limited time since sometimes the situation is such that we don't have enough time to be patient. But in some tasks like providing care to the patient, we have to remain calm and we have to take action.

'As being a nurse' is incorrect; it should be 'As a nurse'. 'Do task' should be plural 'do tasks' to match general meaning. 'Sometimes situation is like that that' is awkward; corrected to 'sometimes the situation is such that'. 'We have to took action with' is incorrect; 'took' is past tense, should be 'take'. The phrase 'with' at the end is unnecessary and removed.

× Yes, absolutely. When I was a child I was not aware of a few things that are needed in during the lifetime. But nowadays I am well matured and I know what are what things are important to deal with during lifetime.

✓ Yes, absolutely. When I was a child I was not aware of a few things that are needed during lifetime. But nowadays I am mature and I know which things are important to deal with during lifetime.

'Well matured' is incorrect; 'mature' is the correct adjective. 'What are what things are' is redundant and incorrect; corrected to 'which things are'. Also, 'in during the lifetime' is incorrect; 'during lifetime' is sufficient.