Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure clear na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke simple r clear korte, ar linking words use korun jate answer ta natural lage. Apni example dite paren jemon, 'I try to listen carefully and then solve the problem if possible. Even if someone disagrees, I remain patient.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. When someone talks to me, I listen carefully and try to understand their point. If possible, I help to solve the problem. Even if someone disagrees with me, I try to stay calm and patient.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e confusion ache karon apni bolchen apni patient na, kintu question chilo ki apnake impatient kore. Apni chesta korun direct answer dite, ar filler words (uh, umm) komate. Apni specific example dite paren jemon, 'I feel impatient when I face difficult problems and sometimes I get angry, so I try to avoid those situations.'

Ejemplo: I feel impatient when I face difficult situations. Sometimes I cannot control my anger, so I try to avoid those moments to stay calm.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu grammar r sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni chesta korun linking words use korte ar sentence gulo ke clear korte. Apni specific example dite paren jemon, 'I enjoy doing activities for a long time, like studying for 3 to 4 hours without breaks. Also, I never feel bored watching movies or videos.'

Ejemplo: I enjoy doing activities for a long time. For example, as a student, I can study for 3 or 4 hours without taking a break. Also, when I watch movies or entertainment videos, I never feel bored.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu word choice r grammar error ache. Apni chesta korun clear ar direct answer dite. 'Passion' er jaygay 'patient' use korte hobe. Apni example dite paren jemon, 'As a student, I need to be patient because studying requires focus and time. I enjoy studying attentively.'

Ejemplo: I am not working yet, but as a student, I need to be patient. Studying requires patience and focus, and I enjoy studying carefully to learn well.

Sugerencia: Apnar answer e kichu unclear words ache (e.g., 'hernias key'), ar sentence gulo incomplete. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte. Apni example dite paren jemon, 'When I was a child, I used to get angry easily. But now, I am more patient and can control my emotions better.'

Ejemplo: To be honest, I was very angry when I was a child. But now, I am a patient person and can control my feelings well.

× Whenever someone told me any kind of things that I'm, I just listen regarding this topic.

✓ Whenever someone tells me any kind of things, I just listen regarding this topic.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'told' instead of the present tense 'tells' to describe a habitual action. In English, when talking about regular or habitual actions, the present simple tense should be used. So, 'told' should be corrected to 'tells'.

× Whenever someone told me any kind of things that I'm, I just listen regarding this topic.

✓ Whenever someone tells me any kind of thing, I just listen regarding this topic.

The phrase 'any kind of things' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun. The correct phrase is 'any kind of thing'.

× And after that if I try, if I if I possible, I try to solve it.

✓ And after that, if I can, I try to solve it.

The phrase 'if I if I possible' is incorrect and unclear. The correct modal verb 'can' should be used to express ability or possibility. Also, the sentence structure is improved by removing redundancy.

× And sometimes when someone disagree with me, that time I also try to be patient.

✓ And sometimes when someone disagrees with me, I also try to be patient.

The verb 'disagree' should be in the third person singular form 'disagrees' to agree with the singular subject 'someone'. Also, 'that time' is unnecessary and can be omitted for clarity.

× Whenever I face any kind of difficult situation, uh, I just try to patient, but uh, sometimes I don't control my anger issues.

✓ Whenever I face any kind of difficult situation, I just try to be patient, but sometimes I can't control my anger issues.

The phrase 'try to patient' is incorrect; the verb 'try' should be followed by 'to be' plus adjective. Also, 'don't control' is incorrect here; 'can't control' better expresses inability.

× Uh, that time I just avoid this situation.

✓ At that time, I just avoid the situation.

The phrase 'that time' should be 'at that time' to correctly indicate a specific time. Also, 'this situation' should be 'the situation' to refer to a specific known situation.

× I enjoyed basically when I do long time many kind of activities like as a student I'm starting long time around 3 or 4 hour without pause.

✓ I basically enjoy doing many kinds of activities for a long time. As a student, I study for around 3 or 4 hours without a pause.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'enjoyed' instead of present tense 'enjoy' for habitual action. Also, 'do long time many kind of activities' is ungrammatical; it should be 'doing many kinds of activities for a long time'. 'Starting long time' is incorrect; 'study for around 3 or 4 hours' is correct. 'Hour' should be plural 'hours' and 'without pause' should be 'without a pause'.

× So I that time I enjoyed as well as whenever I see any kind of movie or entertainment videos that time I also never feel like boring.

✓ So at that time, I enjoy it. Also, whenever I watch any kind of movie or entertainment videos, I never feel bored.

'I enjoyed' should be 'I enjoy' for habitual action. 'That time' should be 'at that time'. 'Whenever I see' should be 'whenever I watch' for movies/videos. 'Never feel like boring' is incorrect; it should be 'never feel bored' because 'boring' describes the thing, 'bored' describes the feeling.

× I'm not a job holder but as a student I think it's really important to be patient because if you're not passion then you will never study properly.

✓ I'm not employed, but as a student, I think it's really important to be patient because if you're not passionate, then you will never study properly.

'Job holder' is unnatural; 'employed' is better. 'If you're not passion' is incorrect; 'passion' is a noun, the adjective 'passionate' should be used to describe a person.

× So in my profession as a student, I'm really passionate about my study and I enjoyed whenever I study attentively.

✓ So in my role as a student, I'm really passionate about my studies and I enjoy studying attentively.

'Profession' is not appropriate for a student; 'role' is better. 'I enjoyed' should be 'I enjoy' for habitual action. 'My study' should be plural 'my studies'. 'Whenever I study attentively' is better expressed as 'studying attentively'.

× Frankly speaking, hernias key. That time I was really anger and now I'm really patient person and that moment was really incredible, incredible, incredible.

✓ Frankly speaking, at that time I was really angry, and now I'm a really patient person. That moment was really incredible.

'Hernias key' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; omitted in correction. 'I was really anger' is incorrect; 'anger' is a noun, 'angry' is the adjective needed. 'I'm really patient person' needs an article: 'a really patient person'. Repetition of 'incredible' is unnecessary.

× But in this moment I was, I am really controlled.

✓ But at this moment, I am really in control.

'In this moment' should be 'at this moment'. 'I was, I am really controlled' is incorrect; 'controlled' is an adjective meaning being controlled by others. The correct phrase is 'I am really in control' to express self-control.