Patience— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar by using correct forms like 'patient' instead of 'patience' when describing yourself. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I consider myself a patient person now. A few years ago, I wasn't as patient, but with age and life experience, I've learned to be more patient.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and filler words like 'uh'. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence. Also, be more specific about what 'over smart' means in this context.

Ejemplo: I usually feel impatient when people don't follow rules or try to rush their work carelessly. For example, if a colleague ignores procedures to finish tasks quickly, it frustrates me because it affects the team's performance.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words like 'however' to connect contrasting ideas. Also, avoid repeating the same phrases and improve grammar for clarity.

Ejemplo: I feel exhausted and frustrated when I have to work for a long time, especially if the tasks are repetitive. However, I can manage my energy better if the work varies throughout the day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and is somewhat unclear. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and be more specific about how your job requires patience.

Ejemplo: Yes, my job as a supervisor at a pizza store in Brampton requires a lot of patience. For instance, I often deal with customers who complain or request refunds without valid reasons, so I need to stay calm and professional.

Sugerencia: Your answer is on topic but contains grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve flow. Be more specific about experiences that helped you become more patient.

Ejemplo: I was less patient as a child, often losing my temper quickly. However, through life experiences and my job dealing with many customers daily, I've learned to be much more patient and professional.

× I learn how to become patience in life.

✓ I learn how to become patient in life.

The word 'patience' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe the state of being. 'Patient' is the correct adjective form to use in this context.

× If you ask this question a few years back, then I answer definitely no at that time.

✓ If you had asked this question a few years back, then I would have answered definitely no at that time.

The sentence refers to a past hypothetical situation, so the past perfect tense 'had asked' and conditional perfect 'would have answered' are required for correct subject-verb agreement and tense usage.

× when someone intentionally don't follow rules at regulations

✓ when someone intentionally doesn't follow rules and regulations

The subject 'someone' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Also, 'at regulations' is incorrect; it should be 'and regulations' to correctly connect the two nouns.

× try to do work in hurry at that time

✓ try to do work in a hurry at that time

The phrase 'in hurry' is missing the article 'a'. The correct expression is 'in a hurry'.

× sometimes we lose our patient but our job required to be to become more.

✓ sometimes we lose our patience but our job requires us to become more patient.

'Patient' is an adjective, but here the noun 'patience' is needed. Also, 'required to be to become more' is awkward; it should be 'requires us to become more patient' for correct verb form and pronoun usage.

× my job required to be more become more patience

✓ my job requires me to be more patient

The subject 'my job' is singular, so the verb should be 'requires'. Also, 'required to be more become more patience' is incorrect; it should be 'requires me to be more patient'.

× If I'm not mistaken, when I was young I lose my patient within a short period of time

✓ If I'm not mistaken, when I was young I lost my patience within a short period of time

The verb 'lose' should be in the past tense 'lost' to match the past time frame. Also, 'patient' is incorrect here; the noun 'patience' is needed.

× My job required a lot of patience because we have to deal with a lot of customers in a day which require us to be calm or professional during.

✓ My job requires a lot of patience because we have to deal with a lot of customers in a day, which requires us to be calm and professional during that time.

The verb 'required' should be present tense 'requires' to match the ongoing nature of the job. Also, 'which require' should be 'which requires' to agree with the singular noun 'a lot of customers' as a collective noun. The sentence was incomplete and needed 'that time' for clarity.